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Posted: 13 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: -Xaffron-

OMG!!! Lovely going, Koiza.k!!

Yes, Priyanka visits the bar and finds Naina (Sonam Kapoor) half-dead on the floor, bleating like a raped goat. 🤣. That's when Priyanka runs toward her. Naina opens her mouth, points her finger at something and passes out, rather dies.

Priyanka rushes toward the urn Naina points at. Next to the urn is a letter... Priyanka opens the letter to read.

... CONTINUE

The letter said vishal is innocent, there is someone who is trying to harm him and we have to find that person soon before he leaves the country.
😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: liverach

Xaffronnn I LOVE these!


I knwo this is your thread but I'm just gonna suggest one tweak >.<
try limiting the size of the story addition. somethnig like 1 sentence, could even limit the number of words or something

it's easier that way, insipired from twitter lol xD



Hey liverach. Thanks for stopping by. 😃 Please do add your version to the story. Right now Kozia and I are running the show. Please join us. 😊
Edited by -Xaffron- - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OK GUYS...

1 SENTENCE PER PERSON SHOULD SUFFICE. KEEP ROCKING!!!


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Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Priyanka Desai looks around helplessly, calls the cops, and hides the letter in her purse quickly.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#25
Priyanka is baffled by the letter, mostly because Reshma had left her melony perfume scent all over it before stuffing it into the urn. Priyanka shoots the dirtiest face she's ever been able to make, at Reshma's blingy corpse.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: liverach

Priyanka is baffled by the letter, mostly because Reshma had left her melony perfume scent all over it before stuffing it into the urn. Priyanka shoots the dirtiest face she's ever been able to make, at Reshma's blingy corpse.



Clarification: Priyanka shoots Reshma? 😲 With a camera?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#27
err.. aside from her disturbed eyes LOL
she indeed takes pictures of the scene, of Reshma's dead face, of the urn, of the room in general
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Posted: 13 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: liverach

err.. aside from her disturbed eyes LOL
she indeed takes pictures of the scene, of Reshma's dead face, of the urn, of the room in general



Gotchya.. I was like she's the lawyer. Why the heck would she shoot (with a gun) at a suspect? 😆

Anyway, continuing...

She quickly takes Reshma's pictures. That's when Shalini, the cop, arrives at the scene. Shalini looks at the dead Reshma and signals her subordinates to investigate.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#29
When suddenly,Reshma's pictures get lost.😲
Edited by .SB. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#30
Priyanka visits vishal asking him if he had an enemy or someone to extract information about him
btw where is shalini being lost in the track, some one add her scene too 😉

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