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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 8: Stand By Me

After a long day of hectic schedule, Radhika comes back to her room. She enters the room to find out that Charu is not in her room. She looks for her out. "Damn, Charu must be roaming outside again", she mutters.

She goes to the corridor and call her name, "Charu...Charu..." but it was only the echo which responded her call.

R:"The corridors are really dark now a days, I wonder why I don't find another doctor."

She knocks one of the doctor's room. A lady doctor who she had met but never interacted opens the door.

"What is it, Radhika?"

R:"Oh, you know my name. Actually I'm looking for my friend Charu. Did you notice her around?"

Doc:"Who?"

R:"My friend, she was living with me."

Doc: "I'm sorry, but as per my knowledge, you were living alone."

R:"No no, my friend was with me...maybe you didn't notice her."

Doc:"Radhika, I know every single doctors and I also know who are living with them. You must have forgotten that I'm the Doctor Quarter's Secretary. I am sure you were living alone."

R:"What nonsense! I was with my friend and you're sure that nobody was living with me?"

Doc: "Yes, that's what I'm talking about."

R:"Check the visitor register. I have a friend here."

That lady doctor leads her to the Quarter office and opens the register to her.

Doc:"Check, whether any name of Charu is here or not?"

Radhika searches the whole register. She gets shocked to find out that no name of Charulata Sen is in the register!

Continued on next post.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#72
wow! suspense thriller 😆 too good.

i was expecting the story to take such twist. 😛 when i read ur last post then i doubted abt it. must wait till next posts to know the truth...



Swetha
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Posted: 14 years ago
#73
Ufff... my mind is asking me 1000 questions!!!! & i want my answers now!! so update soon plz!!!!!!!!!! 😆 dont wanna die of cuirousity!!!! 😆 superb update as usual... 👏
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Posted: 14 years ago
#74
its so interesting just like a detective story or thriller..update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
#75
@All

What I want the readers to do is create their own environment. I never do detailed descriptions of the places. This allows the readers to make their own comfort zone where they can make the characters work around with the story. Its quite experimental as you may not come with such stories where appropriate description of a place is not available. So its something new I am trying with my story. Hope all will understand the process and applaud my efforts.

Thanks to all...story will be updated tonight.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#76
i wonder lonely in d wood.
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Ok ok i wonder ths a cgm forum or a fictn forum. Huhahaha.
Haha ab D agar C ko kidnap kare to fictn forum e hue na!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Update update update!!!!!! 😆
Edited by Charu21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@ Scott
very nice and interesting update😃...ya sometimes its good to give readers their own freedom to imagine 👍🏼

@ Charu
lovely smileys😛😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Radhi n Bhargu -- hehee!!! thanx yaar!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Continued from last post...


Radhika is stunned looking at the register. But she somehow recuperate herself and looks back to the lady doc.

"Maybe my friend never entered her details here, maybe she didn't know about it...she is new here afterall."

Lady doc smiled, "Radhika, maybe you are right, but tell me how can we be wrong or atleast ask the security...how can he be wrong?"

Radhika suddenly recalls that the security guard has seen her with Charu more than 100 times. "Oh yes, he did see us together, he can say about her."

Doc: "Lets go then."

Security guard scratched his head, crooked his eyebrows but never recalled anyone with Radhika.

Radhika shouts in anger and pounces on the guard holding his collar, "You swine! You saw me more than 1000 times with my friend and now you say you didn't! I'll kill you."

Other doctors also came out hearing this brouhaha. They rescued the guard from Radhika's rage.

Doc: "Now listen Radhika, enough is enough! You can't fool us all. We never saw any friend of yours here in this quarter. Make sure you apologise to the guard."

R:"Apologise my foot! Listen to me you ****, I'll kill you all if I don't get my friend back."

Another doctor came up, "This is incorrigible! Radhika I warn you not to make any more problems, you already created a lot of problem..."

The lady doc suddenly stopped that another doctor , "Shut up will you! I don't want any quarrels here, you understand Prasant! Now go back to your rooms, let me handle this."

Radhika looks at Dr. Prasant as if she found something to know which the lady doc never wanted to say her. The lady doctor looks back at Radhika, "Now listen to me very carefully, do you have any other proofs of your friend who you claim to be here?"

Radhika, now bit calm, thinks again, "yes her luggage is in my room."

Doc: "Lets check it."


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