coming monday- My wish not prediction

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Posted: 15 years ago
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OK is doing the pheras carrying bharti..
Arman is wathcing in subdued anger and disgust......tears flowing from his eyes 😭

OK is halfway through the pheraas... Focus turns to bhartis chunni which is hanging down..its very near
the hom kund fire.... The chunni catches fire and oK feeling the heat suddenly drops her....😃😃

Imagine the following in slow motion

armaan runs to her to take off her chunni.....
OK is shouting to others to bring paani....
Thinking a second OK himself runs to get water............
arman while running to bharti trips and falls and keeps his hand on a plate with flowers chandan and kumkum.
his hands are stained with kumkum..........

he comes to remove bhartis chunni ...accidentally touches her forehead and all the sindoor stains her maang too...👏

she slowly opens her eyes bcos of the commotion./..armaan slowly takes her to a corner to make her sit there....

Bharti just catches her head bcos of pain and delusion....brings her hands down but sees the sindoor ..she sees armaan..whos also seeing her sindoor.....bharti then focuses his hand which alos has sindoor..they keep looking at each other..............😳😳

OK comes running with water..he stops seeing bharti conscious... .....

He comes to her and grabs her hand again

Armaan is furious now 😡😡

Armaan: Bhaiya ab bas karo.............

OK: kya bas karoon..ab phere tho katam naheen huye.....aaoo bharti .

bharti: main koi phere vere nahin karoongi tere saath..chodo mujhe.......😵...

armaan comes and stands in front of bharti...

armaan: bhaiya..bahut ho chuka hai..agar yey aapki patni bhi ho..aap aisa nahin kar sakte.....

OK: 😡humaar apney patni key saath kya kuch kar sakte hain ..yey bataane ki aapkeee koi hakeekat nahin hain..hum jo chaahe karenge .....

bharti is still behind armaan holding her shoulders....OK pulls her hand again

armaan catches OKs hand...

Slow motion:

OK lifts his eyes in anger and looks at armaan 😡

armaan: Bhaiya ek minute..... agar inki shaadi aapse ho gayi tho ab ise kyon tang kare hain??

bharti (thinking) arey armaan..wrong track may ja rahe ho...........(hits her head with hand)

OK: yey baath tho apni bhaabi sey bolo....agar bharti maan ley ki woh meri patni hai main yey doosri shaadi karne keliye mana nahi karenge hum

armaan: MUjhe bharti se akele mey baath karne do bhaiya....

OK: jo bhi baath hoga woh hamaare samne hoga....humaar bharti ko apni nazar se kahin nahi doudne denge...

.armaan: woh aapki nazar se kahin nahin hategi..bas idar hi ja rahen hain..... agar barosa nahin hai tho apna gundas ko hamaare saath rakhiye....

OK: yey teek baath hai..

OK calls his gundas to accompany them

armaan takes bharti behind the mandir.....she just looks at him quizzically....he starts talking in english coz those gundas cant understand....

bharti: ab yey kya hai... 😲😲
armaan: bharti talk in english.. he winks at her

bharti: oh ya..now what
armaan: you just agree to whatever my bro says....
bharti: what the _______ are u telling me to do.....😡😡
armaan: just do what i say..agree to him and just keep talking to him... i 'll call for help
bharti: its all bcos of u..why did u have to open the door and betray me when ur bro came home😡😡
armaan: what do u think..that my bro will leave us if i hadnt opened the door....
bharti: Whatever.... You betrayed me...(shes crying)😭😭
armaan wipes her tears with his hands...
armaan: bharti bas.....I trust you.... am with you now...he sees the sindoor on her maang... whatever happens am with you..

OK comes there...

OK: baath ho gayi....
armaan: haan..(just moves back from bharti)

OK: tum taare pati key saat bhi baath karogi ya phir sirf devar se.....

armaan slips to a corner and calls the emergency police number..............

OK: ab maan gayee na meri jaan...he takes her hand

bharti snatches it back....

