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bhoomi

@frozen.devil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#131

i'll need tym aru.. 2-3 days n den i'll updt!!

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Rumjhum Laha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#132

okk yar update soon...btw u didn't comment on my ehsaas😭

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bhoomi

@frozen.devil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#133

aru,

m so srry dear... i'll surely read it when i get tym. how can i miss parts f 1 of my fav ffs?

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bhoomi

@frozen.devil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#134

Originally posted by: pretii171
gud article1338356931984

its n ff ( fan fiction ), not an article. 😊

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bhoomi

@frozen.devil

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#135

friendz, don kill me. :P, ders a small or rather big change 2 make in d ff.

m replacing Nidhi Tikoo playing Dhara Shekhavat by Sonia Sharma.

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#136

but ye sonia sharma kis show mein ati hai??mujhe yaad nai a raha

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bhoomi

@frozen.devil

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Posted: 13 years ago

#137

saibai in VS!! aru tum kaise bhool gayi?😊

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Rumjhum Laha

@Patrarekha

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Posted: 13 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: frozen.devil
saibai in VS!! aru tum kaise bhool gayi?😊

omg she is looking so different yar😛..but so beautiful..far better than nidhi😆

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bhoomi

@frozen.devil

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#139

thnx aru... i thought every1 will not lyk d change. n she also suits ashish! 😊

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bhoomi

@frozen.devil

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#140

Chapter 8 -

Ashish's house -

Ashish - Tume yahan kisne bulaya?? 😕 yahan zara sambhaalke chalna, kahi gir na jao! 😆

Dhara - Excuse me... 😡 😡... mujhe gussa mat dilao... vaise kaun ho tum? ladke ke baap? 😆 😆

Ashish - Kya??? main tume ladke ka baap lagta hoon? main ladke ka baap, hai na? to tum ladki ki ma!!! 😡

Shobha - Are are, bhaiyya... ye kya kar rahe hain aap?? ye Dhara hain, Shekhavat uncle ki beti..

Ashish - Ooo... 😃 iss liye itni akdu hai!!

Dhara - tumne kuch kaha? 😲

Ashish - nahi nahi kuch bhi to nahi! 😛

Shobha - Aur Dhara, ye mere bhaiyya Ashish jinki abhi shaadi hone waali hai. 😊

Dhara - 😲 😲 😲 😲 😲 aur main soch rhi thi ye ... 😆 😆

Ashish - aayiye aayiye DharaJI!!!!!...

Meera - Ashish..., Pooja beta aao dono.. pooja shuru karni hai..

The pooja takes place according to all d rituals.

after the pooja -

Dhara is in thoughts when she doesnt notice a plate of flowers in front of her, she steps on it , is abt 2 fall when she grabs Ashish's shoulder who is standing in front of her in order 2 save herself..

... she however cannot save herself n in d very act of falling, drags ashish also down n Dhara falls on Ashish's hand... and...

Ashish - AAAHHH... MERA HAAATH...

Everyone hurries towards both of them and help them 2 get up n hav dem seated.

Dhara - I am so sorry Ashishji...

Ashish - Nahi Nahi its ok...

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On d other side in d kitchen -

Dev - Vaah vaaa... laddu, kachori, jalebi, pulao, pakode, ... shobhaji..

Shobha - Ji.. 😳 aapko kuch chahiye tha?

Dev - haan aaap...

Shobha - Kya??? 😳

Dev - 😳😳 matlab, aap mujhe kachoriyan aurladdu dijiye na... 😃

Shobha - ji.. haan dei hoon..

Priyanka enters...

Priyanka - Dev ... oh hi shobha... tumse milna chahti thi main. aao na... baith kar baate karte hain.. 😈

Shobha - theek hai.. 😊

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Chapter 8 done. plzzz comment guys...

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