My FF~~'Only Hope'~~Updated Part 11 (Page 17) - Page 11

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sukirtiprincess

keep going sis luvv ur updates



Thank you sooooooooo muchhhhhhhhh dear......😃😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great part, love them teasing Bharti about her boyfriend. The fall was described so beautifully and romantically.😳 Love how Armaan and Bharti fight whenever they talk.😆 Like how she thought of the Armaan from her past, I know it'll be a while until they respectively find out that it's the boy/girl from their past, but can't wait for it! Loved how she turned back to earch for him.... Can't wait for the next part😛
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: *Sohana*Singh*

Great part, love them teasing Bharti about her boyfriend. The fall was described so beautifully and romantically.😳 Love how Armaan and Bharti fight whenever they talk.😆 Like how she thought of the Armaan from her past, I know it'll be a while until they respectively find out that it's the boy/girl from their past, but can't wait for it! Loved how she turned back to earch for him.... Can't wait for the next part😛



Thank you sooooooooo muchhhhhh dear......😃😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

She went away form their….Armaan gave a cute smile….. And after walking a few steps…. She turned back and but Armaan was not their…. She started to search for him…. Then suddenly……

Someone touched her hands… she turned to see who it was….


Part 10


It was Payal….

Payal: how long to wash your hands stupid…..??.. Come let's go…

Bharti was searching for Armaan but no where in sight…..she was disappointed…..and she goes with Payal…..

Meanwhile Bhaskar is bugging Armaan….

And Armaan was sitting on couch and closing his ears hard…..

Bhaskar: I asked you to get the information about her…. But you…you started your own love story ah…. What about my love….. Are you listening.???....

Armaan shook his head up and looked at Bhaskar…..

Armaan: Hey stop…. My love story…. Are you serious…. I asked her for coffee to know about your lover… that's it……

Then suddenly Bhaskar got down on his knees and started to plead Armaan

Bhaskar: Hey please please dude……..help me…..help me….

Armaan:[lifting Bhaskar up] hey stop it….. why your sooo crazy…. Wait I will find her ok…. Now I need to get to my place…mom will be waiting for me….. fine I will see you later…. Bye

Bhaskar: Hmmmm…. Fine bye….

Bharti's Home:

Payal and Bharti were having dinner….. payal was eating her food…. But Bharti is thinking about the incident happened in restaurant …..

Payal noticed Bharti….

Payal: Oye…. In dreamland ah??????????...... why not eating your food…. Look am finished eating…. Your still not yet started….. what happen to you???....

Bharti: Nothing…..[still depressed]

Payal stood up and came near Bharti ….. she took Bharti into her arms and gave her a warm hug……

Payal: now tell me…. What happen????.... why your soo depressed???....

Bharti: Don't know yaar…. Today at restaurant……..

She started to tell about the incident [flash back]….

Payal: What he called you out for a date???.... and you said no… why??....

Bharti: Payal are you nuts??... How can I go on date without knowing about the person…..

Payal: okay… if your not interested then why are you still thinking about him???......

Bharti felt disturbed….

Bharti: no am not thinking about him…. No not at all….

Payal: Don't bluff…… if nothing is inside you… then why you searched for him afterwards….. Bharti please…. Try to face anything… don't hind….

Bharti took Payal's hand and was holding them….

Bharti: I dont know payal….. I seriously don't know…. For a moment I thought that I was in heaven…. Those warm hands gave me some confidence… but I don't know him…. Then why it makes me feel that he is closer to me…. Know one thing his name is also Armaan…. But……

Payal was noticing bharti when she was telling about Armaan….Bharti's feelings were priceless…she was totally lost…she had a cute smile when she was describing about him….

Payal: Hey dear…. I can understand….Only one person can make us feel like that… but with out knowing…. Don't worry… lets see… what god has written…. Now stop thinking about this and go to sleep…..

Bharti: oh…..ok… hey tomorrow is Sunday….. we need to go shopping… remember…..???..

Payal: oh yes…. I remember….. good night….

Bharti: good night dear……

Bharti went upstairs to her room…. When she was walking towards her room suddenly she heard a voice…..

"shall we meet for cup of coffee"

Bharti didn't understand who was it….. she looked back… but no one was there…. Then suddenly… when she turned back… she saw Armaan standing before her…. She was shocked….!!!!

Bharti: What are you doing her…???????????? How did you get inside…..

