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Posted: 14 years ago
hahaha thnx me too rofling
i love d dialogue
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badri- ssshhh 🤣
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bhargu- dimag h khali raunak h dikhani 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
me too loved the dialogues 😛 ...specially mera...humari personality ko suit karta hai 😎 main real lyf mein bhi aise hi dialogue maarti hun 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow tujhe to asani ne pechan li mein. Intelgent ias
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Posted: 14 years ago
ab age badho...hume bhi pata chale aur kis kisko pehchanti hai tu...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: radhikarani

wow tujhe to asani ne pechan li mein. Intelgent ias



haan haan bilkul 😉 amatya ki sangat ka kuch toh asar hona hi tha 😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
@jhum- sure dear!
Thnx
@bhargu- thk kaha
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hello ...I have updated story with sum more characters...Peihu, Shashank n Aditya as themselves, Amtaya Pramukh as Mr. Pasha n Karvinath as Mr. Nath (present owner of bakery)😆.

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From Rihan's POV-

Drakshita ran away timidly, her kerchief is flowing in air as water in river. It feels as a fairy just passed nigh to me. Though I have a special corner for her in my heart yet she is too sacred for me. She doesn't know, it's my last meeting with her, but I. Overwhelmed with my feelings; I walked out with short steps. For the first time I feel a special attraction b/w us, however, giving it the name of love is not fair.

It is a distressful life for me, after my father's murder. Like an oneirodyna our life becomes irksome, now, I live with my mother in slum area. She works in a bakery & turning senile. So, I have decided to work at her place.

This is my first day in bakery, Mr. Pasha admonish me about all the work n took me there. As I put my footstep in the entrance of bakery I see many working courteous people starts gazing me. Then Mr. Pasha introduce me,"Sabhi Karamchariyon, yeh ab tumhare saath Malini ki jagah kaam karega." And he walks away leaving me in the oven room with two brown-colored heat proof gloves in my hands.

After he leaves everyone gets busy in his own, no one is talking with each other. Everything there is exciting n fascinating from doughing flour for bread, preparing batter for cakes n biscuits n decorating the baked cakes with almonds, raisins n pistachios.

In oven room there r two boys with me, one is thin n other is plumpy. "Cake ban ne wala hai dhyan rakhna." thin one said. I shook my head as approval n keep pondering " Why they r not talking with each other? Why there is so silence as the persons working r not human but machines. Perhaps I'm stranger for them but others r inveterate, then why?" In this notion I forget to wear gloves n touched the utensil of cake, "Ahh mera haath", I screams.

Both the boys rushes to me, the plumy one hold my hand tightly with intense care he whiffs it n put it under water tap " Jab main yahan naya- naya aaya than a tab aise hi mera haath bhi jal gaya tha. Tum jinki jagah aaye ho unhone bhi aisa hio kiya tha aur mera dard chu ho gaya tha."

I gather my sense n percept "Main Rihan hoon, jinki tum baat kar rahe ho who meri maa hain.".They smiled n hugged me. "Main Shashank hoon aur yeh hai Aditya.", the plumped one quoths.

"Tum sab itne chup-chup kyun ho, koi kisi se baat klyun nhi karta"

"Humne suna hai,yeh jagah Nath babu bech rahe hain "Aditya admits n tears come from his eyes. It seems as lighting falls on me.

Suddenly a flash of light comes from door, we moved out of the oven room and see an elegant girl enters the bakery n starts wandering. By her looks it seems as she'll buy this bakery, I ran towards her n ask "are u buying this bakery n then what u 'll do with it?". She luked me in astonishment, though I'm very little in front of her but as a large hearted person she sits on her knees ,put her hands on my shoulders n said smilingly " I'm not buying this but wants to make this bakery more advanced by opening a shop cum restaurant also."

My face turns expressionless, I'm shocked with happiness, I screamed in joy "Yeh bakery nahi bikagi per hume aur naye kaam karne ka avser degi.". Everyone gets delighted n cherished.

Then the girl take a piece of cake n feed me with her sweet hands n roled her fingers in my messy hair. She ia truly an angelic soul for all of us. She turned n starts walking towards door. I fumble her hand n shackle her, slowly I walk before her n said"Thank u sweet lady.". She mocks "My name is Peihu, sweeto." . I sit on my knees as she had done earlier, take her hand in my one look in her shimmering eyes n said "Thanks a lot Peihu, u r a nymph for us, u saved our lives. We all remain thankful to u always.". She smiled gently n walks away in glittering rays of sinking sun.

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Edited by indupriya2008 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
@indu - are indupriye..main to bas masti karrahi thi..aapne sach much
mujhe story mein daal diya😆 carry on with ur original story and mera role
yahin over karo..nahin to cookies ke saath meri mummy mujhe bhi oven mein
bake kardegi😆 waise meri jitni taareef karo kam hai..phirbhi thanks for the lovely
description😳

@jhum - haan jhum mera aur chandu ka ek scene zaroor daalna..main kabse kataar
main wait kar rahi hoon😭 bt please mujhe uski maa ya behen mat banana😆
aur mera naam chanda rakhna..chandu ki chanda🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wah kya entry li
oh ho sitting on knees and bg music tameva mata 🤣
joking
infct the best part in the story is flngs and moments dscribe beautifuly
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Posted: 14 years ago
chanda aunty kahika 🤣
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