Praja Modern ss Teri Jhuki Nazaar 'Note on page 2'

Ter Jhuki Nazaar

Prologue
It was a rainy day..." A 12 years old Ajabde and a 13 years old Pratap used to study at a famous school..in class 7.. suppose in a country like India where boys and girls were not sit together...i.e. Separately in another class...It was the 2nd month of their journey on class 7.. They both were a bright student and toper in their class... Today their coaching classes will start..Ajab's home was near her coaching place... As it was their first class,, she was excited.. She left her home with the umbrella a little earlier as she was punctual...She was feeling as something was going to happen today lest she knew she was going to meet her soulmate today...otherside Pratap was also excited very much...even he left his home as he used to love walk outside..He was a very calm but naughty guy.. He always used to run from girls or u can say ignore girls Otherside Ajabde was a bubbly girl but even she used to ignore or run away from boys as they live in a country like India...

It is the prologue so wait to know how they will meet and fall in love...

After only 10 comments,,,, I will continue...
Sorry for being like this... But I have expectations as I am new

Wow nice start esha! 👏 Please continue soon. And please don't worry about the comments, everyone will love to read this for sure!
And welcome to the forum dear! 🤗 I am Ramya. 😊

good start esha 👏 update soon 😊

Great starting Esha! Everyone will surely love to read this and comment. Welcome to the forum🤗. Have fun. BTW, I'm Vibha.

Here is the first part hope u like it

Part 1

Ajab reached the gate of her coaching... She was in a cream colour top and a jeans...she was looking very simple but beautiful... She was about to enter the gate ehen she heard some noises from behind.. A boy in a black pant and a blue shirt was injured... His left leg was bleeding near the ankle.. A dog was chasing a kid seeing it he saved the kid but accidentally his legs slipped and hit a stone... He was not able to stand properly... Ajab rushed towards the guy and forwarded her hand...She was hesitant at first but she was not able to ignore such a good and kind boy... The boy looked at her amazed as none helps each other in this world... He slowly held her hand and she helped him to stand.. Pratap and Ajab looked at each other for a few minutes...Then Ajab forwarded her hands towards Pratap..
A: Hi... I am Ajabde...tum?
P:Hello... I am Pratap... Well Thank u so much
A: Its okay..I came for my coaching classes... What about u?
P:Oh same here...I am also for coaching...
A:okay... Btw can we be friends?
P: oh yes... Friends...
A: I think we shall go now..
P: sure
Pratap was not able to walk because of his injured leg..
A: come.. Let me help u..
Ajab helped pratap to walk and soon they reached outside their drawing class..
P: Thank u I
Ajabde gave him a smile... Pratap always used to find girls irritating... But it was opposite with Ajab...
They both entered the class..Their teacher noticed Pratap's feet and did first aid of his leg..
The class went good and teacher were impressed very much with pratap and ajab..
8 months passed by and they became very good friends.. They only used to meet in the drawing class... Soon the year and and their drawing course was completed.. They were very sad as they cannot meet each other again...
Their last meeting to each other was on the last day of drawing class
A: Thank u so much..for being my best friend...
P: Thank u also Ajab(pratap used to call Ajabde Ajab)
P: I will missmy bestie
A: me too
Pratap fowarded her hands gesturing ajab For a friendly hug...Ajab didn't waste even a second to think and hugged him tightly...there were tears in their eyes.. They separated after a few minutes...
P:Bye and all the best gor your future...
A: thanks and hope to meet u again Pratap
P: of course.. Will wait for u... Bye

This was their last meeting..They both finished their school and were promoted to college.. Both were still the topper...Tomorrow was their first day at college...


So first part is finished and will update the next part soon... pls comment and encourage... I really need it... And thank u all ...

