...*Tum Jo AaYE*... { a niviren FF} chap 3 & 4 ud - Page 8

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Posted: 13 years ago
#71

CHAPTER - 4

Next day nivi wake up early in the morning as usual and did her all household chores and decided to go to temple because today she is free from the stupid talks of his maami and her son rohit... geeta wants nivi to get married to her son who is useless , spending his life in his father's earning... Nivi and sharmila is not interested in it and always ignoring geeta's murmering and irritating talks when they around...
Nivi takes the thali and left to the temple...
In chopras all are excited and eagerly waiting for viren who is returning from US after two years, vandana is preparing viren's favorite dishes , gouarv and varsha are ready to welcome their brother in their own way, the entier family and house is very much busy with preparations to welcome their sweet viren..
Viren a young dashing guy with loads of attitude , a perfect guy every girl love to have,, many girls proposed him in mumbai and in US too, many tries to flirt with him, but he is strong and did nt fall into them..
Viren reaches mumbai, gourav informed him that they are staying in kanpur to spend the vaccations , viren told his driver to go home and he will go to kanpur alone in train.. Viren is sitting in a seat near by window, he is now heading to the destination where he waiting for a long time... He closed his eyes and leaned back into the heard board of the seat, the eyes of a girl who he met three years before in the college culturals, he did nt know her name and details,not see her face clearly,,, but her eyes are still imprinted in him, he is earning to see her again... A smile appears on his face while remembering that beautifull moment and the attractive eyes...
TO BE CONTINUED...
Edited by love_never_dies - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#72
Friends i have updated another two chapters of my FF,, forgive my grammatical mistakes and errors,,, hope you all likes it,, thanks for reading... 😃
Edited by love_never_dies - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#73
great bowys di...keep it up..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: karan_13

great bowys di...keep it up..

thanks karan..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey Bowya commenting for the first time on your ff...and my apologies for not commenting before dear...
just read the latest 2 updates and i think we all are lucky that you started your own ff Honey...your ff is different...different characters and different family members...but i am glad that you also included Vandana's character in the ff...because as we all love her
and talking about the updates the updates are pretty good honey...hope that Nivi and Viren meets soon and i think it's Nivi about whom Viren is thinking about...will wait for the next updates ...love you
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Posted: 13 years ago
#76

Originally posted by: edwardcullen19

hey Bowya commenting for the first time on your ff...and my apologies for not commenting before dear...
just read the latest 2 updates and i think we all are lucky that you started your own ff Honey...your ff is different...different characters and different family members...but i am glad that you also included Vandana's character in the ff...because as we all love her
and talking about the updates the updates are pretty good honey...hope that Nivi and Viren meets soon and i think it's Nivi about whom Viren is thinking about...will wait for the next updates ...love you

Thanks dear,,,thanks for your lovely comment neeti... i want to use different names and characters, so i did that,, yes vandana is our favorite my heart does nt want to change her name, this time she is the mother of our viren,,,😊,, i fullfilled my own wish here... thanks for reading sweetie..😳...
love you too...🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: love_never_dies

Thanks dear,,,thanks for your lovely comment neeti... i want to use different names and characters, so i did that,, yes vandana is our favorite my heart does nt want to change her name, this time she is the mother of our viren,,,😊,, i fullfilled my own wish here... thanks for reading sweetie..😳...
love you too...🤗


yeah i know this time she is Viren's mother and i loved this😳.again thanks😡 seems like it's time to stalk you again😆😉...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#78
Bowya... Viren's family changed ... good... now want to how this dashing guy falls for Nivi 😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice updates bowya...loved reading it...finally chopras arrived...n viren about to come...vandana as usual very nice n loving..n who the girl viren remembering n smiling..wating for it soon..😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice chapters bowya, so Nivi and Viren have met in college interesting. waiting for ud and thnx for the pm sweetie it really helps. I am luving how ur ff is going.

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