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Posted: 8 years ago
Perfect...Again I am out of words to explain this fantastic chapter.A great treat for me tonight! Shailu
I liked how meticulously you described Sitapur and Manadra ki kubja. Ashoka trees description was very nice. I liked how Bhimsen and Chankaya decipher the codes.

Padmanand 's character is explained in details.
His reason for hat redness towards Chandra is Nandini.He does not love his wife Avantika. I felt bad for Avantika for the first time. Had she remained faithful to Shishunag,she would have been in better place than this.
Still,he does not seems to love his daughter. He adores her as a mascot only. But what I love in the PN is his brain and skills. An antagonist is supposed to be more powerful than the protagonist.Else the story will not be very appealing to read. I liked his suspicion on Gajanan and how he hides it under his fake smile.
Vishaka makes a grand entry.It is soothing to see her in Chandra's side. I really look forward who is going to be killed by VK.IS it Parvartak or Malay.
Till now Arjun is not seen .I hope in next chapter he will help his sister.Chandra will also start to like Arjun for his help. I want PN to fight till end .👏

Regards
Avantika
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Posted: 8 years ago
Forgot to mention Vakranas part.It was very good.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thank you Avantika. I was still planning to send PMs and you had already responded. My comments are in bold.

Originally posted by: JanakNandini

Perfect...Again I am out of words to explain this fantastic chapter.A great treat for me tonight! Shailu
I liked how meticulously you described Sitapur and Manadra ki kubja. Ashoka trees description was very nice. I liked how Bhimsen and Chankaya decipher the codes.


Final face off between Padmanand and Chandra will take place here. So I had to describe Sitapur in detail so that readers will be able to imagine it when the fight comes later on in the story. Next major battle after the one with dacoits is the one between Chandra and Dhananand.

Padmanand 's character is explained in details.
His reason for hat redness towards Chandra is Nandini.He does not love his wife Avantika. I felt bad for Avantika for the first time. Had she remained faithful to Shishunag,she would have been in better place than this.

She would have been better off if she was with Shishunaag but there would have been no story of Chandra and Nandini either.

Still,he does not seems to love his daughter. He adores her as a mascot only. But what I love in the PN is his brain and skills. An antagonist is supposed to be more powerful than the protagonist.Else the story will not be very appealing to read. I liked his suspicion on Gajanan and how he hides it under his fake smile.

Padmanand doesn't love his daughter. She is just an ego booster and a lucky mascot for him. She is an object who belongs to him but for Chandra she is his very life breath. That's why destiny paired her forever with Chandra.

Vishaka makes a grand entry.It is soothing to see her in Chandra's side. I really look forward who is going to be killed by VK.IS it Parvartak or Malay.

I am not going by history in this FF. I have already mentioned how Parvathak and Malayketu got defeated by Chandragupt and Chanakya in war and lost their kingdom. Parvathak dies because of this. Now Malayketu has sought refuge with his uncle Veerabahu who is the king of Uttara Meru and they are Padmanand's allies. So Malayketu will be the victim here.

Till now Arjun is not seen .I hope in next chapter he will help his sister.Chandra will also start to like Arjun for his help. I want PN to fight till end .👏

Padmanand will fight. He will go down all guns blazing and not with a whimper.

Regards
Avantika

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Posted: 8 years ago
Shailu,I dont know how I forgot that parvartak dies...May be I dont remember if it not related to chandini 😆 I think I got confused because of reading updates from the serial. Sorry yar...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: JanakNandini

Even while cooking some idea will pop up,i will jot down in a small book and try to expand.

Ha! Ha! Happens with me too. I am frying the tadka for dal or some curry and it gets burnt occasionally by the time I note down the point or line. Sometimes I get ideas at such odd times like when I am taking a bath in my bath tub and I hastily rush out without washing off the soap properly from my ears or nose to note down or type somewhere.
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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update.. lets see how the plan works... Waiting for next...
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: JanakNandini

I love all my characters of the ff and also other representation of them in my friends ff. BE it yours or sangs or banu's or aish.. Because of this strong attachment I keep writing Ff despite many times I felt dejected to write.


Dont feel dejected for any reason dear...

You know i am not professional writer as well...

Infact i was working & only know writing official emails & letters...

But to show my love towards RoSId i started writing & now i wrote 90+ stories & now as i am watching Chandra Nandhini started FF in this...

But you know what.. i am neither very strong in flowery language nor skilled or professional writer...

Just to show my love towards the characters i am still writing...

We should not bother how many reads or likes or comments...

We need to write for those even 1 or 2 who take pain to read and enjoy our writing...

So never give up.. We are there to support you anyways...😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: banuprasa

Nice update.. lets see how the plan works... Waiting for next...


Thank you Banu.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: banuprasa


Dont feel dejected for any reason dear...

You know i am not professional writer as well...

Infact i was working & only know writing official emails & letters...

But to show my love towards RoSId i started writing & now i wrote 90+ stories & now as i am watching Chandra Nandhini started FF in this...

But you know what.. i am neither very strong in flowery language nor skilled or professional writer...

Just to show my love towards the characters i am still writing...

We should not bother how many reads or likes or comments...

We need to write for those even 1 or 2 who take pain to read and enjoy our writing...

So never give up.. We are there to support you anyways...😊


banu you are an amazing writer.You have a good imagination skill.I loved your ff i hurt u very much.You have ended it very soon yara...I am loving this second ff very much..playful chandra and ravishing nandini. ..
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Posted: 8 years ago
Superb update dear
Thxc 4r pm

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