Zakham - One shot... Shirsha Ganguly - Page 2

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

Ok I am adding the subtitle. Kindly read it again. I will keep it mind in future

That's so sweet of you

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

Zakham( Wound)

Bilingual

Baith jaiye Mr Malik! Aap ki hath mein bohot chot lagi hai!Can you pls sit Mr Mallik! You have injured yourself enough!

Tara insist Deva to sit beside her. How she wonder someone can be so tall? A day before, she thought Mr Mallik could be her Deva! Deva? She unknowingly smiled at her own fancy thought. Deva... he was such a naughty, jovial kid with messy locks falling in front of his face.. Deva who used to smile cheekily when he used to bring kitten or pigeons for her.. Deva who was fond of eating wiered confectionery made of wheat.. And Mr Mallik, muscle always contorted... Face covered with beard, eyes emotionless. 15 years have been passed. Deva still breathes like a pumping heart in Tara "s chest as if she possess two one for her living and the other for her soul. Deva will not come back . People who had left this world only returns if it is a fairy tale or a miracle. Tara dont trust her destiny could be this good atleast not in the matters of loved ones.

Please dawa lagane dijiye she said,(Pls let me tend your wounds)

kitna jal gaya hai aap ka haath! -It has burnt miserably!

Deva sarcastically smiles - Ap ko sach mein laagta hai har jala hua zakham yuhi marham lagane se thik ho jata hai? ..Do you really think that each and every wound that one has get healed by such petty oinments?

Tara sighed heavily and drag his shirt 's sleeves and made him sit beside the slab near the Amaltash tree.

" Har baat pe hulk banke sulk karne ki zaroorat nhi hai.. Dawai lagane dijiye varna sceptic ho jayega...

There is no need to sulk like a hulk.. Pls let me tend your wounds else it will turn into septic!

Dev-Kuch dard ka nasoor bane rehena hi behetar hai

Some wounds never get healed Tara Mam!

Tara started applying burnt cream on his burnt palm and said - Agar itni hi chir hai mujhse toh Bachaya kyun?

If you are so pissed at me..why did you save me?

Dev - Oh toh Tara Mam ko is baat ki khabar ho gayi! Ap toh behosh ho gayi thi..Deva in his mind (Meine unhe Tara Memsahab keh kar pukara tha...kahi suni toh nhi nehi)

So you know..that it was me who save me!

Did she heard that when I call her in her real name?

Tara (in her mind)-Mujhe ek pal ke liye laga jaise Mr Mallik ne mujhe (Tara Memsahab keh kar bulaya... Poochun kya unse?)

Did he called me Tara Memsahab? Shall I reconfirm it?

Deva looked at her intensely, sensing her doubts and ensuing questions, he quickly divert her attention.

Dev - Aap ko toh aag se dar lagta hai fir vi aap us kamre mein kud gayi.

As far as I know you are pyrophobic then why did you jump into the fire..

After applying more burnol, Tara lifted her eyes to his level...

Mere baba andar phase huye the aag mein... You mean mein unhe akela chor deti?

As if you dont know..My father was stuck in the fire! What were you expecting from me.. To leave him?

Deva - Aap ki Baba ko vi meine hi bachaya tha..in case of ap dementia ki patient na hai toh! Ap us waqt bahar thi bad mein ap andar gayi aur behosh ho gayi...

It was me who saved your father...i hope u remember unless you dont have Dementia! You at that time was in the balcony.. You reached there late and then you suddenly got senseless there.

Tara - Mere Papa ki jan bachane ke liye thank u so much Mallik...

Thank you for saving my Papa's life!

Deva - Ap mere sawal ki jawab nhi de rahi hai. Jab us kamre mein aag lagi tab aap andar nhi gayi... Apki baba ko aag ki lapeto se mein bahar laya hoon...ap uski bad gayi thi jab aag almost bujh gaya tha...

Why are you avoiding my question.. Tell me why you suddenly run to enter the room...when the fire was almost restricted?

