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noname

@nonname

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#51

that was beautiful Aru !! 😃
gr8 choice of words... 😃

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MaxMayfield

@MaxMayfield

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Aru honestly ur the best writer...Ive come across...

u get the praja feelings come out sooo sooo well in ur OS...I could literally feel the whole scene playing with rosal in front of my eyes😳

and its sooo well penned, so well thot of😳

one of ur best updates⭐️⭐️⭐️

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Anjori

@anjoriii

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#53

aru, this was awesome! ^_^ :D
loved loved loved it <3
hayye... i can actually imagine the scene infront of my eyes...
the way pratu was looking at ajab... :D
lovely update... ^_^

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Aru

@Aru_A

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Originally posted by: jyotic74
Aru...superb...too good...and the song on which you imagined is also masst...

thank u jiji..

bahut bahut dhanyawaad...

so true...jab me feel me vo song gaati hu yo mujhe ye OS yaad aa jata hai...

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Aru

@Aru_A

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: aashna_siddy
Aru🤗 ...This side of ajabde⭐️ I love it ❤️
U r unusual but not so typical
Way to good to get compliments
U r a true rock star 🤗
Loved it 😳

thank u aashu...

heeheehee...i'm...a nice combination of different stuff...not really usual actually...u havent seen me in real life...

omg...sachchi!!!

awww...come 'ere🤗

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Aru

@Aru_A

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: harshil_radhi28
great
plz update soon
LOVE❤️
RADHI😊

thank u so much radhi...

the next update...errr...

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Aru

@Aru_A

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: AsYa_Celana
Aru!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Jaana it was awesome!!!!!!!!
I just loved the way you described Ajab's free and careless state.
It was beautiful andd Pratap lost in her was even more magical.
But the thing which I found the best was Ajab praising Pratap...that was really beautiful...
Update soonish!!!

Ceelluuu!!!!

Awww...i'm so happy...

some more of this chanchal Ajabdeh is left to be seen...u'lll soon get to see it for urself...

U know...not just simplicity n quietness attracct,,,happiness does that equally...n it was Ajab...a never seen before...new Ajabdeh...Pratap was bound to loose himself to the beauty of the scene in front of him...the nature+the new Ajabdeh...

Ajab praising Pratap...uk what...it comes from me...uk...talking to oneself thing...talking to the god thing...just loved to get in Ajab...

i'll try but...exams on head...n 3 more stories to type...so...i may delay...

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Aru

@Aru_A

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Originally posted by: shrutijest.
Lovely Aru.
I hope CVs take a cue from you,,,,😃

thank u Shruti di...

nahi...let CV's do their own creativity...meri story to bahut purani hai...ab to naya vatavaran hai...

i wrote this at the time of the mahayudh between Mewar n Marwar...

but given the current situation...i've done some editting...

Edited by Aru_A - 11 years ago

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Aru

@Aru_A

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: HinaAdoresPraja
Aru Awesome Yar 🤗 Loved it so much 😃 u really wrote it so beautifully.. tight jappi meri trafse🤗 nd plz update soon 😉 😛

Hinu diii!!!!

haayyyeee...i'm so happy...

dhanywaad...aapka bahut bahut dhanyawaad,...ham bahut prasann hue...

jhappi to bas...anytime ready...

i'll try to update asap...but its difficult...

its the first time i'm seeing u at my story...i'm so happy...😃