Praja poem: When I Need You The Most

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Hi friends! This is my first praja post😳 so no chappal joota please. All criticism and praises welcome. This I dedicate to my pyaari-pyaari Garima di who encourages every new writer in the block and is a real sweatheart🤗. Without anymore ado, here you go...
When I Need You The Most


A few days back,
More like years
I felt you carve your
Place into my heart.
So I relive it
Sunny and blithe.

I know I had
Ditched you,
Gave you pain, forced,
Separation and helplessness.
So I relive it
Blows and stings.

We met again
You came back home
Ready we are
To face what comes ahead.
So I relive it
Forgiveness and respite.

And now when
Time tests me again
A mighty enemy, blurred future
Responsibility and faith
Of those thousands behind me
Of security and sincerity I ask.

No other day I felt it the most
Of your part in my life
There's one thing only
Which comes to my mind
I need you by my side.
Forever.



This poem is in Pratap's POV. It reflects the ongoing time of danger and insecurity in MP. So I decided to pen it down. Please comment and tell me how you all like it and please do not hesitate to criticize.

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Nandini6 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow beautiful dear😃...i loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nandinisharma6

wow beautiful dear😃...i loved it


Thank you so much😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is simply amazing vibha!👏 Loved the way you potrayed the emotions.❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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A beautiful creation Vibha and thank you for dedicating it to me. I wish you write more in the forum
Love the way your brought out the emotions (now I'll go and watch the old episodes of the show)

Awesome job and keep writing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: twilightlover29

A beautiful creation Vibha and thank you for dedicating it to me. I wish you write more in the forum
Love the way your brought out the emotions (now I'll go and watch the old episodes of the show)

Awesome job and keep writing


thanks dida. Yes, I will surely write more. Right now there is a ff in my mind but I don't get enough time.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy-for-praja

This is simply amazing vibha!👏 Loved the way you potrayed the emotions.❤️


Thanks Ramya. Glad you liked it. I think I went for a rustic style this time.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thanks!😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey Vibha awesome poem 👏
You depicted the emotions so well yaar I'm in awe of your writing 😲 ⭐️
Truly hats off 👏 😊
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Beautiful piece vibha 👏 you explained the emotions really well
do write the ff going on in your mind

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