Armaan: I came for you….. You know when I first saw you…. I had a feeling that your mine….. I tried to control myself but…. I am totally lost… I cant find where my heart is….. Now it is with you…. Will you keep it safe.???

Bharti was keeping on staring at him…. Totally lost in his Magical eyes…..They were keeping on looking into each others eyes…. Armaan came near Bharti….. And looked very deeply into her eyes….. Then there was a beautiful romantic music…. He came near her face and leaned forward to kiss her….. Form that magical kiss…. Both went into a beautiful dream….

Let's see how the dream is… shall we…??

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U-AgqZemcIY



Then suddenly Bharti woke up…. And then she realized that everything was a dream……She Laughed to herself and went back to sleep continuing the Wonderful dream…..

Meanwhile Armaan was upstairs looking at the moon……Smiling…..

Then his mom came to him….

Mom: Is the girl beautiful???????...

Armaan: [still in dreams]…. Yes… she is the most beautiful girl…..

Then he realized that his mom is there….

Armaan:[hesitating] Mom…??..

Mom:[Gave a smile] Did you tell her???...

Armaan came near his mom and Hugged her….

Armaan: I don't know who she is mom??.. but being with her makes me feel like that am in heaven….It is the most beautiful moment…….EVER….but….

Mom: Beta…. First understand who she is…. Then you will come to know that your love is real or not….Now go to sleep…

Armaan: Ohk Mom….Thank you….!!!!!

He gave a charming smile and went to sleep…..

Monday Morning

Bharti was as usual went to office….

She entered her office and was working in her cabin….

Jene came inside and said that AJ called her…..

She came out of her cabin and was busy walking …. Then suddenly….

Lets watch it….


http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bn-HsacFoVw

After that Bharti gave a shocking look at him and went away to AJ's cabine…..

Armaan: What is she doing here????...

Bharti asked AJ

Bharti: Who is that guy sir???...

AJ: Ah….Glad you came….he is our new Photographer….

Bharti was super shocked to here this….

Bharti: New Photographer???.......

AJ: AH yes…. He is really talented and he works very hard…..You need to sit with him and tell him in detail about our office and this month issue….

Bharti : But sir… why don't you tell gyan??

AJ: Bharti… no questions… it is my order you go now…..

Bharti:[Worried] Okay…

She went out of his cabin and saw Armaan waiting in her cabin….

She was much tensed to get inside…. But with hesitation she opened the door….

Armaan stood up by seeing Bharti……

Bharti took her seat and drank a glass of water…. Both of them were so uncomfortable … and didn't talk for a few minutes….

Armaan: So you're the chief editor ah??...

Bharti: hmmm… yes… so where did you work before???..

Armaan: trendz magazine….

Bharti: so why did you leave the job?

Armaan: Salary was not increased…

Bharti: oh…..so…

She started to tell about her Men's magazine…. And show him some of documents and papers… and started to tell about this months layout…..Armaan listened very carefully….

After finishing…

Bharti: congrats… it will be pleasure to work with you…

Armaan: me to….[gave a sweet smile]

Both of them shake hands…. But both of them very again lost in their eyes… then suddenly……


to be conti....😃😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
ArBi lost in each others dreams... n in each others eyes.. oh gosh.. i m going to keep drooling today.. 😍
Really luvd the instrumental music u blended in..suited perfectly..!! 👏 n the cute scene was shooo shweet... n cutee.. 🤗
I realy felt gud reading the payal-bharti convo.. oh..wish me had a sister as sweet as Payal.n cute as Bharti.. 😳 n yahoo.. Armu in MU... no wonder Bharti is fidgeting.. 😉
Luvd it hasini.. waiting for the next..❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome Awesome Awesome.....😊
Loved it and the bits which you showed us in the middle are wonderful Hasini...
India Forums is very lucky to have talent like you on board....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
whoa Hasini ...beautiful update ,,👏👏
too good yaar ...luved it so very much ...!
the music & the cute Arbi part made it more special ...!
Keep it up ..!
👍🏼

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Posted: 15 years ago
Arbi's dreams and love is beutyful
feb job dude
loved it
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Posted: 15 years ago
The music is really good .... loved reading this part a lot ... the dream sequence was beautifully written ... great work dear 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow girl that was superb👏👏👏 i really thought that it will be armman in the start but it was payal But i love the way they meet in MU Beautiful
wow Amazing part cant wait to read the next part continue soooon !!!!🤗
take care
naley

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