Elements of Life: A poem for CGMs three wives (Pg1) - Page 2

Originally posted by: myviewprem

A poem for CGMs three wives (Pg1)

Originally posted by: ---Khushi---

Your poem is Chandra's mental state BEFORE his marriages with his 3 queens 😃

I would like to reply with a poem which is Chandra's mental state AFTER his marriages with his 3 queens 😆...may I ??

Originally posted by: myviewprem

This is Chandra's state of mind BEFORE his marriages with his 3 queens: 😃

A poem for three wives(dedicated by chandra)

Zindagi ki haqeeqat

Jab rubaru hui

Tab sheetal chaya

ban kar aayi woh

Ek humdard ki kaami jab thi

Toh dost banker aayi woh

Jab mein tha bhooka

Ya phir dushman se ghira

To mamta ki chaya banker aayi woh

Zindagi ki haqeeqat

Jab rubaru hui

Tab meri dhal

ban kar aayi woh

Ek pratipalak ki kaami jab thi

Toh inayaat banker aayi woh

Jab main tha gayal

Ya phir dushmanon se ujda hua

To meri samrakshak banker aayi woh

Zindagi ki haqeeqat

Jab rubaru hui

Tab meri noor

ban kar aayi woh

Jab main tha akela

Afreen ka sehar banker aayi woh

Justajoo thi jiski janmon se

Thrisna ka bent banker aayi woh

Wow what a amazing poem
Ur analysis is mind blowing...the way u compare them with elements is beyond imagination
Love your poem
Expecting some more poem's like this from u

Originally posted by: ---Khushi---

This is Chandra's state of mind AFTER his marriages with his 3 queens:😆😉

<font color="#6600ff">SOUTENON ki haqeeqat</font>

<font color="#6600ff">AB rubaru hui</font>

<font color="#6600ff">AB sheetal chaya</font>

<font color="#6600ff">SE BAN GAYI SHOLA woh 😭</font>

<font color="#6600ff">Ek humdard ki kaami AB HAI</font>

<font color="#6600ff">Toh dost banker KYUN NAHI aayi woh</font>

<font color="#6600ff">Jab HOTA HOON bhooka</font>

<font color="#6600ff">Ya phir dushman se ghira</font>

<font color="#6600ff">Toh JHAGADTI SOUTENON KE CHEHRE KYUN DIKHTE HAIN woh😲</font>

<font color="#6600ff">SOUTENON ki haqeeqat</font>

<font color="#6600ff">AB rubaru hui</font>

<font color="#6600ff">Tab meri dhal </font>

<font color="#6600ff">SE ban GAYI KHANJAR woh </font>

<font color="#6600ff">Ek pratipalak ki kaami AB HAI</font>

<font color="#6600ff">Toh inayaat SE BAN GAYI ABHISHAAP woh</font>

<font color="#6600ff">AB MAIN HOON ghayal</font>

<font color="#6600ff">AUR SOUTENON se ujda hua</font>

<font color="#6600ff">samrakshak SE BAN GAYI HAI BHAKSHAK woh😭</font>

<font color="#6600ff">SOUTENON ki haqeeqat</font>

<font color="#6600ff">AB rubaru hui</font>

<font color="#6600ff">KYUN mera NAASOOR</font>

<font color="#6600ff">ban kar aayin woh </font>

<font color="#6600ff">HAAYE...KYUN MERA NAASOOR</font>

<font color="#6600ff">BAN KAR AAYIN WOH???!?!?!😭😭</font>

<font color="#6600ff"></font>

<font color="#6600ff">Jab TAK tha akela</font>

<font color="#6600ff">Afreen ka sehar LAGTI THI woh</font>

<font color="#6600ff">Justajoo thi jiski janmon se</font>

<font color="#6600ff">Thrisna ka bent LAGTI THI woh</font>

<font color="#6600ff">SOUTENON KI HAQEEQAT...HAAYE..😭</font>

<font color="#6600ff">AKHIR KYUN MUJHSE RUBARU HUI?!?😭</font>

Mind blowing khushi
Such a hysterical poem
Feel poor for Chandra's state
"Thin joganiyo k bhich me akelo phas gayo" 😃 😉
Thanks for sharing it with us