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Superb update... its getting interesting...
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This is just awesome😳

and dam intresting⭐️
continue this fasttt😆
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Chapter 4

" excuse me" he says

The girl continue walking, hoping if she ignores him he will leave. When she didn't answer he starts talking with the sky " oh ramji-sir, this girl won't talk to me, what should I do to make her speak" he says before saying if he should buy her jeweleries since girls love that, or try to kill himself so she will love him. When he said that the girl told him to do that at least she will have price an quiet.

Ashok asks her if that how she really feels, and she says yes. " fine, I will do it" he says grabbing a heavy rock, he lift it up, hesitating. " what are you doing now" she says

"I will break my hand with this rock" he says, he lift it up , hesitating, while she just stood there watching, no remorse what's so ever " here I go" he says swallowing his spit , he looks at her but she wouldn't budge " I will do it" he says once again, she told him he was just bluffing , but ashok told her he would do anything for love. She turn around to leave, but stop when ashok scream.

Worried she asks him what happens and she saw his hand in a bad condition " you idiot, why would you do that" she says

" I told you I will do it, ashok always keeps his promise" he says, she told him that she never ask him to keep any promise, and coniues to scold him. She grab his hand and quickly drag him to the nearest market, asking for a doctor. A women appeared, claiming she was one. The girl asks for her help,which the lady was happy to comply. While this was going on they were unaware of young females being kidnapped and being sold to other kings for there harem.

The people were running afraid of the soldier's. Some quickly lock their doors, afraid for their daughters. While ashok was being fixed, he asks the girl what was her name, but she refuse to say. Sighing he look out the window, this girl is more work than I thought, he whispers. While looking out the window, he heard horses screeching. Follow by a scream, ashok saw a young girl running, while calling for help.

The soldiers were laughing while chasing her. This did not sit well with ashok. When he saw the girl fall, one of the men stop the horse and got down. He watch the girl like a preditor before bending down " you will be number 33" he says touching her face. The girl struggle to get free while telling him to let her go, but he refuses. Ashok got up, with his fist tighten . he walk toward the door, but the girl stop him " where do you think your going?" She asks before telling him, the doctor needs to heal his injured arm.

Ashok with a serious face told her to move. This made the girl surprise. She only knew him as a goofy, annoying men. But right now, he looks like a different person. She watch as he step outside, and kick a rock up in the air. Like football he kick the medium size rock, making it head towards the soldier, hitting him right in the face.

He fell on the floor bleeding, while holding his head. He asks who threw the rock and ashok appears. The soldiers stop when he saw ashok, he was burning with anger. He bends down, and grab the dirt, apologizing to mother earth because he was about to spill blood. He took the dirt an use his thumb to put it on his hair line. Than he grab his sash and tie a heavy rock on it.

The soldier asks him who he was and ashok got up before saying " mere Nam ASHOK", when he said this some soldiers back away while others were waiting for their leaders commend. The men told them to attack ashok, and they all got down and attack. Ashok spun his sash before hitting each soldiers with it. The girl worried told the doctor that she has to help him, because he's injured.

When the doctor didn't say anything, she turn to see her fall on the floor with blood coming out of her mouth. Surprise, she asks the men who he was and he told her she will be another part of their collection. She tried running away but the men cornerd her. The girl search for anything, before she saw A stick between his leg , she thanks ramji before saying this will hurt you more than it will hurt me.

The soldier didn't know what she was talking about. The girl took a book and throw it on the floor making the stick rise and hit the men in his crouch. The men fell down in pain, the girl apologize before running. Seeing this the men quickly grab her leg, making her fall. As soon as she did she called the first name that came out of her mouth which was ashok, she didn't know why she called his name like that, but it sounds familiar.

The men with struggle got up and put his foot on her face, she struggle, but he didn't care. He squeeze her face on the carpet until she lost consciousness. Ashok on the other hand finished beating up the soldiers, the people who watched the whole thing, thank him for saving them. Ashok asks them why were they chasing the girl, and they told him, that king ahamad is searching for a girl, he told them to kidnap every young girl they could find. If their not the girl then they will be sold to kings in a harem.

Ashok told them that he will stop Ahmad and save those girls. The people told him ahamad is very dangerous, one of the man says what can he do alone. Ashok told them, one man can do a lot of things as long as he's fearless.

He walk away and enter the house, he was surprise to see the doctor dead. He rush to check her pulse but she was gone. He got up and search for the girl , but she was no where in sight. Ashok wondered if she did this, but he cross that out the picture. He got up to leave when he stepped on something. Looking at it he realize it was Ahmad symbol badge. Angry he says he will kill who ever took the girl, they will not go unpunished.

To be continue...
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Chapter 5


The soldiers were lining up the girls. Prince ahmed came looking at each of them. When he didn't see her, he told them to send the girls for auction. This made them cr, begging for there life. The girl sigh with relief when prince ahmed didn't see her. He watch him leave before she was dragged somewhere.

Angry, she fold her fist, I will not let you rule my fathers land and tarnish his name, she thought. I will kill you with my own fingers, and bring my father justice. The guards drag them until they reached the court house, there they lined them up and wait for the show to begin.

The girl could hear the voices of many. She was outrage, at how sick they were buying young girls for their pleasure. One by one the girls were being sold. This made the girl panicked, when she was next they pull her rope and took her dupatt of her face. The crowd of kings went crazy seeing her.

This was the first time the court has seen such beauty. All the mans want her, this made her glare dagger. If looks could kill everyone would be dead by now.

Ashok on the other hand was on his way, he was angry. He didn't know why he because obsess with her so fast. Their was something nagging . taking his sword, he attack anyone that got in his way , the guards were scared . ashok asks one of them were the girls were being captive, and the guy said in the court room.

