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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Dew-drop

Beautiful Zoya ....👏👏
I m luving it so very much ....😃
Luved the songs Ishq hua part & also Jaanam deklo one ..

Zoya ..plzz update soon ...cant w8 ...😉

Thanx dear
Glad that you liked it
Will continue tomorrow anf if not tomorrow then on 10th november
Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey guys
Back with an update
Here it goes
For Previous part check Pg 16


Armaan held her hand and bth were now face to face looking actually staring each other

A tear formed in Bharti eyes and made it way towards her cheecks

Armaan wiped it

Armaan:Missed you a lot in this time

Bharti:Me too

Armaan gave Bharti the flowers he bought for her and Bharti passed him a smile

Both made their way towards the car

They were going on the way when Armaan instead of taking turn towards Bharti's house goes straight

Bharti:Hey where are you going? I think ma house was that way

Armaan:Wo actually Jiya tumse milna chahti hai wo tou airport bhi aana chahti thi par uska homework tha is liye wo ghar hi ruk gayi usne kaha that ke Bharti Auntie ko sab se pehle mujh se millaane le ke aana is liye main tumhe us se mlaane le ke jaa raha hoon

Bharti:Oh okay

Armaan while driving called Jiya and told her that we are coming get ready

Jiya who was waiting for the signal goes to Gyaan and says that we have to turn off thelights because it is a surprise for the person coming

Both of them made their way towards the main switch and turned it off

Just then ArBi reached the house

Bharti(While getting out of the car):Armaan itna andhera kyun ho raha hai??

Armaan:Haan wo shayad power cut hogaya hoga main check karta hoon Tum ander jao

Bharti enters the house she opens the door

Just then the light comes back and everyone shout Surp'. But stop in mid-way seeing Bharti there as none of them expected her to be here

Bharti herself was taken a back by the surprise but soon her much surprised expression turned into anger one as she thought htat Armaan told everyone about her coming back and they all planned a surprise party

She comes back to the world when she feels herself in someone's protective arms

Her irritated expression again under goes a change and now she was smiling with tears in her eyes

She hugged the person back as she knew who it was without even looking at him after all he always been very close to her since childhood

Bharti:Missed you bro

Bhaskar:Missed you too gal

Both break the hug and look at each other and laugh upon seeing eachother's face as they both were having tears floating in their eyes

Both cleared eachothers tears and just smiled with their foreheads touching

Bhaskar left Bharti as he felt several eyes staring the duo

Bhaskar:What yaar aise kyun ghoor rahe ho? Meri behan hai koi girlfriend thori na hai jot um logon ko ghoorne ki laggihai

Everyone laughs while Bharti goes and hugs Payal

Both the friends share an emotional hug and then Bharti broke the hug only to be hugged again

No not by Payal but her little angel Jiya

Bharti:Hey ma little angel How are you??

Jiya breaks the hug and say am fine bhati auntie but missed you a lot

Bharti:Me also missed you a lot dear

Armaan who was watching this from distance felt really blessed to see her daughter laughing and having fun and that too with Bharti

The girl who has became his life ,His reason to smile and live the life to its fullest

Bharti who was busy tickling Jiya looked at Armaan and felt a little uneasy but soon her anger comes back and she leaves Jiya and makes her way to Armaan

Armaan was confused seeing her in so mch anger

She comes to Armaan and takes him to the nearby room and locks the door

Bharti:Armaan how dare you maine tumhe mana kia that na ke kissi ko kuch mat bataana phir bhi tumne sab se keh dia ke main aa rahi

Armaan was about to say something but Bharti continued

Bharti:Aaj tumne mera vishwaas tora hai Armaan aur mujhe tum se aisi umeed bilkul nahin thi

Saying this hse left the room leaving behind a totally heart-broken Armaan

As soom as she came out she saw Bhaskar and Payal with Jiya nad went to them wiping her tears

Bhaskar saw her coming and begin to tal to her

Bhaskar:Waise tu tou badi chupi-rustam nikli

BHarti:What do you mean???

Bhaskar:I mean it was such a pleasant surprise You coming back without telling us I mean jahan tak main tujhe jaanta hoon tere paet mein to koi baat theharti hi nahin hai phir itni badi baat mujhse aur Payal se chuppa ke kaise rakhi

Just then Bhaskar saw Armaan and called him over

Bhaskar:Hey dude thanx

Armaan:Thanx?? Woh kyun???

