PrAja SS-Ab maaf bhi kar de mujhe kyu door itna hogayi(part 10 on pg19

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Anika_VR

@Anika_PreRish

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+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#81

Finally,they have reunited and are returning to Chittor fort.
Everybody very happy.
Precap is amazing.
Continue sooonish.

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Pari

@pari0706

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Posted: 10 years ago

#82

great to know that Pratap and Ajabde are together again... Hopefully now DB can get exposed... atleast infront of Pratap.

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Komal Goklani

@kyrarocks

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Posted: 10 years ago

#83

its really nice... update soon...

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Tia khan

@tiakhan98

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Posted: 10 years ago

#84

superb plz cont dear
thanks for pm

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kaku17

@kaku17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#85

praja atlast together...😃...waiting to see DB ka shocked reaction...😆😆...plz update soon...

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rosal_awesome

@rosal_awesome

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Posted: 10 years ago

#86

keep up the good work Baishali :)) glad that you incorporated my suggestion of making him apologize in front of the entire family in your story as well 😃

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kiminonawa

@kiminonawa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#87

Too good dear !

Its fab...

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Priya

@-Serene.Rose-

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Posted: 10 years ago

#88

Hey Baishali...😊

awesome SS hai yeh 👏 Kya khoob likha hai aapne! 👏ek dum mast...⭐️ itne din baad main IF pe wapis aayi.. and itne din baad iss forum ko firse khola.. and you made my day...😃 earlier I was not an active member here and I had to stay away from IF bcoz of various reasons.. bt yea I used to follow the show.. and this is exactly what should happen in future!😉

u have written it so well... the fight, ajab's care for bijoliya...⭐️ patta's naughtiness...😳 naughty but determined pratap.. 😳⭐️all were well characterized... I mean evything is awesum!! I lack words to say hw much I loved this..😳😃

one thing though... as u dint put up an index i had a tough time searching fr various parts.. bt yakeen maano it was worth that!😃

Keep writing! n plz consider putting up an index with part nos and respective page numbers...😉

three cheers and thnx, tckr..😃

-Priya😊

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whiteprincess

@whiteprincess

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Posted: 10 years ago

#89

it is fantastic

waiting for the next asap

please update soon

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Baishali Ghosh

@Baishali_Ghosh

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Posted: 10 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: -Priyam-
Hey Baishali...😊
awesome SS hai yeh 👏 Kya khoob likha hai aapne! 👏ek dum mast...⭐️ itne din baad main IF pe wapis aayi.. and itne din baad iss forum ko firse khola.. and you made my day...😃 earlier I was not an active member here and I had to stay away from IF bcoz of various reasons.. bt yea I used to follow the show.. and this is exactly what should happen in future!😉

u have written it so well... the fight, ajab's care for bijoliya...⭐️ patta's naughtiness...😳 naughty but determined pratap.. 😳⭐️all were well characterized... I mean evything is awesum!! I lack words to say hw much I loved this..😳😃
one thing though... as u dint put up an index i had a tough time searching fr various parts.. bt yakeen maano it was worth that!😃
Keep writing! n plz consider putting up an index with part nos and respective page numbers...😉

three cheers and thnx, tckr..😃

-Priya😊

thanks a lot priya 😊

really glad to know u like my work...ya sure i'll make an index..