FF: Mysterious Murder at Manampur; Updt-Pg 44;5/2

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@chatterbox

Trailblazer

+ 15

Posted: 13 years ago

#111

great update

when there is no ans no hope solution comes out in form not known

good one

hmm somehow from last update i felt something wud happen to rohit or thru rohit

now he is injured and nxt door neighbour is some play actress

too many suspects but go on

waitin for next part

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Prachi

@justjayati

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#112

desperately waiting for the next update Swethu and u know why...😉

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proteeti

@sambhavami

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 13 years ago

#113

Great !!!!!!!!!!!!! Really Fabulous !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏

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Khusi

@khusi_*

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#114

i like this part!😃

play actress!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤔

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Swetha

@swethasyam08

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#115

thank u all guys.

lot many surprises yet to come. keep guessing and Wait for next update.

Jayathi! this wait will be fruitful. will be updating 2moro or on friday 😛

Note: the reason for taking such lengthy updates and giving each n every dialogue type thing is: i just want to show the mentality or nature of the person/persons.

what ever is seen is different from what they are. their nature differs from point to point. u will be seeing many variations of few characters.

this story has so many twists that i was confused when i read and was surprised after reading the entire book.

forgive me if fail to present in correct way.

i read this book 3 yrs back and now its not available and the movie is a japanese movie. though the movie is directed differently from what i read.

so just correlating with what i read n the scene im presenting it here. i deviated my story from the main story to present in my own way. the main concept is same. the rest is different.

Hope u keep encouraging me in the same manner as u did till now. hope that im improving in presenting the characters and plot.

Thank u all

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Moner_Radio

@Moner_Radio

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#116

@ swetha :

it's perfectly ok dear, take your time ..it's your story, so you are free to treat it the way you want it😃..& bdw, dont forget me ( you know what i mean😆 ) !!😉

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Swetha

@swethasyam08

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#117

polly u entry is near 2 - 3 more updates. mostly it will be update 3 from now 😛

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Prachi

@justjayati

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#118

@ swetha!!

ye achchi baat nahin hai... itna excitement kyon paida kar deti ho readers ke dilo mein... ESP ME!!! Not fare...😭

BTW... are yaar... tension not!!! u r writing it really good... we all r enjoying it thoroughly... UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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dolly

@tiny15

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#119

@swetha wonderful & marvellous job!!👏👏 i m really enjoying ur story. i'd always liked thriller/social/ comedy/ horror & oder knids as i m not much in2 romantic types until they've sum understanding couple's luv story!!

and i m eagerly waiting 4 nxt chapter & wants 2 read it in one go!!! so plz don't makeus wait 4 more days!!!😊

Edited by tiny15 - 13 years ago

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Swetha

@swethasyam08

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#120

Character Sketch 3

25. Mohit Roy - Friend of Rohit and one among the Victory group. very friendly but maintains some difference with others

26. Karan Chopra - Actor in Avanthi theater. friend of Jayathi. Decent man and a bit reserved

27. Arjun Sethuraman - Adopted son of Victim. Though he loves his father but cannot go against his wife and both behaved very badly with his father. a bit cunning nature.

28. Polly - Lover of Murderer (Details in the update 😳)

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