It is a really nice start Esha!
I like the concept and the way You've written! 😛
Great job! ❤️
Just do one thing...edit your main post and change the topic and add that you've updated the first part...
And also try and send PMs to some of the members that you know 😉
That'll help more people know that a new story has entered 😃
Awesome job! Update soon ❤️

hello Esha!!🤗🤗 Firstly welcome to the world of writing and also to the forum.. you can also call it as a gang!!😛 apun log ki gang😆

Now comming to your SS nice start.. so pratap and ajabde are besties ehh? 😳 thats sounds interesting..well done!!👏👏 do continue soon..😉

PS - sorry.. i forgot to introduce myself..😛 I'm Apeksha.. you can call me anything you like😊

lovely update easha 😛 👏

Hey so sorry guys to make u all wait... Here is the next part
Part 2
It was the first day of college... Both Pratap and Ajabde were always at time... It was the first day so both arrived a little early..The sky was shining.. Birds were singing... It was looking like everything was welcoming them..Ajabde was from middle class family.. She was very humble and kind but at the same time she was strong and bold.. She was a independent girl... Otherside Pratap was from a rich family but his heart was very pure... He was an angry young man with everyone and was a lone guy.. After Ajabde he had never made any friends again...he only had a best friend Chakrapani.. After a year of his last meeting with Ajab his family were coming to meet him in his hostel (pratap used to live in a hostel for his better education as his parents were very busy and used to travel in abroad mostly) died in a road accident.. After that he was changed into a so called heartless man...He turned into a very handsome and arrogant guy..His classmated used to call him AP (arrogant pratap).. They reached their class...Ajabde took her seat beside two girls on the second bench third row... She started the conversation
Ajab: Helooo.. I am Ajabde
1st Girl: Hi.. I am saubhagya... You can call me bhago
2nd girl: Hey ajabde.. I am Maan (maan is not prataps sister)
Ajab: sure.. Bhago..and Maan nice to meet u two..So friends?
Ajab forwards her hand towards bhago and Maan
Bh:yup..
Maan: wow u two are my friends now...
They both shakes their hands with Ajab..
On the other side pratap was sitting on a bench with chakrapani(his best friend)A girl came near them and was very happy seeing a handsome pratap..the girl asked pratap flirting with him
The girl: Hey handsome.. Would u mind giving me the seat beside u
Pratap:(coldly) u can seat anywhere I don't care
The girl: hey.. No one dares to talk like this with Phool
Pratap was ignoring her
Phool was shocked.. She was a spoiled daughter of a rich businessmen.. She was very proudy of her beauty...She angrily leaves from there and vows to teach pratap a lesson..
The class was good.. In the break.. Ajab was going to the library for a note alone... A guy was moving torwards her..
Guy: hey beauty... Where are u going all alone..shall i accompany u?
Ajabde continues walking ignoring him making the guy follow her..
The guy: oh so much arrogance.. None has ever told no to the handsome Akbar..
Ajab: (mockingly) so what do i do Mr. Handsome Akbar
Akbar was irritated.. He moved towards ajab and holds her wrists tightly..he doesn't know that he was challenging a khisiani billy (remember that when pratap was young he had named this ajab)
Ajabde freed her hand and kicked him on his actual place..Akbar was shocked seeing ajab and was wincing in pain.. Ajab left after giving him a victory smile..pratap was standing a little far..he was impressed seeing Ajab..
The first day went well.. A week passed and ajab, bhago and maan were best friends..
Next day after the class ajab was returning with maan and bhago.. She remembered she had to make a note on a subject.. So she left for the library alone..while going torwards the library she heard phool talking with a peon of the college
Peon: the work is done maam.. Have drugged him highly and locked him in the old store room
Phool:good work Mannu.. I will meet u at the restaurant as said..now leave..
And they both leave..
Ajab was surprised hearing all this.. She had heard that phool was a rich and spoiled girl as well.. But she had to save that guy as store room was a dark room and both scary room.. Ajab rushed towards the room opened it with her hairpin as it was locked and went inside.. Akbar was leaving when he saw ajab entering the store room.. He thought to teach her q lesson by closing her in the scary room and locked the door from outside.. He didn't know that ajab was not alone..
