Pratap Ajabdhe OS : Hangover aka Bhangover

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Holla people 🤗
Me back again. Mujhe chadha hai OS likhne ka bhoot. I m so mad, I have exams on head and I m writing stoies 😆
Kya kaoon, I am so addicted to them, Praja gives quite relaxation to mind an soul.
This tym thora hatkeOS.
So welcome all to PrAja Hangover world. Yes ypu all read it right, HANGOVER.
Actually, earlie days In AT, we used to discuss that may be CVs show Holi celebration, coz praja story began in March only and uss tym holi thi. We thought they will celebrate holi and by mistake koi ek bhang peele and then we have a good praja scenes lil romantic lil fun type. but naa CVs are expert in doing POPAT of PrAja fans especially.
Naa holi naa Diwali only one thing they showed, Ganghor Puja..
So now no more bak bak directly head towads, to the story.

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Looks interesting! 😊 I'm eager to read it!! CVs toh kabhi koi tyohaar mein interested nahi the...it's good that we have such amazing writers otherwise serial toh bore kar deti hai...I'm waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wonderful idea kamu jaana would be definitely fun to read it 👏 😆 Waiting eagerly for it toh jaldi post karna 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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All peopes were tired after palying holi. This was the first tym Bijolia people had there best holi ever. All thanx to kuwar pratap. There were so happy to have him with them. Everybody loved him equally as ajabdhe. Actually there was 3 reasons of celebrating holi with loads of fun and enthusiasm.

First - for the first ym Kuwar pratap was with all of them,
Second - pratap and ajabdhe were engaged.
Third - they all wanted to make this holi a memorable one, for ajabdhe coz this gonna be the last one, with them.

So keeping all these things in mind Rao mamrakh ji made sure that it should be the best one till now that ajabdhe remembers it her whole life.


Everyone went there home and palace members were in there room having rest, but here 🤣 kuwar pratap was in trouble. yes in trouble coz of bhaang which ajabdhe had in celebration. A flashback hit his mind.

'rao mamrakh hansa and pratap along with daasiyan and soliders.
R: hum chahte hai taiyaari itni bhavya ho ki humari putri iss din ko kabhie nhi bhul paaye.
Isse aisa manaiye jaise aaj se pehle kabhi v bijolia mein nhi mani ho. Akhir ye holi ka hi toh pav hai jo humari putri ko sabse jaida bhata hai''


**FLASHBACK END**
A: kuwar pratap.
P: haa ajabdhe
A: hihihihihi and she laughed out loud
P: hein, hey ek ling ji.
Bhagwan ke liye chup hojaaye, and he placed his hand on her mouth.
She bite his hand.
P: aaa !! kya kar rahi hai aap.
Ufff!! Ye aapko oh nhi par hume jarror yaad ahega iss saal ki holi. Kasam khaa kar kehte hai isse hum kabhie nhi bhulengein.
A: ajabdhe left his hand and stat running and pratap was running behind her.
P: ajabdhe rukiye.
And she stop holding a curtain.
Making her eyebrows close and making an anger face.
A: murk sipahi. Tumhari jurat kaise hui, hume rookne ki.
P: sipahi. Kaun sipahi.
She pointed towards him.
A: tum aur kaun.
P: hum sipahi ? ajabdhe yaad kijiye, hum kuwar pratap hai. Hey bhagwan.
Hume chakar kyun aa rahe hain.

Ajabdhe went close to him, made him eyes small as if she was magnifying him.
A: are haa ( she claped once and jumped in excitement ) aap pratap hai.
Ek baat bataye.
P: boliye ( holding her and mking her stand straight)
A: aapko badal pakdne aata hai.
P: kya?
P: badal? Wo koi kaise pakad sakta hai ?
A: aap mughal afghan, sabk pakad sakte hai aur humare liye badal nhi pakad sakta hai. ( making puppy face)
P: acha kaha hai badal.
A: ye dhekhiye (showing the blue curtain)
P: ye badal nhi ye parde hai ajabdhe.
A: nhi badaal hai. Dhekho udte v hai ye ( she blew it from her mouth)
Udd gaya.
P: ajabdhe bahut hua abb chaliye, kaksh mein.
A: ummm nhiii.
P: nhii ? kyun nhi chalna.
A: humare toh pair hi nhi hai, toh hum chale kaise ?
Pratap was in shock, he literally never knew people react like this after drinking bhang.
A: hume godi uthaye.
P: hein.. take a deep breathe.
He lifts her up. And took her to her room

On the way, ajabdhe literally was irritating pratap, by pulling nose ear and sometimes hair too. But pratap was not gting irritate. He was somewhere loving this ajabdhe.
Pratap smoothly placed her on the bed. But now ajabdhe was not in mood to leave. She pull him towards him, and moved from there as a result pratap badly falls on bed hitting lil bit on his nose.