Tara closed her eyes and recalled the moment that how her father was caught in the clutches of fire.. How Deva valiantly saved him, and how she saw the Photo of Deva and Badshah fell in the dustbin that caught fire.How she fanatically run to the room to save it, How Mr Mallik again had to come after her by saving her.. He saved him though, But Tara had burnt her hand while picking up the photograph... In the process Mr Mallik indeed burnt his own.

Tara composed herself, She cannot let him know why she ran again into the room. He might laugh or mock at her thinking her silly She smiled -

Aap ko thank you bol rahi hoon na mein... Ap ki yeh ehesaan jindagi vaar nhi bhuloongi!

I will remain forever indebted to you... for what you do for me!

Dev looked at her intensely, now not at her doe shaped eyes..but at her left hand that was bandaged due to burnt scar.

His eyes get moist watching how Tara even if was injured came to tend his wound.

Tara bandaged his hand politely and looked up at him as he was still looking at him

She smiled -"Aap ke udhar toh mujh mein badte ja rahe hai Mr Mallik...Pehele Palash fur freezer se aur ab aag se bachaya aapne mujhe..

You have saved me in several ocassions. I dont know how may I be able to pay you back.

Deva smiled mockingly - Ap ko meine contract diya hai aap meri ek lauti employee hai... Bachana toh banta hai...

You are my employee.. The only one... You see! So its worth saving your life!

.

Tara - Yeh bhi thik hai..

You are right!

Tara got up and was about to go while Dev called his name from behind

'Lagta hai koi gehna ya fir koi keemti chiz thi... Tara mam... Aisa vi keya tha.. Jo ap ko dubara dukan mein kharid ne se vi na milta?

I presume You lost something very precious... I am curious to know.. What it could be... Is it something so exquisite... that you cannot buy it from any shop?

Tara turned to him and smiled- Har chiz ki keemat bazaroon nhi hoti.. Priceless hoti hai kuch kuch.. Khair aap Businesseman hai..Inke hisab aap ki samaj ke pare hai.. Ap nhi samjhengi Mr Mallik.

A buisnessman like you will never understand... that money cant buy everything.. Some are priceless.

Watching keenly at her retreating figure.. Dev smiled ruefully and started unwrapping his bandage

"Kuch zakham itne gehere hote hai ki woh marham aur patti se vi nhi vaarte.. aap badi ghar ki shehzadi hai...Ap jaise Kapti aur Swarthi hai.. Biswasghat ki gav gehre hote hai... Yeh aap nhi samjhengi!

And you Tara Mam...who is a self centered and so deceptive... will never understand there is no such medicine that can heal a wound that has inflicted upon somebody through betrayal!

I dont know what I have written. Its just a thought.. I edited the plot a little. I hope u like it.

Very well written

Both their dialogues are heart touching ♥

Truly said by Tara... har cheez ki keemat nahi hoti

And Deva really sulks like a hulk

Originally posted by: Akshiyaislove

Very well written

Both their dialogues are heart touching ♥

Truly said by Tara... har cheez ki keemat nahi hoti

And Deva really sulks like a hulk

You're ff was read by twitter ppl to they really loved it they can't comment as they don't have account. I am commenting on their behalf

Originally posted by: firewings_diya

You're ff was read by twitter ppl to they really loved it they can't comment as they don't have account. I am commenting on their behalf

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

oh thank u... How did they get it? I also cannot comment there... I have no twitter account 😭😭

Originally posted by: firewings_diya

i shared the link

It's so beautiful ..simple and lovely cut on the fire scene. On screen dunno hw it ll go but am happy in ur story they a nice conversation after the fire with loads of hidden meanings.

Thks for the tag dear

Sorry couldn't reply earlier as wk-ends are very busy for me

Originally posted by: Ziva01

It's so beautiful ..simple and lovely cut on the fire scene. On screen dunno hw it ll go but am happy in ur story they a nice conversation after the fire with loads of hidden meanings.

Thks for the tag dear

Sorry couldn't reply earlier as wk-ends are very busy for me