PrAja OS - I'll be always your's (complete)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hello frnds..!! I'm here with my 1st ever OS on praja as how ajabde would have convinced him for his marriage with phool..i would say it is more of pratap's POV like what he went through when his very own wife came up with this type of proposal for him.

Chappal & eggs are not allowed 😆 i know it is a crap.. plz plz bear with me..😛


As soon as pratap got phool's letter that she's gonna commit suicide he felt rooted to the ground why the hell this girl is behaving so silly??but no sooner his anger raised to his nerves.. "how can a rajput woman do such shameless act?!" "and you think being a rajput,, and marrying that mughal is bravary?" he turned in the direction of the voice to find HIS life his ajabde standing in a calmed position.. although he can't see her sad but it pained him to see her so composed after knowing that what she was asking him to do was next to impossible...he had owed his life to her, it doesn't mean that she has all the rights to decide whom he'll marry with??.

He was way to upset with her to talk in a normal way so he just turned away from her."ekant " she ordered as he heard the sound of her payals approach him "kuwar pratap..i know you're thinking about me right now, but don't!!! you must always think about your motherland first.." she held his hand in her's. " our motherland.. did you forgot those vachans' we have vowed to each other..? For each other!!? Don't you remember that u have promised to keep our motherland at first in your priority list than me?? And.." " enough ajabde!!! Stop it.. i remember all my promises.. but i don't think you do!! Because i also promised not to share my love with anyone other than you...! And i know that no women on earth wants to share her hunsband with any other girl..unlike you!!" he was surprised rather shocked how readily she agreed to share him with other woman without arguing atleast once..!! Was that so easy for her??How could she be so calm when i'm fighting with a storm inside me?? "kuwar pratap.. phool is not just any other woman..she is our childhood friend and she also loves you a lot!" This raised his temper and he grabed her arms tight pulling her close.. "Oh really!! She loves me right? And what about you?? Don't YOU love me??" "Kuwar pratap.."ajabde was starled by his anger.. but she didn't want to lose her confidence to convince him to this alliance " Shut up ajabde..!! Just.Shut.up. and just answer to my questions... is that very easy for you to share YOU'R kuwar pratap with any other girl??" She winced in pain due to his tight grip.. he then realising he was hurting her loosened his hold on her arms..and now he spoke up with a soft tone "you want her to be free right? Even i want so and i can rescue her from that mughal's clutches without marrying also.. don't you have atleast this much faith in you'r husband.. you'r LOVE. ?"

he then attached his forehead to hers... a tiny drop of tear was threateneing to fall down any moment...she felt herself lost in the moment but soon the reality struck her making her more adamant on her decision "You love me a lot right?? Then prove it!!" His eyes shot open.. was she asking him to give an evidence for his love towards her?? Has she lost it?? "Do you even know what shit you are talking?" He asked her with his gritted teeth.. "I do kuwar pratap.. i know what i'm asking.. and i have faith in you more than others.. i have faith that you'll marry phool..for my sake..for the sake of OUR love.. for the sake of our mother land..i trust you kuwar pratap,, and i have faith that you won't break my trust.." she smiled and kissed his forehead and was leaving but he grabbed her hand and in no time she was in his arms...they cried their heart out.."please don't do this to me ajabde.. i can't imagine anyone as my wife in your place.. please!" "You have to do this kuwar pratap.. it's not easy for me also.. but we have to fight our emotions for our motherland.." they broke the hug..it pained her to imagine him with phool even though she was her best friend but she is not an ordinary girl now.. she is the kuwarani of mevad.. she have to do this!! She wiped those tears off and cupped his face
"I-I'll send shagun for your and phool's relation to marwad now itself,, without wasting much time.." she then ranaway from there afraid that she might give in to her feelings..

he sat down on his knees defeated..he felt her going away from him. he closed his dried eyes as there was no tears left in those emotionless eyes.. he sat there remembering her words.. which made him think that she was right.. he was thinking selfishly but now he know what was his mistake..ajabde was not at fault.. she was just fulfilling her duties as kuwarani and he was making it difficult for both..he can't become so selfish..!! he can't break her trust.. he can't break his beloved subject's faith in him. He can't break the promise he made to his motherland..!! And now that he realised his duties.. he thought it was time to fulfill those promises and follow his part of duties. With this he made one more promise to himself,, that he may have many alliance in his upcomming life.. but he will be only his ajabde's.,and even no one can ever take her place in his life,,in his heart.
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That's it.. do share your views regarding..😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great update!!!!!!!! i simply loved teh way she handled hte situation!!! in the show i hope they show her a bit jeleous not hte sacrificing type😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb written Apeksha 👏 love this

sare main character ka pov ho gaya 😆 ab kis ki bari hai 😉

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congratulation Apeksha you become a goldie 🥳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: silk12

Great update!!!!!!!! i simply loved teh way she handled hte situation!!! in the show i hope they show her a bit jeleous not hte sacrificing type😊

thanks silk12 (may i know your name?😊) hope so.. but CVs is a fan of phool.. so you never know what they are upto😕
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sushma_marawi

superb written Apeksha👏love this


sare main character ka pov ho gaya😆ab kis ki bari hai😉



thanks sushma🤗 glad you like it😃

main characters hogaya toh side character lo😆😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sushma_marawi

Congratulation Apeksha you become a goldie🥳



Thanks you sushma🤗🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Brilliant OS👏👏 I want this to happen in show ditto... 😛
you described all emotions so nicely ( specially pratu's...😭) ...it was very emotional😭
send this to cv's 😛
great job Apu🤗❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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You did this one so well Apeksha!👏🤗 You made us all Prajajans proud. I had always imagined this scene exactly like this. Pratap's feelings are so clear and the dialogues are superb. Thank you for such a nice OS.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well written but I can't stomach Ajabdeh asking Pratap to marry another lady...whatever the reason...

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