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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: BlessedCuteOne

beautiful yaara jus caught up amazin loved it cont soon xx



wooow girl welcome back 🤗 thanx for catching up 😃
so glad u like it it
i will continue soooon
take care
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Naley

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Posted: 15 years ago



CHANGE

part 21


Armaan: patently relieved broke in to a dazzling smile takes her hand gently placing the ring into her finger swooped her up onto his arms turns her around and held her in his arms looking into her eyes I'll always love you always Bharti Khanna as he kissed her softly on her forehead cradling her to him and rocking her gently ' all the children came running towards Armaan & Bharti with huge smiles on their faces


Bharti: still in Armaans arms quickly brings her attention to the kids who were surrounded them ..she cleared her throat ...Armaan I think you should put me down now...

Armaan: still lost in her eyes.....do I have to ..?

Bharti: the kids....

Armaan: still lost in her .. he drawled, those brilliant brown eyes of his narrowing upon her held her even more tightly against him ... what?

Bharti: through her teeth ..Armaan ...Kids

Armaan: god I would love to have kids with you..

Bharti: what?

Armaan: kids ..I was thinking of having four

Bharti: what?

Armaan: four is okay right ...

Bharti: Armaan ..!!!

Armaan: okay baba lets have three then ..

Bharti: with loud noise Armaan the kids!!! Bring Armaan back to the play ground surrounded with kids jumping up and down with laughter

Armaan: the kids !! O the kids...the kids looking down at them with fake smile..as he puts Bharti down quickly...fully embarrass..trying to explain the whole carrying Bharti marriage thing to the kids ...a little girl who was very attach to Bharti who was confuses of what was happening came near Armaan and hugged him and asked are you going to marry Bharti Didi right now? ..Before Armaan could answer the question ..

A angry forceful voice answered behind them ...NO...he will never marry Bharti ..I wont let him ...!!! everyone turn to see Mr.Khanna standing in the playground ..with the police...

The little girl got so scared she hugged Armaan tightly..while Bharti was shocked to see her dad with Police ..her heart was pounding in fear...

Armaan: sweet heart don't worry as he kept the little girl down..go inside with your friends okay ...Bharti didi and I will come in soon ..while all the children went inside in fear leaving Armaan & Bharti alone with Mr.khanna & the police .......Mr.khanna was steaming in anger

Mr.Khanna: nastily, his eyes darkly gleaming in anger at Armaan & Bharti .. How dear you Armaan ....I trusted you and this is how you pay me back by tricking my daughter in to marriage inspector arrest this man ...

Bharti: coming in front of Armaan dad ..please... don't do this he never tricked me into anything... I love him dad!! he is everything to me....Please don't do these

Mr.khanna: I dint believe it when your step mum told me about you & Armaan's relationship I couldn't....but you prove me wrong once again.. I can't tell you how disappointed I am in you !!! For god sake Bharti! haven't you got any pride ? shaking her violently .. Can't you see he is using you, you're nothing to him Bharti .. he have blinded you with all of this his in love with your money not you!! As he grabs Bharti's hand pulling her away from Armaan

Bharti: shouting out loud No ..No...Let me go... I love Armaan ...he is the only person who opened my eyes ...No...No....you cant stop me ..I love him ...I'm going to marry him dad whether you like it or not he will be my husband.. You can't stop me...we love each other dad and there is nothing you can do a bout it ... let go off me as she frees her hand hides behind Armaan holding onto him tightly....

Armaan: enough Armaan snapped , spreading his hands out in anger... sir please don't do these.. I respect you in every way but right now Mr.Khanna the way you think just change it completely ...I'm deeply sorry you had to find out about us in this way , but I'm not sorry I fell in love with your daughter and that I want to spend the rest of my life with her only her , I am madly in love with your daughter as he tightly holds onto Bharti's hand...only your daughter with great respect sir I love Bharti only Bharti.. not your wealth , Not you're Power and not your name and there No way in hell I'm going to lose her not to you..!

Mr.Khanna: eyes spitting fire at Armaan...you low caste ...you are standing here right now is because of me..the person you are today is because of me ..you think I'll give my daughters hand to back stabber like you never!! I'll never let you have Bharti never...Inspector Arrest this man right now !!!

the police grabbed Armaan trying to separate Bharti while Armaan fought his way not letting go of Bharti trying to get free but suddenly blow comes down hard onto Armaan's head losing his grip on Bharti's hand as he falls down Bharti screamed falling down with him'while her hands was filled with blood...form Armaans head ..

