Ajab ki vidaai.....thoughts which made a tale...... - Page 4

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shrutijest.

@shrutijest.

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Posted: 11 years ago

Very well written Khuki...
Lovely scene...😃

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noname

@nonname

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow !!
that's nice..,. 😃
actually,,,, I can see this happening in the show,...

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Kaushitaki

@Penkie06

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Posted: 11 years ago

So... M confused if i shud keep it a one shot or continue it...

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Aru

@Aru_A

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Posted: 11 years ago

this is really beautiful di...

really...really Beautiful...

there is just this thehraav in each moment u gave...it was just so beautiful...n heart touching...

this is literally what u call writing...when u dont need long descriptions to take the tale to hearts...beautifully written...

i really loved this new writing of urs...i guess this is the firs time i saw u write PrAja...write Ajab...n literallyy...it was just so Be-au-tIfull!!!

as for the 'I'...i first thought it was Pratap...then Hansa massiji, then Phool...now it seems none...maybe a dasi...whosoever it is...really lucky...

u've done a brilliant job!!!

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Aru

@Aru_A

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Posted: 11 years ago

btw...we are going to include this in the shaadi thread...as a gift to PrAja on their wedding...

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Kaushitaki

@Penkie06

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Posted: 11 years ago

Aww! Thats so sweet of u ppl! Thank u so much!

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Aashna

@_aashi_

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Posted: 11 years ago

its mesmerising di!!😳how can i go without posting if u write so good🤗

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anushruthi

@anushruthi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Beautiful piece of work

heart touching

love the emotion behind it

Girls leave their own home to fill

another's with happiness

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Kaushitaki

@Penkie06

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Posted: 11 years ago

Thank u Anu! Ya they do...absolutely...!

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Kaushitaki

@Penkie06

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Posted: 11 years ago

And Anu...shake hands as manveer fans!

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