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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Do put the Disclaimer that the script has nothing to do with any living or dead persons and any similarity is purely a coincidence
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Dont forget to Include item song
Aye hippo jara nach ke dikkah 😆

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u0mI5A2AB0w[/YOUTUBE]


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jibber-jabber


And the prince's mother starts hating the English dancer and wants the prince to marry Munshi's daughter. There's a childhood friend of prince who is attracted to him but the prince is indifferent. He conspires to break up the prince and the English dancer. Meanwhile the prince starts taking drugs...


And there is a rumor spread in the city that Prince is gay and is in homosexual relation with his trusted friend and army commander whose name is Bayaan kerji.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hippo,You should hook Ranveer and Dpad's aunty up,much better, or have both R hook up.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Too many characters and subplots to follow in the movie unless you are planning a TV serial.
- Rishi Kapoor as businessman husband/drunk
- Shabana Azmi as sober society queen
- Ranbir Kapoor as responsible older son
- Ranveer Singh as wayward second son
- Parneeti Chopra as his fiancee

- Anupam Kher as obedient munshi
- Deepika as his daughter who goes abroad on a scholarship and returns sophisticated and rich
- Deepika's mother died while giving birth to her and therefore Deepu is considered Panauti

You could remake Sabrina in Hindi with this basic cast and story 😛 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

Oye Hippo ki haal chaal hain bhidu. Meeting longtime after BB forum. Miss your howlarious posts man in BB forum. 😆


Good to see you..sorry missed your post as we maybe posted at same time.

yes BB lol



Originally posted by: jibber-jabber


And the prince's mother starts hating the English dancer and wants the prince to marry Munshi's daughter. There's a childhood friend of prince who is attracted to him but the prince is indifferent. He conspires to break up the prince and the English dancer. Meanwhile the prince starts taking drugs...


oh wait a minute...

drugs were from closet of aunt priyanka...

Originally posted by: MoStLyHaRmLeSs.

Do put the Disclaimer that the script has nothing to do with any living or dead persons and any similarity is purely a coincidence


of course

Originally posted by: Bazigar

Dont forget to Include item song

Aye hippo jara nach ke dikkah 😆

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=u0mI5A2AB0w[/YOUTUBE]




i prefer

hippo beautiful kar gaya chull

Dekh tera rang saawla hua baawla
hippoi nahi hai tu hai garam maamla
Bolti bandh sab ki, kahein kya bhala
Kuchh bhi kahaa nahi jaaye



Originally posted by: Hydro123


And there is a rumor spread in the city that Prince is gay and is in homosexual relation with his trusted friend and army commander whose name is Bayaan kerji.


Bayaan had his eyes set on prince..who was on drugs



Originally posted by: NepaliStrawbery

Hippo,You should hook Ranveer and Dpad's aunty up,much better, or have both R hook up.


Aunty had her eyes set on Ranveer as well but when older brother sonu refused her there was little chance for her getting ranveer...

Originally posted by: Justmoi

Too many characters and subplots to follow in the movie unless you are planning a TV serial.

- Rishi Kapoor as businessman husband/drunk
- Shabana Azmi as sober society queen
- Ranbir Kapoor as responsible older son
- Ranveer Singh as wayward second son
- Parneeti Chopra as his fiancee

- Anupam Kher as obedient munshi
- Deepika as his daughter who goes abroad on a scholarship and returns sophisticated and rich
- Deepika's mother died while giving birth to her and therefore Deepu is considered Panauti

You could remake Sabrina in Hindi with this basic cast and story 😛 😆


You missed the most important member of my cast - world famous quanton tarintino fame - hollywood star - aunt priyanka.

Edited by hippopotamus - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hippo I wanna see ur replies in song like u use to post in BB forum lol. Those are damn howlarious including those phunny pics n memes. 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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SLB level melodrama! 😆

Only someone has to die in the end. Make it Beera cause he's the bad one hurting innocent princess Deepu. 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: Lilac_N_Maple

SLB level melodrama! 😆

Only someone has to die in the end. Make it Beera cause he's the bad one hurting innocent princess Deepu. 😆


I think you missed the King falling from the upper floor part. That changed everything including the queen.

King was quietly sneaking from the window when his glass slipped out of the window. He went to grab the glass but unfortunately he did not realize that he would fall. There was a big impact when he landed.

Some suggest that Aunt Priyanka might have given a push.
Edited by hippopotamus - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
Melodramatic plot. Hopefully u are vying for a soap serial version and not a movie plot 😆.
Sonu Sood is a complete miscast...more suitable for negative roles. Instead of SS, Aditya Roy will be more convincing.
Plot lacks any real action...add an impressive action/ fight scene between Ranveer and Ranbir.

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