PrAja SS-Ab maaf bhi kar de mujhe kyu door itna hogayi(part 10 on pg19 - Page 13

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Posted: 10 years ago
lovely part dear plz cont thanks for pm
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Part 10

Ajabde was going to tha kitchen whn she heard some one shouting...she went therir...she foung raani dheer bai is shouting on dhaman singh...
DB-Dhaman singh ji...!! ab jo bhi karna hai aapko karna hai...!!ab jija aur ajabde dono iss mehal me hai..!! humara poore bane banaye khel bighd gaya sirf aur sirf aapki wajah se...kya chahte hai aap,aapki saza hum aapke pariwwar waalo ko de...!!
kunwar jagmal (KJ)-shaant ho jaaiye ranima..!! inhe hum dekhte hai...(he took out a khanjar and put it in his neck)
KJ-Dhaman singh ji...aap jaante hai na ki hum aapki bahot izzat karte hai...to jaisa aapse kaha jaaye vaisa hi kijiye...aur iss baar kaam poora ho jaana chahiye...kisiko kano kaan khabar nahi honi chahiye iss baat ki...samajh gaye aap..??
DS-j..ji...samajh gaye...!
DB-ab aap khade khade kya dekh rhe hai...!! jaaiye...kaam pe lag jaaiye...aur iss baar agar aap chooke na o fir aapke pariwaar k liye achha nahi hoga...!!
(Dhaman singh left the room)
Ajabde-he ekling ji...ab kya karne wale hai ye..

(she was walking in the corridor thinking about DB's and DS's conversation...)
ajabde-(pata nahi choti maa iss baar konsa shadiyantra rachne wali hai...)

(JB arrives)
JB-arey ajabde...kya hua..itni chinit kyu hai aap.??
ajabde-ranimaa vo hum...vo...
JB-ghabraie mat ajabde...hume poori baat bataie...
ajabde-raanimaa hum aapse ek mahatwapoorn visha me baat karna chahte hai...
JB-ha ha ajabde...boliye...
ajabde-yaha nahi raanimaa...aap humare kaksh me chaliye...
(they both went to ajabde's room)
Ajabde-raanimaa,jab hum aapke paas aa rhe the tab humne chotimaa aur kunwar jagmal ko Dhaman singh ko aadesh dete huye suna...hume lagta hai ki koi bada shadiyantra hone waala hai,...

(she told her about everything she heard)
JB-kya...Dheer bai ji kabhi bhi apni harkatose baad nahi aayengi...hume pata to lagana hoga ki kya chl rha hai...
(kunwar jagmal heard their connversation and rushed to DB)
KJ-ranima,sab khatam...

DB-kya.? sahi se bataiye KJ...!
KJ-humne abhi abhi ajabde ko jaiwanta maa se baat karte hiye suna..unhone humari yojna k baare me sab sun liya hai aur unhone jaiwanta maa ko bhi sab bata diya hai,,,.
DB-kya.!! ye ajabde na..humesha bich me aa jaati hai...!!
kunwar jagmal,hume kuch to karna hoga iss ajabde ka...

KJ-ghabraiye mat ranima,humne soch liya...
DB-kya sicha aapne-.?
KJ-hum kuch lootero ko bulake ajabde ka apharan karwa denge aur unse kahenge ki mewar se bahar lejaaker ajabde ko maar de...aur ajabde k kaksh me patra rakh denge ki aapne humare saath jo vishwaasghaat kiya hai uske baad se hum aappe vishwaas nahi kar paa rhe isiliye hum aapse apne saare sambandh tod rhe hai...
DB-aapki ojna to achhi hai lekin kya aisa ho payega...
KJ-aap bas dekhti jaaiye ranima,iss baar hum ajabde ko thikaane laga k hi rehenge...
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(KP entered in ajabde's room)

Kp-ajabde..! are ranimaa...aap yaha..? aur aap log itne chintit ku hai..?? koi samasa hai ka..?hume bataie...
JB -are nahi nai kunwar pratap hum to bs aise hi ajabde se baat kar rhe the...
KP-achha...vo ajabde hum aapko ye batane aaye the ki hum aur patta dangalsthal me abhyaas kar rhe hai...kyu na aap bhi humare saath abhyaas kare.??
JB-kya...? ye kya keh rhe hai aap kunwar pratap.?? Ajabde aapke sath abhyaas karengi.??
ajabde-arey nahi nahi ranimaa...y to bs aise hi...
KP-aise hi kya ajabde...hum chahte hai ki sab log apka ye humar dekne...hum dajiraj ko bhi bulate hai...aap taiyaar ho jaaiye...

Ajabde-parantu kunwar pratap humari baat to suniye...
(and pratap left the room)

Precap- US,JB and all are impressed...US praises ajabde for her talwaarbaazi...and kunwar jagmal's attempt to kidnap ajabde...

sorry guyz for another late update...

next part will be the second last part...

Edited by Baishali_Ghosh - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wowww!! Amazing update!! Waiting for d nxt part!!!😊
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: SwarSrushti

Wowww!! Amazing update!! Waiting for d nxt part!!!😊

😊 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow...amazing plz continue😛
Thanks for PM 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fantastic updat, well done. Waiting for next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
interesting updt!! awesome tha! bas praja momnts rehgaye the... unhe v daalna tha.. ahh koi baat nhi! try n updt soon! tc..
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Posted: 10 years ago
LOVELY PART DEAR
THANKS FOR PM
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update ! Make Ajabde's character more smarter...waiting for next update..tq👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update...waiting for next part

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