Bhaskar:Thanx for everything man I mean tumne itna kuch manage kia aur hume especially mujhe itna bada surprise mila us ke liye thanx a lot

Armaan (looking towards Bharti):Its okay aakhir friendship kit hi aur waise bhi meri dost ne mujhse waada liya that ke main kissi ko kuch na bataoon

Payal:Waoo Dost ho tou tumhaare jaisa

Armaan:Excuse me mein abhi aata hoon

Armaan left the place

Bharti was now cursing herself for misunderstanding Armaan

Bharti:Ik number ki gadhi hai tu. Faltoo mein Armaan ko itna kuch keh dia.Poor guy usne tou kitni koshish ki tujhe khush rakhne kit ere liye surprise party bhi rakhi aur tu tune ussi pe shak kiya

She was looking at Armaan who was looking really low

He was not the same as he was sometime back

Bharti:That's it I need to talk to him right now

Slowly all the guests left and now only Bhaskar Bharti and Payal were left

Bhaskar and Payal were helping Armaan to clean up the mess

Armaan saw Jiya sleeping on the couch

He picked her up and took her to her room and made her lay on her bed

He then moved towards his room

Bharti took advantage of Payal and Bhaskar's cute fight and made her way towards Armaan's room


She entered his room and saw that Armaan was not there as he was in the washroom

Bharti was waiting for him when she saw a photo-frame in the study-table with her Armaan's and Jiya's photo in it

She was staring at it when she heard the knob of the door opening

She looked at Armaan who came out and saw her holding the photo-frame

Armaan:Tum?? Tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho???

Bharti:Look Armaan'.. I am sorry

Armaan:Oh please Bharti Don't be sorry aakhir main tumhaara lagat hi kya hoon jo tum mujhe sorry keh rahi ho I am just a friend na

Bharti was about to say something when Armaan came to her and held her from her shoulders really hard

Armaan:Kyun Bharti??? Kyun tum hamesha mere saath hi aisa karti ho?? Kya tumhe pata nahiin hai ke main tumhaare bare main kya sochta hoon

Bharti:Choroo Armaan. Its hurting

Armaan not giving attention to her pleads

Armaan:Kyun tum har bar mera dil tod deti ho mein jab bhi tumse apne dil ki baat kehne ki himmat karta hoon tum mujhe phir se ye sochne par majboor kar deti ho ke tum mujhe apni zindagi ka hissa maanti bhi ho ya nahin

Bharti(Almost in tears):Armaan leave me mujhe dard ho raha

Armaan held her more tightly and continued

Armaan:Tumhe dard ho raha hai Bharti tout um ye bhi socho ke mujhe tumhaari baton se kitna dard hota hai

He lefts her with a jerk and turns away then then again faces her and says

Armaan:Bolo Bharti aaj tum mujhe bata hi do ke tumhaari life mein kya importance rakhta hoon?? Kya mein tumhaara ik acha dost hoon ya kuch aur?? Tell me Bharti??

Bharti(Not aware of what she is saying in anger):I Love You

Armaan was completely shocked he looked at Bharti with a plain face

Bharti:I love you Armaan Main nahin jaanti kab se but I know I love you.Tum jab bhi mere saath hote ho mujhe sab kuch acha lagta ai lekin jab tum nahin hote tou mujhe aisa lagta hai ke zindagi ka koi matlab nahin Tum hote ho tou I feel like at the top of the world par jab tum nahin hote ho tou wo top mere liye kissi bhi ahmiat ka hamil nahin hai

Bharti after ending looked at Armaan standing infront of her totally blank

She then realizes that she had said a lot

Bharti:Look Armaan I am sorry

Saying this she went towards the door when she heard Armaan

Armaan:Mera jawaab tou sunti jao

She turned to look at him

Armaan:Main bhi tumse pyar karta hoon Bharti

Bhati looked at him in dis-belief

Armaan:I love you since I first saw you. You have become the girl of ma dreams right from our first meeting. I love you Bharti

Saying this he opened his arms

Bharti at first was hesitant but when she looked in his eyes she saw the love and respect he held for her

She came to him and hugged him tightly with him wrapping his arms sround her

Shining in the setting sun like a pearl upon the ocean come on feel me
Girl feel me
Shining in the setting sun like a pearl upon the ocean come on heal me
Girl heal me
Thinking about the lovin making and life sharing come and feel me
Girl feel me
Shining in the setting sun like a pearl upon the ocean come on feel me
Come on heal me

Both remembered the moments they spent toghther

Their first meeting when bharti felt straight into his arms being pushed by Bhaskar


Hua jo tu bhi mera mera
Tera jo ikraar hua
To kyun na main bhi keh doon keh doon
Hua mujhe bhi pyaar hua

Bharti remembers once when she sprained her leg while walking and he took her all the way from her cabin to her ar and then from the car to her room


Tera hone laga hoon khone laga hoon Jab se mila hoon
Tera hone laga hoon khone laga hoon Jab se mila hoon

Armaan remembers the closeness they shared while dancing in the restraurant


Shining in the setting sun like a pearl upon the ocean come on feel me
Girl feel me
Shining in the setting sun like a pearl upon the ocean come on heal me
Girl heal me

Both were still hugging each other feeling blessed to be together

O waise to mann mera pehli bhi raaton mein aksar hi chahat ke haan
Sapne saujaunta tha

Armaan remembers once when Bhaskar left for a business trip to Dehli and Bharti was really sad and he went to cheer her up to her house by climbing the pipe andhow he accidentally fell on Bharti on her bed


