Sushim and Ahankara [SushKara] OS - The Evil Love Story of Magadh - Page 6

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Posted: 10 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: _barbie



my fav line , "I just wanted to gift your beauty with some more natural beauty." 😳

and this , ----->
Ahankara put her head on Sushim's shoulder and her hands around his arm <------------ i want this scene included in the serial 😳


overall fantastic job done Bishti 👏 i had this smile on my face throughout while reading it 😃



Hehe. Glad I didnt dispapoint u! arey i wanted to write something adventurous 😆😆 But ended up getting romantic lol 😆
Thank u for reading dearie 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: musicndance2

It was very romantic and sweet. Finally they got some time alone without interruptions 😆
I would request you to write one for Ashok too keeping in accordance with history. Also I would like if you continue this one. 😊



Thanks for reading and appreciating! 😊 This is over but I will surely write more on SushKara I love them so much 😉
OK, do you want something on Ashok and Devi/Karurvaki ? Or a normal one?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: melodica

Another beautifully written post Brish! ⭐️

'Lost in Beauty' Rajkumar Sushim sounds so sweeet! ❤️

Luved it n will luv to read more..



sure dear 😉 I will keep on irritating u all with my OSes 😈
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Posted: 10 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: love_chitra

amazing chapter!!!!

wish cv's see this..
ps; would anyone like to read an ff on bindharma?
named as 'The Cupid's Mistake' ?



Me too wish they see it 😆
And yeah, sure we would love to read but if you include Ashoka, Sushim Justin and Noor in it 😉😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55

Thank u 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#56
Wow! It was really nice, the way Sushim took Ahankara to the cliff-side (?)! The pace was cool enough for a really enjoyable read.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57
U didn't pm me but I read anyway. Short sweet and simple and as usual cinematic.
Btw looks like hum jnaha jnaha chalenge
fighting and arguement bhi sath chalenge
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Posted: 10 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar



sure dear 😉 I will keep on irritating u all with my OSes 😈


Will luv to get irritated den 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi!!! My name is Ash😊 I Loved your OS on SushKara!👏👏 Looking forward to read more of it😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Brishti_Sarkar



No Ashok's identity is not revealed. then Sushi cant be in such a good mood 😆 Ashok is just participating in all the wedding preparations coz Bindusara said. 😃
Thank u so much for reading dear.. so happy u loved it!


Dats true 😆
M eagerly w8ing 4 the identity revelation in the show 😃
Always welcome dear. That really is a lovely piece of writing 👏
Edited by Nandini25 - 10 years ago

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