Ashok could hear guards coming, he got down frown his horse and took his sword out, by than many guards arrive. They surrounded him, ashok had an era to kill, he moved like a prediter, attacking them, cutting there limp one after the other. He jump when the two man swung there sword, kick when they aim for his side. This continued for a while before their were no more guards.

He got back on his horse and head to the court house, ahmed passing by saw his guards dead, he asks one of them who did this and they said ashok. Ahmed was surprise and furious, he thought they were in peace with one another " so why would he attack my men's" he says

" sir, they said he was looking for someone" a guard said

" really? Who was he looking for?"

"We don't know, sir"

Ahmed sigh, he told the remaining guards to clean this mess while he think. Elsewhere the girl was thinking of a way to ascape, she saw explosive powder, and smirk. The kings were highly bidding, but no one bid higher than the man in the front being block by guards. " sold to the king" the guard said, the girl seeing the men guards coming, quickly grab the explosive and throw it. Everyone got up, the king that bought the girl smirk, saying he loves a challenge.

Just when the girl was about to run, she was hit from the back. Turning, her head became dizzy, she couldn't see the king clearly, but she heard his name ASHOK, she thought, before blacking out. The man smirk and told his guards to take her.

By the time ashok reached no one was in there, he ask some people were the girls were, and they told him, he was to late. They were already auctioned. Ashok angry look at the greedy men with money, he realize he must be the one behind this. He grab his sword and cut the men's arm, the men scream, asking him who he was. "Ashok" he says, this surprised the guard, before the man could say impossible, he was met with a sword in his throat.

Ashok look to the sky, closing his eyes to cool of his anger. He could believe he failed to save those girls. Dejected and tired, he grab his horse and head back home. Not knowing what's about to change.

To be continued.. . . .
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Chapter 6


It was a long journey but ashok made it home. As soon as he reached he was greated by his wife devi, she smile and hug him missing him a lot. Ashok hugs her and ressure her that everything was fine. He went to his room upset, and start removing his things. He thought of the kaurwaki and how he failed to save her. Just like the time he almost failed to save the girl from his past. Ashok wonder how the princess would have been like if she didnt die. See it was after his twentyth birthday that he found out that his beloved kaurwaki was dead.

He was devastated, his dad told him not to give up, and that they will find her, but years past they couldnt. Instead they found her father and mother body. Sighing ashok step out the room and walk to his mom small temple. Their he hug her and close his eyes. He told his mom everything that happened, and told her that even though kaurwaki is dead, it feels like shes near.

His mom told him not to worry, and that if she is alive, she will come to him. What they didnt know was how true it was. See kaurwaki was in bars, calling someone to free her. She begged and cry saying she has to look for her brother. The guards tease her saying we only take order from the king. Another told hershes very beautiful and that she will make a nice collection for ashok haram. She gasp, pleading for them to let her go, but they refuse and left.

While the guards were leaving sushim stops them, he told them to scareher And break her enough that she will be scared of ashok. The two guards protested at first but with sushim threat they agree. Sushim smile thinking about the trouble that will happen soon, he cant wait to see it all unfold.

It was late at night when kaurwaki heard a noise, and the door opening. The two guards walk in pretending to be drunk, they told her ashok wants her to change into ghe sari, but she stayed put. She told them she will not wear his filthy clothes, the guards raise their voice again, but she refused. Smirki g both guards walk to her saying they will just have to do it themselves.

This made kaurwaki gasp. She back away from them, looking at the exit. When they were close she ran to the other side trying to leave, but one of the guards grab her hair, pulling her back. In pain, she grab one of her knife and cut her hair. Surprisi g them, she ran out the door and close the cell. She couldnt see in the dark, so she just chose any direction. Just when she thought she was free, she bump into sushim.

He was angry to see her out. Desperate she told the men to help her ascape, before they get her. Sushim nod hiding his face, he told her to follow him and they left. Kaurwaki not realising that she was going back to jail. Sushim took the short cut, smirking to himself. When he was there, he told the guards to take her away. The guards said ashok name, making her gasp before turning to leave. Sushim grab her and push her to the guards, he told them to punish her for disobeying his order.

He turn to leave, while leaving they tie her up and whip her. He smirk hearing her pain. Yes ashok will definetly pay, he thought.

Few weeks past and the cycle continue. Each day she counts how long shes been there. The longer she staid the longer her hatred grow. By that time sushim insist that ashok gets married. The counsel agreed, they told ashok devi is to weak she will make the future king weak like herself. Helen agreed, ashok on the other hand countered, saying they are his kids, they will never be weak. Helen asks what if they die, what than.
" thats no concern of yourse "he says

" see why dont you be more like your dad, he thought about the good of this kingdom " she says

" and i dont? "

"No"

Helen looks at ashom mom, asking her to see reason. Devi didnt like it, but she didn't want ashok work to go to waist. That night she told ashom to do it, he didnt want to but with her pleading and reasoning he did. While this was happening sushim came to kaurwaki, he told her he can get her out and help her take her revenge on ashok. At first she did t believe him, but she was going crazy in there. She agreed, and sushim told her whats going to happen, this made her smirk.

"Just wait ashok, i will make sure you pay for everything" she says getting out the jail. He took her to a room and told her to change, once done sushim led her to the court. Ashok and everyone waited to see the princess they chose for him, once she arrive sushim told one ofthe guards to announced her name. He nod and told everyone that kalinga pri cess kaurwaki was here, everyone started mumbling. Ashok surprise to hear that name, heart race. When she walk in everyone was taken by her beauty. Ashok on the other hand was surprise for the second time, so was kaurwaki. "YOU! " they both said

To be continued...

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