Daastan-e-Ishq II - scene 16 pg 16 - Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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welcome back abidah di...n looks lyk once again u r planning to book my bed in icu...:P
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Updates are availableat the blog www.daastaneishq.wordpress.com

I am at course and that's why updates will be at IF on sunday or monday
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Posted: 13 years ago
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What a great writer you are Abida...so loving ur FF...can't wait for more.
Many thanks
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Scene 3

Viren lifted her up and began to walk towards the cottage. He walked carefully and she just kept looking at him and knew what was going to happen next. She had her head rested on his shoulder and she loved the way he took care of her. She finaly understood what had lacked in her life… It was nothing else than love itself. She felt completed today with Viren.

Suddenly Viren stumbled and both fell with Nivedita screaming. Nivedita fell first and Viren fell on her. Nivedita was so worried about Viren that she started to move to see if he was allright and she found him looking at her with a smile. She realised the position of their body and felt shy. He touhed her jaw and was about to say anything when both of them heard foodsteps.

Someone was getting closer and suddenly they heard someone saying that he has heard "the girls voice Bhaiya ji…" And this Bhaiya ji asked him to look for her. Viren signalled to Nivedita to stay quite and he was ready to get up and see what these two were up to so he could solve the whole mystery himself, when he realised how quick Nivedita pulled him back towards her.

She did not want to lose him and he understood that he should not leave her alone. What if something happened to him? How would Nivedita go home? So stupid of him to behave so idioticily brave, but on the other hand he could not forget the way she had pulled him towards herself. He could not resist lifting his head up and to see her. She looked at him and saw that he was smiling. She knew why he was doing that and then she smiled back.

He just wished that they were somewhere else where he could… Bhaiya ji was saying to other one that they should be going because Viren must be returning and they had plenty of time to do something about all of it later in the hotel. Listening to this Viren thought of a plan.

Some time later he heard a car leaving the spot and still after some time he got up and helped Nivedita to get up. She was frightened but not as much she would have been if she was alone. Viren signalled her to come with him and they reached the cottage and saw that all their luggage was misplaced. Seeing all that Nivedita start to crying and Viren comforted her. She hugged him and he made her sat beside him.

When she felt asleep cryingly she did not know and Viren sat there all night on alert… and thought about how to catch these goons. Whenever Nivedita woke up, he tugged her into sleep again. He loved the way she felt calmness by his touch and the way she without any worry slept for some while. He could see the peace on her face and he wished that the circumstances were different so he could have enjoyed it better.

His whole plan of coming to lover shack was a succes. He knew that those who had been after Nivedita would take their chance here as well. He was succeded in getting them out from their hiding place and now he had to find this Bhaiya ji! It was him who has paid the manager for letting them win the competition. But one thing he did not understand… The guards were outside and he had paid them double to stay alert, then how come no one was outside. He wanted to go out and see, but he couldn't take the chance of leaving Nividita alone in this situation. He himself was gone out after leaving Nivedita to find a place to hide and then be able to see the person come, but… when he had seen none of the guards… He had gone after them to see what had happend… But he could not find anyone.

Even though there were no guards, he was not scared. He had his hand in his pocket and knew that if the time came what to do with that thing. To save Nivedita, he could cross any limit! It was the time for action and then execution of the next plan, but first he had to bring Nivedita safely somewhere and he just knew where and how. This fight was between him and the world whowanted to snatch Nivedita from him! He had not chose the battle, the ground or the weapons… but if it required blood, then he was prepared to give his own at any cost!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Lovely update Abida. Missing Nivren so much now. Keep writing.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one abidah... loved this caring viren... hope he catch the goons and find out who sent them... Continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice update do continue soon please. 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice updates...loved how viren took care of nivi...waiting for ur new updates...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice update. im lovin this FF.please update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Please continue soon. 😊

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