Dastaan-e-Ishq (Index pg 1) note at pg 89 - Page 13

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Posted: 14 years ago
Beautiful chapter.....

Loved this line...
"It is said that one dies in love, so if this was true, then he couldn't have had a more beautiful death as this."
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Posted: 14 years ago
Omgggg love how you describe what viren was experience. So beautiful. It just keeps getting better. Mwah you a sweetheart doll. Thank you sooo much.
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Posted: 14 years ago
Abidah, thanks once again. Loved last 2 chapters...It summarizes the definition of LOVE. I have no words to write. I am just in the dream land and trying to picturise
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Posted: 14 years ago

Scene 17

She looked into his eyes and the distance between them meant nothing. Slowly they were decreasing and the closer she came, the more got his eyes mystery revealed. It felt like her feet's were not touching the floor, but she was walking on the skies between stars headed towards a destination, which only belonged to her since her creation. His eyes were dragging her towards him and she was thinking that she had heard that eyes are reflection of the heart. If this was the state of his heart, God knows, what his soul's reflection would be like'

He was wandering to find himself. It was to be seen in his eyes. He was lost because he was in love. Usually people get lost in this path, when they get separated, but Viren was lost when he was with his love. Truly his love was unique and different from everyone. He did not wanted to be found, because he wanted to wander in love in eternity.

He had to come back, it was Nivedita, who wished this for the sake of his family. She knew that he was reaching the final destination of love, the complete annihilation, after which the return is impossible. If she let it happen, then the world would lose him forever and he was only to be find by those who themselves was lost on this path.

She was so much near him she could feel his breath and see that his breaths were slowly getting decline. He had not sensed her being so close and she knew that. She looked at him once again and thinking if she should bring him out of this state called ecstasy. Not many get the chance to experience and for some it is a lifetime opportunity. If she let him be as he was now, then he would only belong to love meaning herself.

It was something every woman desired that the man she loves only belongs to her and no one else. She couldn't be that greedy because in her dictionary love meant sharing and she wanted to share him with his and her family. But she was tempted, because she knew that as long as he was in ecstasy then he wouldn't feel pain and if he came back then he had to go through the pain of separation tomorrow, which may ruin him.

She had made her mind up and decided to act upon it.

Edited by savera2007 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ Everyone:

Welcome to my world of love :)

And thx for the LIVE comments... It helps me ;)
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: savera2007

@ Everyone:


Welcome to my world of love :)

And thx for the LIVE comments... It helps me ;)

I am glad that we are welcome in your world.. I love your world of love... Your words have told me the real meaning of Nivi's dialogue to VD - "Koi kisi ko itna pyaar kaise kar sakta hai"...
Please keep writing...
Yeh dil maange more...
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ Anju: In which scene did she say that?
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: savera2007

@ Anju: In which scene did she say that?

Remember, during VD's b'day time when Nivi went in her old room and she sees VD looking at their old pictures with Bhuvan..That time Nivi asks her "how can anybody love somebody so much?"
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ Anju: Thx yaar... I had forgot that scene because it was not a NivRen scene :p
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: savera2007

@ Anju: Thx yaar... I had forgot that scene because it was not a NivRen scene :p

Abidah, ab us baat ki gehrayi pata chali hai.... She herself has a lover who can and will love her to the core - more than his own life.

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