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Posted: 15 years ago
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guys pls give ur comments if dont like some plot i will change it also tell me any other ideas u r having i will include that also 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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BB2 Episode 7

Bharti & Payal reach home.
Bharti: is gita ki bachi ko find out karna hi hoga.soch payal soch wo kaha gayi hogi.hamne last me use dadar railway station mei dekha tha.
Payal remembers abt the commotion Bharti created at the Dadar station.
Payal:kaise find out kare uska kuch ata pata bhi nahi hai hamare paas.jaldi find out karna hai bhaskar.is naye bhaskar ne mujhse aate hi flirt kar raha tha.wo tumari tarah hi baat karta tha.usme mujhe pahle wala bhaskar dikh raha tha.kya body tha uska ek dum sexy yaar.

On hearing this bharti lost her cool.
Bharti screamed at Payal.
Bharti: abe payal bhaskar mei hu wo nahi.abe wo tuche chedta hai saale ko ek ek punch dega saara dimag dikkane aa jayega.

Payal:Bhaskar e mat bhulo ki tum ek ladki ho abhi aur wo tera past hai ek dum iron man.agar tu use punch marega to wo block karke kungfu style me tujhe flying kick dega jaise bhaskar deta tha pehle.tumari sari hawa nikal jayegi.Btw bhaskat tum possessive ban rahe ho kya ha ha.

Bharti:abe payal ki bachi.tu uska side le raha he.me hi asli bhaskar hu.me bhi flying kick de sakta hu.dikhau tujhe.
Bharti tries a flying kick she slips & falls down n the process.
Payal s laughing loudly making fun of bharti.

Payal:Ha ha ha Bhaskar chill dude abhi tumara body ek ladki ki hai jise kungfu nahi aati .to bechari kungfu kaise karegi.abe bhaskar socho tu physically use challenge nahi kar sakti.aur e bhi mat bhulo ki wo bhaskar ki trah hi sochta he bahut shatir or crooked bhi hoga.kuch aisa soch jo bhaskar nahi soch sakta he but bharti soch sakti he.

Back n MU Bhaskar goes to his cabin.he s so happy.he thinks
Bhaskar: mei chief editor ban gaya hu.i had never thought this n my wildest dreams yaar wo bhi itna bada magazine ka.jaldi hi idhar ka jo bhi situation he sabhi samajhna he.pehle MU ke bare me find out karna,sab employeess ke bare me unke history biodata or aaj tak kya kya hua he company mei.
jenny knocks & enters.she gives him promotion papers.he fills them immediately.
Bhaskar: hi beautiful u r looking super hot.gives her a flying kiss.
jenny s flattered.she tells thanks to bhaskar & leaves.
Bhaskar searches company database.he finds our some document containing history of MU.he also hunts for data regarding employee history,biodata etc.he then transfers data to his pendrive.Just then Gyan knocks & enters.
Gyan:Hi Bhaskar ts good that u r back n MU as chief editor.lets have a party to night at rv's.khoob disco wisco karenge.bahut sexy bandiyan bhi hogi.
Bhaskar start to leave.he tells Gyan.
Bhaskar:Ya i will meet u at RV's.we will rock dude.I m busy right now.
Bhaskar comes out of MU & leaves to his flat.

Back n Bhartis house.
Bharti:aur ek baat kya hai ki hame abhi tak wo nakli bharti nahi dikhi he.acha hua ki uske aane se pehle me pura joining complete ki.abe KK sun rahe ho kya dikha nahi me tujhe kaise haraya.abhi tumara nakli bharti gayi kaam se.
Payal:Bhaskar mujhe eisa kyon lag raha he ki KK tujhe bakra bana raha he.mujhe aisa lag raha he ki KK wanted u to join as bharti.once u joined wo nakli bharti ko hatake nakli bhaskar ko bheja he jo abhi tumare above chief editor banke kaam karega.bhaskar do u have any idea what will be the consequences of this.abe nakli bhaskar KK ka admi he.ab uske zariye tujhe kk control karega.beta bhaskar gaya tum kaam se wo tumari zabardast waat lagayega.
Bharti s stunned as realisation dawned on her.

End of episode 7
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Give ur comments pls
Edited by deepu_mech2 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Woah Deepu! It's funny! Esp the "Killer Dude" music! 😆 😆
Like where did that come from??😆
Me like it
but one thing i suggest that you shd seperate the portions when you write..Like proper paragraphing when bhaskar talks and when bharti talks..cos i tend to read the same line over again cos it's too mashed up! 😆
Other then that the storyline is rocking! 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey thanks for taking the suggestion! I can read it properly now!! It's way clearer!😆
Hahahah the starting part was HILARIOUS!!!!!!!😆 😆 😆 😆 😆
Bharti giving kicks! In saari and payal too funny man! I love her and it's just like how it is in BB.. Deepu the dialogues and all is great!! Love this new Bhaskar (Omkar's wife)...😆
Love the way he flirts!
Edited by Blueberry_07 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Super funny epi....luvd the 'flying kick' flop show of Bharti...🤣 n well i m kinda worried abt the 'Nakli' Bhaskars intentions... hope our super-woman.. fights n wins in the end..😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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BB2 episode 8

