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Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

first of all I am very happy that you will write two separate comments for two parts😳
O, that will be bigger

First alternative ending...

My my Kanu i gotta say i was reading this part so carefully..there were too many Armaans inside...😆 😆


Ya, Too many Armaans I know I confused you people, sometimes I was also confused😆

BUT I love love love this ending SO MUCH..!! Finally Bharti realised her true lover..!! Her friend Armu..!! Yessssssss!! I love this ending...and am so happy...!! 😃

I am very happy that you liked the ending🤗

Gosh this Armaan (Bharti's friend) is such a gem..the way he still thinks about Jia...and depsite Rocky going to jail..he still want to make them a happy family once Rocky is out..!!...

ya, he is really a gem, a very sweet guy😳

.Am proud of Bharti's friend...and good that they ended up together...

He deserves Bharti's love😳

and that Rocky went to Jail...though he wasn't at fault...but he killed Sam so he instead of Amu deserves to go to jail!!....

ya, some one has to go to the jail na?😭

and i love the ending..!! Poor Armu wanted to cry...and they hug each other..me likes...😳


Me too likes😆

...happy that Bharti still once to help get Rocky out of Jail..one thing though he really loves his daughter, Jia....:)

Bharti really loved Jia, and she had sympathy for Rocky😳 She is a very good girl😃

Will be reading the other ending...!!😉

jaldi jaldi and give your long comment🤗

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

To Missus Kanninikabasuray

Imagination ho...to aisi.. warna na ho........

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

wow Tanu, I loved the sweet cute men who are clapping for me🤗

Thoda detail mein comment kar do😆

Originally posted by: Blueberry_07

Second ending..

OMG such a long comment😃

Hmm..okay after reading this part..i am liking Rocky...because one he is innocent..and secondly his relationship with Jia..the father-daughter relationship is so sweet...and also Rocky is so hot man..!!..Am SO picturing Aamir at CINTAA...😳 😳....and the way you said Rocky came in that ouftit..and the sunglasses...and brushing his hair aside...Woah...!! ☺️..Totally 😎....He seems to be rocking in that outfit..!!....

I am glad that you are liking him, Ya, he was innocent, and hot too😳 he was really heroic😳

Also i loved how there was a twist in the story and ther was another person involved in the murder of Sam..that too being Sam's stepdad...Now that is an unexpected twist..and i like the way you brought it in...and so very nice of Rocky to help Armu..and then vice versa when Armu helped Rocky get Bharti...

I am happy to know that you loved the twist😃 it was really difficult to think

Also at the end i liked what Bharti said..that she only fell in love with the now Armaan(Rocky)...and that during college days she only had an infatuation for him..that makes more sense...😊...i would rather she fall in love with this Rocky Armaan now when he became a father..then how he was in college...So all in all..this other alternate ending was 👍🏼 too..

chalo, tumhe pasand to aya😆 thank god I brought Jia in between😆

.BUT....I have to pick which one i like right...??? So my choice goes to:

Ending ONE

Why?

Well it's because i've always like the Armaan Sinha more (Bharti's friend)...I mean as i said in my previous post..the fact that he was willing to take the blame and go into prison showed how much he cared for Bharti..and love her..and also having gone into prison..he still was not selfish..and didn't want Bharti to dig up evidence on Rocky..because he thought abt Jia's feelings..Now i know you didn't show the father side of Armu (Bharti's friend) but with him caring for Jia like that already shows his father side...and i prefer him anytime over Rocky (though Rocky is oh-so HOT...😳)...but i like how this Armu gave up his love..and still never forced Bharti to like him..him taking the blame already proves that he is Bharti's true lover..! and am all for Bharti's college friend Armaan Sinha ANYTIME..!!...So i like the first ending...cos they end up together...and also even though they end up together...they still want to help Rocky come out of jail...So pure at heart...😊

I have not thought so much about him😆 you really liking him a lot. I am so happy that you are loving a character which I have created.😳

Rocky doesn't deserve Bharti's love...BUT Bharti derserves Armaan Sinha's love...I hope you get this line am saying....😃.....😆 😆..

I understood, but kabhi kabhi pyar mein logic nahi hota😳

All in all..i must say Kanu you writing One Shots..is so much of fun to read..though I gt very confused many times...But excellent job on both parts..!! 👏 👏 👏

Great endings..and i love how ther was two endings too..!!...Very creative i must say....but since you asked to choose i chose one...😳😊.....

Do carry on writing more because you're really AWESOME at coming up with such short stories..!! 🤗 I loved this whole Short Story very much..!! Loved it..!!..❤️ and well gotta agree with Tanu!!..Hats off girl to your wondeful imagination...!!........👏

Was a pleasure reading them..!! 😊

Looking forward to more from you...! 😃

OMG, too much love happenning😳

This is for you

Kanu... OMG.. 🤪🤪🤪🤪🤪 like.. where did u get such KILLER writing skills yaar.. goodness gracious.. what an EPI err ENDING.. errr double DHAMAKEDAR ENDINGs.... !!

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Kanu... OMG.. 🤪 like.. where did u get such KILLER writing skills yaar.. goodness gracious.. what an EPI err ENDING.. errr double DHAMAKEDAR ENDINGs.... !!

🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗

n i so wanna strangle myself for the absolute TRASHY 007 ish.. thot in my head during the second epi... i seriously SUCK 😭

Don't say this Tanu, it was not bad a bad idea, but I really like Armaan so can't think anything bad about him😳. Don't say such bad things about yourself, I feel really bad😒

Absolutely loved the endings.. n well a round of CONGRATULATIONs for such an awesome EFFORT 👏

Now coming to the endings Firstly.. me luvd both the Endings.. very well thot thru.. n situationally balanced.. u hv justified both n given the OS a logical ending... kudos on that..👍🏼

Finally to which one i chose.. well.. honestly... its definitely the First one.. for i ..from my POV find it more logical and naturally flowing to the earlier epi.. and ofcourse.. the fact that Armu (non-Rocky one) has been so SELFLESS in his love for Bharti.. strikes a gr8 chord in my heart.. !! ❤️

Also that tho he loves n loved Bharti all along. .he never motivated her to frame Armu (Rocky one) to get himself out.. coz he always thot of Jia.. n that earns him... Loads of brownie points...!! 👏

I did.. really like the idea that the murder was an accident.. n well Rocky just fled out of fear.. still he deserved his punishment which he got.. !! Happy that Bharti still decided to help him out..😛

awwwwwww, you too loving him, I really didn't know that I have potrayed him so well😳

Coming to the second.. one.. luvd it.. n the fact that u created such an amazing Twist in the story abt Sams dad.. that was a FINE touch..😉 but i felt.. that there were too many assumptions n circumstantial twists in it.. for it to be true... n plus.. i thot.. Armu (non-rocky) one surely deserved BHARTI more... soooooo m BIASED towards the first one.....❤️


Gald to know you liked the plot, it was really confusing, I know and it was really becoming very big,so I summed up in few words😳

& once again....

HAIL to u... for u truly.. are EXEMPLARY....👏

Looking fwd to the next OS.... already....

Thanks a lot Tanu🤗
Yes, I have some plots in my mind😆

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

Tanu, Vini, I am logging out. Will reply later🤗

Goodnight😃

Originally posted by: Armu4eva

Tussi ja rahe ho.. tussi na jao..😭😭😭

Kidding. .well dear.. wish u a very gud nite.. tk care.. n sleepwell.. 😛