Bharti: broke down into a flood of tears screaming No ..No..No..Armaan ...Armaan ..wake up Please ..Please wake up ...holding his face with her hands trying to stop the Blood ... Armaan please wake up there going to take me away Armaan.. please wake up..please....please say something Armaan..Armaan ..Armaan please say something ...Armaan .. wake up ..please Please...screaming in panic ...

Mr.khanna : you disgusted me Bharti..!! stop it right now .. grabs her hand... Pulls her away from Armaan ..dragging her ..Bharti fights her dad not letting go of Armaan ..Mr.khaan raises his hand in anger to slap her but he stops...shivering in anger.

Bharti: stared at him in anger.. tears running down her face...screaming.. why did you stop dad hit me.. hit me.. hit me...taking her dads hands and hitting herself ..continuously ..do what every you want with me ..but please don't hurt him ...Please don't hurt him I beg of you dad please don't hurt Armaan Please don't take him away from me Please..!!falling down onto the ground lifelessly ...

Mr.khanna: grabs her again.. Pulling her along the ground ..Bharti continuously screams for Armaan....while police takes Armaan..away.....


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Edited by naley4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow......naley....super roller coaster ride yaar............ the beginning was all so very happy n mushy...n i luvd how Armu said... 'thinking of hvng 4 kids' 😳 aww how naughty is my janu... luv him...
n alas...............this Mr. Khanna had to come in like Amrish Puri n separate my Raj-Simran aka... ArBi....n omg... Armu got hit.. n unconsious 😲..who dared touch my janu..i will kill him 😡
Gosh so very worried for Armus well being..n poor Bharti..she must b shattered........................😔..gosh naley.... pls plz update quickly m worried...very very worried..!!
n dear....luv ur writing as always... keep rockingggggggggg ❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
o ma lord u ave 2 cont awsum yaar xx
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome epi naley
But feeling bad for Arbi
Cont sooooon

TC
Mahnaz

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Posted: 15 years ago
Sis............beautiful update.......
but em crying for Bharti and Armaan.......
plzzz bring them back together.........
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Posted: 15 years ago
its beautifully written .... 👏
loved reading it a lot ...😛
felt really bad for ArBi ...😭
please continue soon ....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Oh Naley....This part was very sad..kinda intense...
Can't believe Bharti's father came and spoil their perfect moment..after the proposal....
The way he dragged Bharti away....:(....and Armaan getting hurt..:(...
The starting part with Armaan teasing Bharti about the baby was really cute..😳😆....I loved how he carry on saying.."5 kids..?"...."oh okay then 4..?".....😆 😆....That was nice..!!
Wonder what's gonna happen next..plz do continue yea..🤗
It's getting very intense...i was totally hooked onto this part...😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 30

OK one word " AWWWWWW"😳😳😳😳(dont know if thats a word😆)
but yaar such a sweet part 😳😳
the way armaan gave her that surpris
and then he said all those sweet things... awwww😳😳😳
man his words made my heart beat fast😳😳

"Armaan: Bharti I don't pretend to know what love is for everyone, but I can tell you what it is for me; love is knowing all about someone, and still wanting to be with them more than any other person, love is trusting them enough to tell them everything about yourself, including the things you might be ashamed of, love is feeling comfortable and safe with someone, but still getting weak knees when they walk into a room and smile at you." "I love you not only for what you are but for what I am when I am with you.

My love is you Bharti to the world you may be just one person, but for me you are my world and I know we need more time for all of these and is not normal but what I'm feeling is definitely not normal and to he honest with you Bharti ..I don't ever want to be normal not with you .. I'll say it again I could love you forever Bharti Khanna ....will you marry me ? "

awww.... mar jawa 😳😳..... each and every word was like coming from his heart and he meant them😳.... and the way u wrote it yaar.... its all the magic u created😳😳😳😳... u really are a feb writter yaar😛.... its a treat reading this FF.... awsome.... and yaar bharti's lines were really perfect yaar... its like this FF have tht reality and they behave like a real couple will behave😳...... this is the best part of this FF.... all looks real😛
I love it
and love u 😳
awsome
*muwah* for this part 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

part 31

HOW COULD HE😡😡😡..... bharti's dad is a hitler😡....
KABAB MAIN HADI....
well after that sweet moment of Arbi u showed this ..... i am sad....
but i a waiting to see what happend next....
whats wrong with her father
he got marry and now he is stepping in betw Arbi
write soon yaar
Edited by ghazal_naz - 14 years ago

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