Kya huaa.... Tera waadaa!... SS..updated part 2 pg 2..

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I don't know what made me write this. .suddenly decided to go with something different... so here it goes...

Part I...

" Uff! 23! Goodness!! ''

He was damn irritated! The wait...for someone...always was too irksome for him! And that too...when he had to wait for someone in a nasty corner of the garden with no trace of the very person for almost half n hr...and with such wonderful presents of mosquitoes...being the 23rd bite on his left cheek... Pratap Singh felt like shooting himself!

The beautifully decorated garden...for handsome guests...was not hurting him more than the fact...that...he was being kept waiting for sooo long!... He...didn't kno...how to react!

Wait! Footsteps!... Yes! He cud hear them coming closer! Someone was running ...n then stopping...walking...again stopping...and...again...running...and..

Finally! He cud get a glimpse of her...!!!!

Oh my god!

She was dressed in a pure white gown!... She looked like...an angel! A princess!... Her dream girl!!!

She finally ran her final steps...and stood right before her!

He couldn't breathe! As if he had lost all his senses! He just...stared at her! The moon poured all her blessings over her...and there she stood... A pure serene beauty!

He was sooo engrossed in looking at her that he cud not pay attention to what she spoke out very softly...but within a couple of minutes...he cud gather something...

'' Tum chale jaao Pratap! Main nhi aa skti tumhare saath! Ye thik nhi hoga! Mera pariwaar...sb ki aankhon me gir jaayga Pratap...sirf meri wajah se...
Aisa nhi ho sakta... Main aisa nhi kar sakti...''

Pratap Singh stood dumbstruck! What's she telling?

'' Ye tum kya bol rahi ho Ajabdeh! Tum...tum...hosh me to ho???... Agar tum aaj nhi gayi mere saath...tum jaanti bhi ho kya hoga...??? Tumhare pariwaar tumhari shaadi kisi aur se karwa denge... Ek aise insaan se...jise tum thik se jaanti bhi nhi ho...!! Kaise bitaaogi tum uske saath??? Kaise bhul paaogi tum mujhe...???''... He was extremely disparate...

'' Main nhi jaanti pratap...main buss itnaa jaanti hoon...ki main apne pariwaar k aage...koi kadam nhi utha sakti... ''...she looked away!

Pratap...stood silent! He cud feel a drop of tear roll down his cheeks!

'' to tum itni taiyaari...apni sagaai k liye ki ho...??''

'' Haan...aur behetar ye hi hoga ki tum mujhe bhool jaao aur zindagi me aage badho!''...

Pratap was about to break down...
'' Ye aakhri faisla hai tumhara?''...his voice broke...

'' Haan...''

'' Kyun Ajabdeh???!!! Kyun!!!!???? Kya kumee hai mujhme Ajabdeh? Buss itnaa ki main tum jaise ameer nhi hoon...tumhare hone waale pati jaise doulat nhi hai mere paas...? Kyun Ajabdeh? Pata to tha tumhe ye sb! To phir kyun aane diya mujhe apne itne kareeb...? Kyun itne sapne dikhaye!!?''...he couldn't speak anymore...

What hurt him most were...the cold eyes of her beloved...
She had not a bit of emotions in them...

'' Kaise badal gayi tum itni Ajabdeh!!!??? Kaise...???!!!... Ajabdeh meri aankhon me to dekho! Ajabdeh kucch to bolo...!''

'' buss itnaa bolna hai...ki agar tum yahaan se abhi nhi nikle...to tumhe security bula kar dhakke maar k nikaal doongi!''...

Pratap...could not believe what he heard...nor could he believe his eyes...

The figure before him...slowly turned...and started to move away...and faded behind the backyard... And he...cud speak...nothing more!!


Ajabdeh Punwar...stood in the backyard...with n immense pain in her chest...

If only...he knew...


Err... I really don't know know how it is...do comment if you feel like. .. I might continue then...

