I don't know why i'm like this--Viren

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prajee

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Sana dear... Wonderful writing.... i loved reading.... 😊

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alka

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

Hello Sana

Wow it was wonderful specially the last paragraph 'WHEN YOU GET THE LITTLE'' you are so good each n every words was to good to be true

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UZIS

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

AWESOME REALLY,,, 😛😛😛

damn gud i must say

👏👏👏

u r too gud at expressing the confused state of mind of viren.

Dearest Sana , I wud lik to dedicate the following(describing viren's thoughts) to u so that u can dedicate it to viren, ok

My face streaked with tears
Bringing out my worst fears
I can't say I don't care
Because having you is my only prayer

You once so close and now so far
I don't know where you are
I just want you back with me
That's all I want you see

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mittusingh

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Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: savera2007
In love with these sentences:

"some pains r more enjoyable than happiness."

"When u get liitle,u want more'.When u get more,you desire even more'.But when u lose it,u realize little was enough''"

Uff... This sentence took my breath away for some reasons ;)

Sana - Dear.... U have absolutely done an amazign job at protrayign Viren's character and from the beginnignto the end... U have just opened him like a book and just hoping that he will understand what you have just said and apologize...

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Chandni

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Posted: 14 years ago

#15

beautifylly written. True picture of Viren

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580531

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Posted: 14 years ago

#16

OMG, Sana!!! 🤗 Dear, that is an awesome post. So, well written and you have explained Viren's feelings so beautifully. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. 😊 Similar to Abidah, I am in love with this beautiful thought that you mentioned in the post -

"When u get liitle,u want more.When u get more,you desire even more. But when u lose it,u realize little was enough"

Edited by Excruciating - 14 years ago

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Sumanpreet Ojla

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Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Beautiful post Sana....heres a big hug for u🤗

Just love the way u put Viren's feelings out....it almost made me cry...but love the message u gave him. he really need to open up and not be afraid of saying sorry to his wife...after all he knows how forgiving she is from when he drugged her...Go To Ur Nivi Viren Get Her Before She's Gone Forever

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@Kahani_Ki_Rani

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Posted: 14 years ago

#18

Wow... 👏 ...

that's poetry in motion... simply and meaningful yet very deep!! ... loved it

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FrozenRain

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Thanx a lot guys for ur nice comments...and when u get a little part is not my own creation...i read that words somewhere during my schooldays....i think it's poet elliot's words....but not sure....i don't know why that words affected me a lot and i never forgot that words..so when i wrote this i included that lines.....!!!