OK: ab kya hua..(again takes her hand..he is holding it tight..she is like a rat trapped twiching and turning)..maine keh diya na...kal aapke saans sasur aane wale hain..kal savere tho aapka phir se humre ghar mey grah pravesh hoga......kitne din ho gaye yey chand jaisa chehara..yey aankhen..yey honton ko dekk ke....tere bhal..he just keeps his fingers
on her forehead to touch her hair and he sees the sindoor...............

OK: yey kya hai..maine tho abhi tak koi sindoor nahi lagaaya......
bharti: galti se pad gaya hoga.....

OK: meri patni par tho galti sey nahi..pyaar se sindoor padnaa chaahiye................

yaahin rukh leke aata hoon

slow motion

hes going to take the plate of sindoor

police is arriving in jeep

Ok reaches near bharti..armaan is watching....

he keeps his hand in sindoor and takes it to bhartis head....

the police come there....

POlice: rukho

OK stops......

police: hamey pata mila hai ki yahaan koi zabarjasthi sei shaadi ho rahi hai....

OK: inspector..aapko galat kabar mila hai....yayan koi shaadi wadi nahin huyi.......

police: aisa tho nahin dik raha..he sees the pandit and the hom kund....

bharti: nahin inspector ..yey mujpar zabarjasthi kar raha thaa.....

OK: Bhaaarti..(shouts)

bharti: are ab chup chaap chalo police key saath aur police station mey shaadi macha lo....

police take OK in the jeep...
hes shouting

OK: main aisa nahi chodoonga..mere paas sab documents hai............. bharti tum mujse bach nahin sakti....

bharti turns to armaan....

she keeps looking at him for a minute..... holds his hand and runs..

armaan: bharti..kya kar rahi ho....

bharti takes him to the pandit.....

bharti: ab phere ke mantra shuru karo.... she just holds his hand and starts doing the phere.....

pandit: behan ji..vadhu ko var key peeche chalna chaahiye...

bharti: inke peeche chaloon they yey mujhe chodke chala jaayega..hum saath saath phere poora kar denge....👏
armaan smiles...........


Its almost morning now.....

Everybody have left the place..bharti armaan are worn out and tired... so they ve jsut sat in the steps and slept...

He is sitting with his back to a beam and bharti is sitting near with her head on his shoulders...armaan wakes up first..
he is looking at bharti..so peacefully sleeping .❤️...he smiles gently.......but the smile fades when he thinks of all that happened last night..... 😲😲😲

armaan(thought) ab kyaa hoga....

just then armaans family reach the temple in their sumo.....

they enter in slow motion..armaan wakes up bharti and they stand apart...........

they think shes their bharti (om's wife)

first armaans ma comes and hugs him...there is love is in her eyes for him..armaans also hugs her back lovingly
armaans ma: bahu.....(comes and hugs her)

armaans dad: humhe pata tha ki thum mil jaooge.........(to armaaan)
armaan is quiet..he just does pairi paanv

armaans ma signals her to fall at his feet

bharti does it..coz anyway its her dad in law....

armaan' s dad: ab humghar chalen............. mera om kahaan hai

just then he receives a call from a henchman that OM is in the local police station

armaans dad: kya hua.....

armaan and bharti look at each and bharti looks afraid..armaan is thinking

the signal is not that clear and armaans dad keeps shouting

armaans dad: hum pehle bahu kee grahpravesh kar denge aur phir police station jayenge .....

armaan: bhauji....aapko itnse saal baad dekkar kushi huiyi par main akele jeena chahta hoon..aapke saath nahin...

dad: yey kaisi baath hai..ab tho hum yaahan aa gaye.... tum, hum, om aur uski biwi ek saath tere ghar mey rahenge

bharti and armaan look at each other

armaan: par yey tho meri.....

dad: chup...ab hum kuch nahin sunne waale...... chalo.....niklo...


break

the sumo reaches armaans house....maa enters in to bring the kalash.....

maa asks bharti to hit the kalash with her right leg and enter in..... precap scene happens....

dad: yey aise andar naheen aa sakti

everybody looks at him.....

dad: humaari taraf se kisiko isey andar laana hogaa...........

dad turns to armaan....

dad: bhabi key saath jaake kade ho jao..aur use andar le aao................

episode over

precap
in the police station OK turns to be the gunda whom the bihar police are wanting to arrest for some
murder ......he is kept in the lock up....................