Bhaskar reaches his flat.he studied the documents he got from MU n his laptop.after 3 hrs of involved study he got a picture of MU.The startling thing he found s the existence of Bharti.this bharti which resembles her s supposed to be related to OK as Ok's wife. she has been n charge as editor of MU when Bhaskar was away.the document also had the photograph of Bharti.he thinks

Bhaskar:Gosh,ee to meri tarah dikh thi he.me to OK se jan bachake bhagi thi.ab ee bharti kaun he.mujhe to kuch panga nazar aa raha he.iske baare me pura investigate karna he.mujhe to sali ek number ki fraud lag rahi he.sali meri post hadap li he.agar me bhaskar nahi bana hota tho meri job bhi jati.I think KK meri madad kar raha he.uski baat maan ni hogi.akhir uski badolat mujhe Bhaskar ka post jo mila he.jab tak post he raj karenge.but is bharti ko dikkana lagana hi hoga varna jab asli bhaskar aayega meri to watt lag jayegi.jab tak Chief editor ki kursi he tab tak mauka he is bharti ko MU se bhagane ka.

He was shocked to find that MU ko finance OK kartha tha.

Bhaskar: sala Ok to mar gaya ab kaun financier banega.us kamine ka tho aisa hi ant hona tha. mujhe lag raha he ki jo OK se pahle financier tha wo hi financier banega.
Bhaskar searches for old financier of MU & finds raichura 's name.

Bharti & Payal gets nto car.Bharti drops payal at her radio station & rushes to MU.

Bharti reaches MU.smiles at jenny.she storms towards her cabin thinking deeply he dont notices armaan & collides with him at such a force that both fall down.
Bharti screams at Armaan.
Bharti:Andhe ho kya itna bade bade aankhe he dikh tha nahi kya.
Arman:sorry but tumhi to kaha bhagi jaa rahi thi tumhe kuch lagi tho nahi.
Arman gets up.He gives a hand tu Bharti.
Bharti again screams at armaan.

Bharti:Abe tu hota kaun he mera.pehle to dhake deke girate he uper se attitude bhi dikha tha he.abe muje kisi ki hamdardi nahi chahiye.Im the man .mei khud ud sakti hu.
Bharti starts to get up.but she could nt move as her legs r paining lot.
Arman:tumari legs me moch he.tum khud kuch nahi kar sakti.isko pehle teek karna hoga.pehle tume sofa me bitana hoga.uske baad moch teek karna he.

Bharti:tume akal bhi nahi he kya.me idhar se hil bhi nahi sakti tab udhar sofa pe kaise jayenge udke kya.
Arman:teek kaha tumne tum udke hi jayenge.
without any hesitation Arman lifts Bharti n his arms & walks towards the sofa.
Bharti s stunned.she started to protest but she couldnt .t seemed like her body wanted to be touched by arman.she looked n his eyes.she got lost.arman make her sits her on the sofa.she s still looking n his eyes.
Armaan:kaha kho jayi.thoda dard hogi but sahna padega.
Arman twists her foot.to his astonishment bharti s still looking to his eyes without feeling any pain.
Arman:teek ho gayi kya.tujhe dard nahi hua kya.
Bharti suddenly regained her senses.
she felt such rush of pain that she screamed at he top of her voice.
Bharti:aaaaah saale tu kya kiya mera to jaan nikal rahi he .
Armaan:thoda der dard hoga.Moch teek hua na.legs hilake dekho kya.
Bharti:Abe saale tu kaun he baap he kya mera.she shakes her leg.it was fine.
Bharti:waise to legs teek hua.thanks.btw bahut kaam karna he phuto yaha se me abhi kaam bhejta hu.

Back n Bhaskar's flat.Bhaskar takes raichura's photo.is se to dosti karna hi padegi.financier saath me he tho pura MU apni kabse me.

End of episode 8


Guys give ur comments


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Edited by deepu_mech2 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#27
Deepu...luvd ur epi...for one super special reason... 'ArBi'.... Armu is so naughty..no wonder..bharti..keeps getting lost in him..n his killer eyes..!! 😍
Great job...n wow...OKs wife who is now Bhaskar..kafi smart ho gayi hai... getting hold of Raichura to nail OK...shrewd...😈
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice,
So Bhaskar stays Bharti , and OK wife becomes Bhaskar.
But why is Bharti being mean to Armaan, didn't she realize in BB1 that she loved him?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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actually Bharti s still confused as she s actually bhaskar & n BB1 finally she came to know payal loves bhaskar.Now since Bhaskar again transformed to bharti again same circle starts.like she s totally confused as she had regained bhaskar form have love for payal suddenly when she s transformed to bharti back her old feelings for armaan s coming back.

well this s my POV . im trying to bring some reality ie naturality.advice me if im wrong as i dont write much. 😉 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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🤣oh man finaly i read all the parts 🤣 and all are feb.
i love the game KK play with bhaskar and bharti.
awsome one
i have a requst .......can you plz put the epi num on the tital when ever you uplode so that we will know that u uplode new epi.
awsom going

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