PS: please refer to pg 2 for part two...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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kaushi 🤗 ksi hai 😉
beautiful ss yara.. 😊
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Hehe! Thanks hinu...main acchi hoon...
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kaushi me kya bolu..bolne layak rkha hi nhi tu ne..as usual beautiful prt of stry..bt teri trh hi confusing h 😆 nxt prt milega?
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^ bolne laayak kucch nhi bacha!!!!!!!!!
Hehe... next part mere mood par...n tum sb k response par dependant h...
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awesome update 😊
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Awesome start. Plz continue soon.want to know ajab's pov. Kausi sorry re ami res ta edit krte prchi na.edit button kaj krche na.so ekhane comment krlam.
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I have no idea if you people r liking it...or will like it...but m suddenly on a writing spree...so decided to update. ...

Part II... A year ago. ...

She got down the car...dressed in a blood red Anaarkali..she turned all eyes to her. As she walked through the crowd with a bunch of black securities around her...the place began to buzz louder. .. and with all the remarks n expressions n counter remarks n discussions. ...it was quite evident that the lady in red had set the crowd on fire...


Pratap stood beside the main gate to the auditorium. ..the place he was allotted to stand... He saw the lady approaching. ...escorted by the high officials of the coordination committee. ...welcoming her with flower bouquets. ... The lady was smiling. .. Pratap noticed that the lady had a smile that could turn head over heels... He looked away. ... he wasn't much interested. ...nor should he be... He just was there to do his duty... As the lady passed by...he could smell lavender. ... yeah...classic taste. ...


But amidst all these, he had no single idea of who she was...not that he was dying to know though. ..
In the past one year of his life. ...he had seen many important people enter through many gates. ..as frequently as many unimportant people. He had seen crowd running behind the important ones for autographs..selfies. ...
He watched everything. ...silently. ..but was never interested. ...
No person entering or leaving through any gate he guarded. ..had left any impression upon him...till date...

But today. ...Something was different. ...cuz his usually indifferent mind, was interested in something. .someone. .somewhat! He slowly bent n tried to look inside. The lounge was filled with people, but no...not a trace of the lady in red or her escorts. They had perhaps already reached the heart of the auditorium. ...

Pratap stood straight again. But. .something was poking him. No..he gotta know this. He looked at his counter part...on the opposite side of the main gate. ...busy in welcoming people. Pratap suddenly felt he was forgetting his duty...but...he couldn't help...

" Mahesh!".. he gave him a call...
" bolo!"...
" Ye jo lady..red dress me abhi abhi andar gayi...kaun hain ye...?"

To his surprise. ..Pratap found a dumbstruck pair of eyes looking at him...
" tum sach me nhi jaante ye aurat kaun hain? ?!!"

" arre! Jaanta to tum se poochta kyun!? Main bekaar ki baaten nhi krta. ..jaan k rakho tum..."

"Hmm...naye aaye ho na...isliye nhi pata...
Ye yahaan ki...Bijolia ki rajkumari hain... Ajabdeh Punwar. ..."

What!!! Rajkumari! ! Pratap tried to rehear the word!
Rajkumari. ...is zamaane me...
Rajkumari! !!! He was lost in thoughts. ...n slowly turned his head to look inside. ..and...to his surprise. ...

The lady in red was approaching the door. ...with n escort behind. ..a cell phone to her ear...n a royal gait which Pratap could now recognise. ...
He stared at her as she kept coming closer. ...and as she was about to cross the door. ..


" Aaah!!!"...

She knocked against the door bid...her cell flew in air...and she fell straight into the high reflex hands of Pratap Singh! !!!!!!!

Utter silence! !!!!! The people around stood as if hit by thunder. ...the escort stood spellbound. ...n her highness flat in a pair of hands with her eyes tight shut...

Pratap was the one to break the silence. ..

"Ms Rajkumari! aap thik to hain...?????!!!"...


Err...do comment if you like. ... I might update soon...
Edited by ---Kaushi--- - 10 years ago
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Awesome update. Thanks for the pm.
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me kya bolu...dis time i'm speechless again..waise teri stries achi hoti h tu hi underestimate krti h apne aapko..waiting 4 nxt prt..aap k attishigr update k liye dhanywaad

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