CN SS: ~REVENGE~ part 11 updated at page 31 - Page 12

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Ufff!! Titli!! Back to back 3 super duper reviews!!!⭐️⭐️🤗

Thank you so much dear. Will come up with replies tomorrow. 😳

Originally posted by: Titli_KK3148

Me, a super late latif...

Sorry for the immense delay in my arrival..

But I am seriously interested..

Need to catch up Shailaja's FF too.. Missed many updates and now I am sitting and yawning😆

Chal late hi sahi.. mein agayi hoon..😃

Tum aa gaye ho... Noor aa gaya hay! 😆

Part 3

An absolute fantastic piece of writing.. No words.. Take a bow and a round of applause👏👏

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I was completely lost in the CN world while reading your update.. Your detailed description of every scene makes it easy for your readers to imagine the current happenings in your SS..

I felt as if the scenes are being actually enacted on my tv screen..

Superb superb superb..

>>Aab bas bhi karo!!😆

Good to read Nandni noticing the happy faces of the ordinary people, the maids of the royal palace other than the King's family and realizing that such kind of free attitude and relaxed hearts among the servants were never noticed when Nand was ruling over the empire..

Stuti you have the ability to bring out an exceptionally logical storyline.. Out of the blue, one cannot just suddenly fall in love with a person, thats my firm believe, especially in chandra nandini story where nandni's heart is filled with utter disgust against her husband.. She needs to realise the betterment brought by the new ruler of Magadh and get aware of the good side of Chandra and the evil deeds of her beloved father.. She needs to understand the difference between the two people and she will herself be able to distinguish between right and wrong..

>>> Agree with you thoroughly. Will be trying my best to express this in the story.

So a great thought provoking track brought by you.. admire your thinking ability..

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Oh how thoughful of Mura!! she is a sweet woman indeed, asked Helena and Dhur to sit and perform the rituals with CGM..

that is really good.. So equal importance is been given to all the three queens of the Samrat, something for which many of us has been pinning since a long time..

Yes, as a mother-in-law in is her duty to balance the symmetry between three of them 😳

Chandra is destined to fall for nandni thats a different thing, but why being partial to Nandni only?? Kya mura ya kisi aur ko pehele se sapna aya tha ke chandra will love his 3rd queen to the core?/ toh show mein aisa kyun dikhaya ke preference is given only to her over the other two in every minor to major affair??😕

This is the greatest confusion of the show. I can't understand why Dadi and Moora is so partial (yes, it is clearly partiality) towards Nandini. It's irritating as well.

oyee hoyee.. stuti.. teri nandni toh ghoor rahi hai chandra ko..😆😆

she could not ignore the heavenly male beauty in her hubby during the pooja time.. waah.. 😳 Has chandra started to occupy the least portion of her heart from now?? Interesting to see the developing bond between the two enemies..

Aage aage dekho hota hay kya! She will not be able to remove her eyes from his face after some days. 😆

Hmm I understand how difficult it is for nandni to accept the murderer of her family.. Unless she gets to know the evil colors of her father, she will not be able to accept her husband whole heartedly .. somewhere it will prick her heart even if chandra manages to win over her completely..

Yes, she is in a very complicated situation. You know what, it's a challenging job to shape a lovestory in this position. 😛

A very interesting update.. with so less Chandni scenes and more of the surroundings, you have brilliantly managed to pen down a damn good chapter..

It was only when i finished reading the whole chapter that I realized ke arey yahan to chnadra nandni scenes hai hi nahin😆..

credit goes to the fantastic writer in you..

🤣 Thank you so much. 😳 This time you will get lesser number of Chandni scenes... It will increase gradually.

Eagerly looking forward to read the rest of the chapters as soon as possible..

keep up your great SS..

Lot of love and best wishes for you..

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Originally posted by: jayaks02

Stuti - I have recorded my response again - Did you see that ?

Originally posted by: jayaks02

Devil What is your definition of Killer Chapter ? 😆 To me, it does not have to be with suspense, action or Kick-ass romance.

Any Chapter where you become one with the characters and are able to relate to their words and action fully is a Killer Chapter.

You have etched out Chandra's Non-interest in romantic love or even passionate love so well. And I am so excited to see what is coming up that will make him eat up his words chapter by chapter.

And I have told you before, your Chandra is a COOL Cat your . He is better than the serial one in terms of characterization so far. And even your Nandini is such a match to him . She wants to equal him or rather does not want to lose him badly or any which way. She thinks and analyzes beautifully.

Now both will start walking in a direction that will take them closer and may be at some point she may want him to win whole heartedly.

Kick-ass Storyline you have . Cannot wait for next one. 🤗