Originally posted by: ratna.nanda
Meenu,my dear🤗.I can't find enough words to thank you for writing this wonderful part.seriously! And you included their engagement too!thank you.Though I need to read the part once more,I'll try to finish my long reply/review within an hour as you asked. (I hope you'll be online to reply back.)So comments on part3:this is something that is not like me to write and pull it off smoothly.
Are you talking about the very first scene of this part meenu??hmmm, even I didn't expect amarendra to be so open with his confession.
But we all have watched ipkknd and having read many ffs,I can assure you that for portraying romantic scenes,there are different ways for a writer. And you pulled off the first scene very well yaar👏. (If such a scene was shown in the movie, I'm sure die -hard prabhaska fans would've definitely fainted seeing the explosive chemistry 😳.
well i mean this chap completely😆
Sivagami smiled Happily. She was about to answer her when she took a look at Amarendra's face who shook his head in a NO. Sivagami frowned.
Not only shivgami, but even I frowned 😆.why did amarendra shake his head??pls explain meenu.
don't you think if Sivagami announced or even let it slip that devasena s to her son' bride without her knowing or giving her concern.. what do u think ll be her reaction?😆
I loved the entire scene of amarendra entering devasena 's suite to meet her.that sequence is the best in all the 3 parts of the ff.How amarendra made devasena realise her importance in his life,how devasena announced their engagement to him in a dignified, royal way.And how devasena sweety stressed her name only,without the formal rani prefix for him to address.
i want her to look like a bride accepting her groom's proposal as well as a queen taking decision.. that was the only thing that came to my mind😃
Shivgami :Hmm Baahu! I thought that I will have tough time searching a bride for you. You saved me the job!
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Nice dialogue!
something my mother would defo say If I were to have love marriage🤣
Also You wonderfully put in words of my suggestion of devasena inviting kattappa to sit with them,but I think you already had the idea.isn't it??anyways it was a good scene. Well, actually it was just a scene which I shaped properly after your idea😉 so u have the credits babydoll😆
Waiting for your reply meenu.
P.S. will miss your ff meenu. But I think it'd be even more fun to read 10 or more completed chapters together 😉.
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