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Posted: 14 years ago
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Aru n Radhi -- woahhh!! perfect choice re!! Amatya for sure!!! 😍
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 3 - Welcome, Subject!

"Madam, Sir is looking for you", says the ward staff. Radhika looks at him and nods to him in approval. It has been 2 weeks now, Radhika joined ICPMF. Bunder is a beautiful town, with green surroundings and beautiful atmosphere. She told herself once, "Why I never been here? A vacation, definitely would have been possible. Charu should've been here. Awesome."

ICPMF is not that bad as outer world knows and carries a notion about it. Yes, this is the place that houses some notorious criminals. But everything is so good, so systematic. Administration is above exceptional and the colleagues are simply outstanding. But some of them are bit weird. "That doesn't matters", thinks Radhika, "after all nobody's perfect."

Radhika comes infront of a room which is the Superintendent of the ICPMF's room. Dr. Suhel Seth is a no-nonsense person but is kind at heart. He has been quite friendly with Radhika. A man in his 50s, surely a father figure for Radhika.

Continued in next post.


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Posted: 14 years ago
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Okay here's an update. Dr. Suhel Seth's character has been updated. It will be portrayed by the man who plays Chanakya (he's name is Manish something but I forgot, please excuse me.). Its a request from Radhika to change the portrayal as a Hospital Super needs a mature man.

Story updates from next post after a while.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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good part...chanakya's character is played by the great Manish Wadwa...he will be perfect for the role
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ye mein samicute typ dialogue mar rahi hu- awesome.
Nyc part. Pls pm 2 all
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Continues...

"May I come in, Sir?" ask Radhika.

"Oh, yes Dr. Sharma do come in" replies Dr. Seth while looking into some reports, "I hope everything is working fine with you."

R: "Yes, indeed sir, the environment here is wonderful. Its the first time I came here and fall in love with this place."

S: "First time, eh? You never did come here before, Sharma?"

R:"No...why do you ask?" her tone had a shadow of doubt.

S:"Oh no, nothing sort of", smiled Seth, "anyways as you had arrived here for about 2 weeks now, I believe you are now well suited with this ambiance. It's time to take over a case. Your first one in ICPMF."

R: "Thank you sir, but did you say take over a case deliberately or its just..."

Seth laughed out at her, "Oh you wicked mind, got me so quick. Yes, this is not a new case. Actually this one is quite old...for about 2-3 years now. Simple case got so complicated that it took so much long to solve", Seth sighed.

R: "So is it solved..."

S: "Oh no no, its not solved, that is why you are here. You see, this patient no. 266 is a rare case of Multiple Personality Disorder with Obsessive Compulsive Disorder. It never happens. Never. But this patient has it all."

R: "Why the other doctors failed?"

S: "No doctors, there was only one. Dr. Bharti Singh, who was actually a brilliant psychologist I ever met, till then you came along."

R:"Well, thank you sir, but why Dr. Bharti given the case up?"

S:"Dr. Bharti Singh disappeared, nobody knows about her disappearance. Some says she has committed suicide, some says she has ab-scorned. Police searched her a lot. But after a while they gave up and made it a "presumed dead" case."

R:"Is that anything to do with this patient?"

S:"Well, as per Dr. Singh's records she consistently reported that this patient is highly manipulative and loves playing mind games with his doctors. Also she mentioned about a charm he possess to convince doctors that he is sane, but I never came up with something like that when I examined him. So you can see its a very tough case but looks very simple."

R:"Any reference sir for my help?"

S:"Oh sure Sharma, here's the file of the patient. Just study it properly before you meet him."

Radhika takes the file and opens it. He finds a nice looking man's photo in it. "He's a nice looking man", says Radhika.

Dr.Seth replied, "Yes he is...his name is Dhanraj Chopra."

Radhika looks at Dr. Seth and looks on the file photo again, "Patient no. 266, a criminal mind...", Radhika smiles.

S: "Criminal mind for sure. Had killed his brother for the business but not proved properly, lack of evidence."

R: "Can I get the records of Dr. Singh?"

S:"No, I am sorry, protocols won't allow me to do that. But any information from that record you need, I'll provide you. Best of Luck."

Radhika takes the file in her hands, looks at Dr. Seth and smiled, "thank you sir, I think that will be all."

Radhika comes out of the room. She suddenly finds darkness outside. She looks at the sky and finds that black clouds covered the sky, possibility of rain as cloud started roaring. Radhika looking at the cloud, "Blackest day comes with brightest night." She walks away.

Continued...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wow nyc update. Bt yes brighest night w8 cme as i mt D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi bengalscott 😊
welcome to the forum 😃
ur story is brilliant..with so many secrets hidden inside..i loved the story so far..ur writing style is quite good and proffesional..keep writing ⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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he bhaggu bharti ko kya ho gaya hai??😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Chapter 4: First Contact

Radhika has a habit of afternoon nap. She goes back to her quarters and thinks how to begin with the case. It's not the first time for her, she did quite a lot case studies at Georgia. But her senses not working properly, a feeling of weirdness is clutching her after she got the case. She opens the file once again. "Now where did I see this face? It's so familiar," but hardly can she recall. Her memory power has loosened a bit. It was due to an accident she had 2-3 years back during a tour. "Where the hell the place was that accident happened?" she thinks again, "some where..." she leaves trying and again looked at the file.

It is raining hard. These hilly areas are notorious for water-clogging at the plains. But the institute is situated on a hill area so water clogging is not a problem, at least here. She walks to the window. A chilly wind just shivered her. She enjoyed it. She extended her arm out of the window as rain drops fall on her hands. A heavenly feeling! She was smiling and started laughing like a baby. "Its so wonderful." she says.

"Is it so?" A sudden voice from Radhika's back. She got extremely startled. She turned back and saw a lady in her 20s sitting on the chair in her room. Radhika surprised to see that lady and bit feared too. "Who are you?" asks Radhika in a fearful voice.

The lady stands up. She's all muddy and her clothes are torn out, as such a huge toil-moil happened on her. She is injured too. "You know me", a husky voice from the lady.

R: "Do I? But I can't remember you."

L: "Yeah, its so normal for you. But do you know what the protocol is all about?"

R: "What? What protocol? How did you enter my room?"

L: "A truth which is stranger than fiction, is a case, isn't it so?"

R: "I'll call the security, who the hell are you?" she shouts.

L: "Me, I am someone whom you want to know, I am the truth."

The lady comes closer to Radhika. Radhika, now extremely feared looking for something to stop the lady. But the lady, to the horror of Radhika, went to the window and climbed on to it. She turned back to Radhika and smiled. The smile was dry and so frightening. Suddenly the lady jumped through the window.

Radhika screamed in horror as she suddenly woke up on her bed. She is in all sweat now and looking throughout the room. She saw her watch. Its 4.30pm now. She recalls "I entered my room at 3pm. Was it a dream?"

Radhika leaves her bed. She comes close to the window. The window has iron grills on it. But she saw the window has no grills and the lady jumped out of it. Radhika drinks water from the bottle and says herself, "Oh its a dream anyways..so frightening" and looks at the file which is open.

Continued in next post.

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