P: ahhh ajabdhe.
A: hahahah, pakdo pakdo.
P: ek chan abhi pakdete hai.

Ajabdhe start running all over her room and pratap behind him. They were just enjoying the moment to fullest, no tension of being surrounded by there eleders, ( though they were in another room). They were just completely lost in there, world. Pratap literally had never did fun with anyone of his frends. Ajabdhe made it so enjoyable for him.

A: Pakadiye pakadiye and she giggled.
P: pratap singh naam hai humara abhi pakdte hai, and yeah he finally caught her.
A: ( giggle) chodiye.
P: achaa, and he hold her waist and pull her towards herself and hold her tightly.
A: hum chilayengein.
P: chilaye.
She open her mouth wide.
A: dhekhiye naa humare mukh se awaaz hi nikal rahi.
Pratap laughed out laughed 'hahahahhahahah''🤣
P: ajbdhe ( he pulls his cheek)
A: hume neend aarahi hai. An she went to bed and laid down and calls pratap.

He asked by raising his eyes brow up.
She signalled him to sit near her. Following the instruction, he sat down.
She singalled him again to come near.
He bent down. And to supise to him, ajabdhe shouted in his ear ' kesariya balam aayo maaro desh''
Eee ajabdhe screamed pratap.
Kya kar rahi hai aap.
She start beating the bed with hand and legs.


P: kya hua..
A: hume lori sunaiye.
P: loi achaa.. kyaa lori. Ajbdhe abb bas v kijiye.
A: humare pati gande.
P: pati ( he eyes were widened)

Kabutar and she was about to ran towards window but pratap pulled her and they fall on bed. Her hair was all over pratap face. Pratap remove it, and removed from ajabdhe face too and put them behind her ears. He caresses her cheek. Ajabdhe had a smiled, on his face. She was enejoying the touch of pratap and yeah she was tired too, slowly slowly she closed her eyes and slept on pratap shoulder.
Pratap nicely laid her on bed and caresses her hair and kissed her forehead and he slept on couch.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Areee jaldbazii ke kido 🤣 mera link tod daala
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Kamu jaana you are on a roll
Bhaang ke nashe mein Ajabde ka new roophone
mazaa aa gaya and pratap ka matha ghoom gaya
Matlab has has ke tummy mein dard ho gaya mere
My favourite jab Ajab shouts
Kesariya balam aaiyo humare desh 🤣

Bechara pratap waise ajabde is right mughal ko pakda then afghan ko bhi but badla hi nahi not fair

Keep on writing yaara cuz am enjoying them
Awesome one
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome os kamu! Amazingly written!👏
Maza aa gaya padhkar.🤣😉Jee bavdo ho gayo!😆
Loved this new ajabde.😊😳
Hayee our praja!☺️
I had also included holi moments in my ff 'symbol of love' but they were completely different.😃😉


Edited by crazy-for-praja - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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AWW!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😆
I have not laughed so hard and felt sooo good in like since Pratap was manaoing Ajab to marry him, 👏 I wish these kinda funny scenes were added to the serial for RoSal and the only song I can think of now is...

ZARA SA JHUM LU MAIN... AREE NA RE NA RE NAA
ZARA SA GHUM LU MAIN... AREE NA RE NA RE NAA 🤣

Hats off Kamu! and sach mein exam k pehle Ideas ki pitara khul jaati hai!🥱
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing!!! Hilarious!!! I can't even imagine Ajabde like this but I'm sure it would have been the best seen we would have got to see...kaash CVs had brains like these to show us some nice episode like this with some awesome festival and light scenes!
Write more stuff like this!! I love love love it!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Kamu jaana you are on a roll

Bhaang ke nashe mein Ajabde ka new roophone
mazaa aa gaya and pratap ka matha ghoom gaya
Matlab has has ke tummy mein dard ho gaya mere
My favourite jab Ajab shouts
Kesariya balam aaiyo humare desh🤣

Bechara pratap waise ajabde is right mughal ko pakda then afghan ko bhi but badla hi nahi not fair

Keep on writing yaara cuz am enjoying them
Awesome one

pehle naach left you r the first one to gave feedback 👏 🥳
Really i made you laugh. While giving final touch to it I thought its not that funny to extent I thought. Yeah its not that much. After ball I m not kapil 😆
But I made you Laugh. That's enough for me.
Thank you Garu.

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