In the room ajab entered the room and saw a person lying on the ground..she moved near him and saw him unconcious murmuring something.. She tried hard to listen but understood a liitle like why did u leave me.. Why..
Ajab tried to make pratap sit and was succeeded after sometime..pratap's head was on Ajabde's chest..ajabde had a strange feeling for the unknown guy..she tried to wake him up by sprinkling some water.. Pratap wakes up but he was feeling suffocated.. He sees ajab with confused eyes..pratap was not fully well in his senses.. Ajab made him sit properly and told all the things.. Pratap thanks Ajab and tries to stand.. His head was very paining.. Ajab helped him and recalled pratap.. Suddenly a glass piece entered pratap's feet and it started bleeding..ajab saw it and made him seat carefully.. She goes near his leg and takes out the glass piece... She bandages it with her handkerchief.. She saw pratap shivering very much and was worried
Ajab: are u alright?
Pratap: yes..
Ajab: are u sure ... U are shivering very much and ur hands are also very cold..
Pratap: don't worry
Ajab makes pratap stand and goes to open the door when she realizes its locked.. She tries many times but it doesn't open.. She tells it to pratap..
Pratap: i think we have to stay here whole night
Ajab:Yes.. What to do..
Pratap: I am sorry u had come to save me and..
Ajab: no worry.. Its alright..
She realizes she doesn't know his name
Ajab: i forgot to introduce myself.. I am Ajabde
Pratap was shocked listening her.. But he ignored his doubt he said
Pratap: I am pratap
Ajab was also shocked and happy
Ajab: are u pratap...she understood seeing his smile..
Pratap was smiling: any doubt?
Ajab: you know how much I missed my bestie pratu (ajab used to call pratap pratu naughtily sometimes)..
Ajab hugs pratap tightly.. Pratap also hugs her back.. They were very happy.. Ajab breaks the hug
Ajab: how are u and what happend..
Pratap: i am just happy and what happened..
Ajab: pratap as much i know everyone calls you arrogant in short AP..And i used to know you were very sweet and friendly.. What happened..
Pratap:(sadly) nothing..
Ajab: you are hiding from me..okay I won't talk with u..
Pratap: pls don't do this.. U know i missed u so much.
Ajab: pls tell me na
Pratap: okay and narrates her everything.. His parents accident.. Loneliness etc.. They both were crying by now..
Ajab wipes his tears and hugs him soothing him..after sometime pratap calms down and hugs her back...
Pratap: u know there is no one for me.. I am all alone everyone i loved and was close leaved me..
Ajab:I am there na...and I promise u will always find me beside u
Pratap: thank u..
Ajab helps pratap to sit and sits beside him and says
Ajab: i want my bestie Pratu back..not this arrogant one.. Okay
Pratap: hmm
Ajab: what happened.. Why are u not talking..
Pratap: nothing yaar..just tabyat thoda thik nahi hai..
Ajab checks pratap and says ur body is very cold...
Pratap: its nothing ajab..shayed woh drugs ki wajah se
Ajab: what nothing.. Tumhari pura body thand par chuki hai.. I swear mein uss phool ko chornewali nahi hu..
Pratap: calm down yaar.. I am okay
Ajab: yes whatever..
Ajab had a shawl in her bag as she was feeling cold in the morning.. She was happy that she had brought it..she covers pratap with the shawl..
Pratap: thanks.. And don't worry about me..
Ajab: hmm
After sometime pratap sleeps and his head was resting on her shoulder..ajab was not sleepy.. She was remembering their days together closing her eyes ...
After about an hour ajab Felt pratap shivering..she saw Pratap's health was worsening.. She made pratap lie keeping his head on her bag and tried to wake him up..she then covered him properly and was rubbing his hands and feet to keep it warm.. After an hour pratap's temperature was normal.. Ajab kept his head on her lap and was caressing him gently.. And slept..
They were unknown of their heart beating for each other..they were unknown how their journey from friendship lead to love but they were very happy in the new journey...

So part 2 is finally over.. I don't know how it is but pls read it and share ur thoughts with me... Thank u..Bye 😳

PrAja ❤️ ❤️
You write beautifully dear!!!
I really liked the ending of this update!
You're doing a great job 🤗
Update jaldi se! 😛