Undeclared declaration- RPFC

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The Undeclared Declaration...

Slowly, surely, with fond hopes and fonder dreams,

believing' nevertheless, wondering she came and stood facing him.


"Did you lose on purpose?" she asked.



He came closer and leaning slightly, his arm outstretched on the door,

his eyes peering at hers, his heart envisioning, mind fumbling for an answer , he only looked at her intently '

His response was 'wordless --- both divulging yet concealing'


His eloquent eyes, fixed on hers, fluently poured out his reply:

" If you mean the test, no I didn't.

But if you mean whether I lost the war

in my fight against 'Love', my new-found Enemy,

giving me no peace, prodding me on,
imploring, willing me to fall for you,
to love you, to care for you above all else,

to treasure you , to want you'

then I most surely did lose... long ago!

Lost , not on purpose, but was helpless.
Hence, without rationale, without justification,
without any moral ground, with no intention of losing,
I lost in a flash.



I found it impossible to battle against the ever- raging surge of

Love's onslaught.

So.... in complete defiance of my 'Fight till your last breath ''golden rule I so relish quoting, I quit!! I did not live up to that rule!!

I gave up instantaneously when my enemy , ' Love' struck!


Surrendered and declared " I lost, you can take me captive ".

As if he needed that invitation'

Willing enemy that I was, my surrender was just a formality.

A declaration of lifelong truce -'I won't resist , will give in' - that was my part of the deal.

(Haha!, so unlike a soldier!)



Love already had me enslaved, imprisoned even before the actual warfare began' within his well-lit prison, yes well ' lit , not dark!

Because his prison was burning bright with heartfelt hope and longing.


Making me want to anticipate your affection, prompting me to hope

maybe, just maybe , somehow, someday, you'd fall for me too!

Let me tell you-

He is a real tough enemy!

Never loses, reins you instead, daring you on, thoroughly finishing you!

Now, he is my Master'Jailor , securing me firm with iron chains of guilt'


And I am, my dear, his clandestine captive!

This was his unvoiced answer, blaring loud in his heart!

But he asked, verbally,

"Do you want to tell me something, Naina?"



Her turn to be wordless, voiceless now!



"Do you love me?????" she wanted to ask, point-blank!


She attempted to discern her mentor's answer,
would have loved to hear him herself'

But couldn't bring herself to ask him!






She herself was not free from Love's clutches either'

It was just that enlightenment struck her only now...

"Nahin" she replied instead, shyly, blushing!



Love was a little kinder and slower in his onslaught on her.


Love worked methodically, meticulously, taking her through a myriad emotions, many facets of his nature, before he actually gripped her.

And now, having discerned the feeling accurately, she was overwhelmed!


Some strange bliss and an inkling of a happiness she never knew till then, struck her now.

He? Yes, he! The knight in shining armour every girl dreams of'

The perfect gentleman'was he to be the one for her?


Was this a dream? Was she sleeping?

No'he was right here 'looking so angelic'

It can't be a dream!


She had no absolute clue about his feelings, but her own were becoming comprehensible.

Just standing there, facing his eyes made her feel butterflies fluttering within.

What if he were to read her mind?? She couldn't stand up to him then!

Shyness welling up in her, she stood transfixed, unable to speak, unable to walk away

Two cute endearing persons, a charming couple in the making,


standing near the door,
oblivious of the teeming busy academy just outside,

looking deep into each others' eyes, wistfully,
examining ' Love' their common enemy, now busy at work stirring, evoking himself in their hearts'
grasping the magnitude of the attack on them ,
becoming conscious, finally, of the yearning they unknowingly had felt for each other'all along.

They continued gazing'



But time never stands still'so the reverie had to be broken.

It was, seconds later .

But, by then, one thing was made clear.

Willingly, eagerly, they both recognized quietly

They were made for each other!





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Edited by ~~ashi~~ - 16 years ago
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Edited by ~~ashi~~ - 16 years ago
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Congratulations everyone for fc no 67.

Nallis, ur fic is beautiful πŸ‘

Shaina, thx for all the help.Next time im saving all of them πŸ˜†

Major editing work left- will do it tomorrow.

Riyaa, this time my fc opening was very eventful πŸ˜†
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Congratulations to the Opening of the 67th RPFC!!!!!
😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊 😊
πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³ πŸ₯³
πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘



Great work Ashi!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Lovely description of the scene Nallis!!!!πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘
Their emotions were beautifully expressed!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘




Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago
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Congratulations to all on the opening of 67th fan club....
@ Nallis...wonderful writing....it's beautiful
@Ashi...Too good...very well done....hhahahaha the scene was
quite the same....eventful...??? you bet...
very well done dear
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Now I will leave...bye dears take care....
Goodnight Shai , Sarah..and Ashi...
Ashi you need a good sleep dear...
bye all of u
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congratulations and celeberation we reached another fc congrats everyone for the 67th one

coool name ashi and nallis great workπŸ‘πŸ‘
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good bye riyaa

i will leave too

bye ashi shaii nallis riyaa

take care good night
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Good Night Riya!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊
And Sweet Dreams!!!!
Edited by Shaina_b - 16 years ago

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