Pehle bhi dhadkan ye dhun koi gaati thi
Par ab jo hota hai woh pehle na hota tha

The way both were looking deep into each other's eyes

Hua hai tujhe jo bhi jo bhi
Mujhe bhi is baar hua

Bharti remembers their cute fights and their patch-ups after those stupid fights

To kyun na main bhi keh doon keh doon
Hua mujhe bhi pyaar hua

She remembers the incident that took place in the airport


Tera hone laga hoon khone laga hoon Jab se mila hoon
Tera hone laga hoon khone laga hoon Jab se mila hoon
He too remembers the same

How she came running to him

Aankhon se chu loon ke bahen tarasti hain
Dil ne pukara hai haan Ab to chale aao

Armaan remembers how they enjoyed their day by making food and watching movies with Jiya as it was raining out


Aaoge shabnam ki boondein barasti hain
Mausam ishara hai haan Ab to chale aao

He remembers their cute romantic dance in the rain as Jiya and Bharti pleaded to go out in rain as the electicity was out due to short circuiting


Baahon mein dalein baahein baahein
Baahon ka jaise haar hua

She remembers when she got promotion and hugged Armaan in excitement

Hamara maine mana mana
Hua mujhe bhi pyaar hua

The day in Paris when she realized that she is in love with Armaan

Tera hone laga hoon khone laga hoon Jab se mila hoon
Tera hone laga hoon khone laga hoon Jab se mila hoon

He remembers the day of her first Diwali in MU when he first saw her in an eastern dress

Shining in the setting sun like a pearl upon the ocean come on feel me
Girl feel me

Both come out of their though and broke the hus looking staright into each others' eyes

Shining in the setting sun like a pearl upon the ocean come on heal me
Girl heal me

Armaan holds her hand and kisses her hand

Thinking about the lovin making and life sharing come and feel me
Girl feel me

He kisses her on her fore-head

Shining in the setting sun like a pearl upon the ocean come on feel me
Come on heal me

Both were about to kiss when they heard a knock on the door

So This was part 7
Continued the ff
All thanx to ma papers which got postponed
Hope you all have liked it
And from now on I think its official that ma every part will have a song😆😆
Hope the colour used this time is fine
Do tell me if it is not visible
So that I can change it
Do comment or atleast press the like button
Take Care
Zoya
Edited by Zoya_01 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesum yaar ....luved it ....👏
So they finally confess about their luv ...😳
& nice song ...
I hope ur FF is not nearing its end ....
keep it up ..
👍🏼



The color is perfect ....everything is visible ....
😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey its really awesmee...👏⭐️
luvd d song n arbi fnnly cnfssed n 2gthrr...thks yaar yeh abhi tak kahin nahin dekha!!!!
n dn wrryy ur songs add d spice 2 ur ff😳😳
n no colour prblmm..
cntinue soon sweetyyy waitg fr mree!!!
luv
Ritu...
Edited by catch_ritu - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Dew-drop

Awesum yaar ....luved it ....👏
So they finally confess about their luv ...😳
& nice song ...
I hope ur FF is not nearing its end ....
keep it up ..
👍🏼



The color is perfect ....everything is visible ....
😆

Thanx dear for commenting
Dont worry it will not end so soon
Abhi tou Gyaneeta aur Bhaskar-Payal ki story baaki hai
But I'll make sure to add lot of ArBi romantice scenes
Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanx for commenting
Take Care
Zoya
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: catch_ritu

hey its really awesmee...👏⭐️

luvd d song n arbi fnnly cnfssed n 2gthrr...thks yaar yeh abhi tak kahin nahin dekha!!!!
n dn wrryy ur songs add d spice 2 ur ff😳😳
n no colour prblmm..
cntinue soon sweetyyy waitg fr mree!!!
luv
Ritu...

Thanx dear
Glad that you liked it
Will continue soon
Take care
Zoya
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Posted: 15 years ago
It's really good... loved the way you have written it... I love the way how you express the thoughts and emotions through songs... keep adding the song sequences.. it gives a very romantic feeling... Finally they confessed their love for each other... par woh kaun hai who is knocking at the door ?... will kill him for spoiling such a romantic moment.... simply loved ArBi in this part... please continue soon ... eager to read more 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
omgsh i absolute loved it!
and the song, my favourite, loving it!
awesome update!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: BUBLAI

It's really good... loved the way you have written it... I love the way how you express the thoughts and emotions through songs... keep adding the song sequences.. it gives a very romantic feeling... Finally they confessed their love for each other... par woh kaun hai who is knocking at the door ?... will kill him for spoiling such a romantic moment.... simply loved ArBi in this part... please continue soon ... eager to read more 😛

Hey Arpita
Thanx dear for such a lovely comment
Glad that you liked it
Will add more songs dear
Poor guy
The person at the door is now in Arpita's hit list😆
Will continue soon
And will make it super-romantic just for you😉
Take Care
Zoya

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