OK: aap hamey kuch nahin kar sakte..mere bhauji aanewale hain aur humaar ko chodna hee hoga

inspector: BHagwan bhi aaye aapka releasenahin hoga..aap kee hee thalaash thee itney din se..... ab aaram sey

yaahan din bitaane key baare mey sochiye.................


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Posted: 15 years ago
#2
i lovee your story 👏

i really like the beginning part...and the rest of the story is fab.
But if it goes like this, it'll be way too fast
i want to see bharti as omkaar's wife and see her do funny and weird things in the house 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanks.... i just wanted armaan to help bharti and marry her..and thats y i made it happen..dotn worry..what u wanna watch will be shown on real bb..though i wud hate to cc bharti as om s wife....still it wud be funny to c her as a struggling bahu
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: violet_231

thanks.... i just wanted armaan to help bharti and marry her..and thats y i made it happen..dotn worry..what u wanna watch will be shown on real bb..though i wud hate to cc bharti as om s wife....still it wud be funny to c her as a struggling bahu



I really like your version too 😛
it was very well written and you have quite a creative imagination =]
Do you have a FF on ArBi?

We all want Armaan and Bharti to be together...so we're all with you on this 😆
I think that watching Bharti make Om's like hell would be hilarious 😆 😆
I wanna see her doing stupid things lol
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jess.



I really like your version too 😛
it was very well written and you have quite a creative imagination =]
Do you have a FF on ArBi?

We all want Armaan and Bharti to be together...so we're all with you on this 😆
I think that watching Bharti make Om's like hell would be hilarious 😆 😆Me too will just watch the show for Bharti wid her hilarious acts........
I wanna see her doing stupid things lol

Gr8 job done just fabolous..........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow i love ur wish!!! Hope it happens!!!!! big fan of arbi hope they get together!!!!!!!!!! & armaan should helps bharti out in some way!!!! on Thursday i really thought that armaan will help bharti i was sooo happy! but when i saw the next ep coming up my heart broke!!!!!!🥺 hope ur wish comes ture !!! thanx

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome yaar
Hope it happens this way
Thanx dear
You made ma day
I was so upset but your prediction made ma happy again
Thanx for it
Love you for this
TAke CAre
Zoya
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Posted: 15 years ago
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jess... I dont have an FF on arbi.. I just like predicting the mondays episodes coz i keep thinking abt arbi in the week ends and the wait is terrible.......... thursday i was so disappointed with the show..that i didnt want to write for the coming week... But i cudnt sleep coz I was nt finished with arbi yet though the BB creatives are!!!!! So I wrote this to cheer myself and otehr arbi fans here....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Totally loved it. Only one problem, In the precap Om was with Bharti not Armaan. whatever I know that it was not your prediction😉 but your wish😉

I think tumhe BB ke creatives mein honi chahiye, you should catch the person who is runing the script and hit him/her. I want to see your story.

whatever, I still have some trust to the creatives, jinohne itna achcha serial bana raha tha, they can't spoil it like that.😍

you have written :"I just like predicting the mondays episodes coz i keep thinking abt arbi in the week ends and the wait is terrible.......... thursday i was so disappointed with the show..that i didnt want to write for the coming week... But i cudnt sleep coz I was nt finished with arbi yet though the BB creatives are!!!!! So I wrote this to cheer myself and otehr arbi fans here...."

I feel the same.

Let's keep our fingers crossed.

Kanu

Edited by kaninikabasuray - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Really hope your wish comes true.... the prediction is simply superb !!!! After watching thursday's episode i was really depressed and saw no hope of seeing ArBi together soon .... but your prediction rekindled the hope again... really hope something of this sort happens... It is very well-written... keep up the good work ...

Arpita...

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