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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey frnds this is my first attempt to write something...plz read it..like it critize it and/pr tell ur views

So here goes d story...
Now as d episode goes...Jalal meets pool but after seeing him she is frightened..
N here cums our Pratap... 😆
Now pratap n jalal start their fighting..

J : to tum Aa hi gaye pratap ab hum humari dosti bhul chuke hai...hairani hui jaanke
P:ha hairani hui gyi par jab hume pasta chala ki tum hum are sabse bade dushman ho toh ussi shan him apni dosti bhul gaye...

N dey start fighting...

Suddenly jalal attacks from behind (u know na its their behaviour) 😕
N pratap fell down...
Is wounded... Jalal comes to kill pratap with his sword...

J: alvida kuwar pratap ha aha ah ha

Pratap closes his eyes...
But d sword doesn't cum fr him...
It stops in d middle...
Pratap opens his eyes...
N smiles as he sees...



Our AJABDE with prataps sword stopping jalal...

🥳 😎


So frnds dis is my first part of d story
Hope u all enjoyed it... though it was quite short ..
Plz tell me if u wanna pm fr next update...

Till den taka care prAja fans
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its lovely rushti. But do update longer parts next time as i found it really short. Hope you update soon. Will be waiting eagerly.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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*Sigh*
If only we could have a scene like this today. would have been really nice! 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u cel fr reading d forum...
I will make it sure DAT next part will be long as thought are continuously flowing in my mind...
Will update ASAP...
Till den take care...
Love u prAja...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Srushti...🤗

Well look who's started writing...
Huh
It came as a Shock fr me but u knw m Nt
Dat surprised IF is addictive..😉

Well SS seems interesting dear...

N its probably my first post on MP forum..
All thnks to u..😊

Ab tu SS likhe aur mein na padhu aisa thodi hoga...😉

Missing u yaar...😔
Tc..

Do pm me wen u update..😊

Bubye..

Soni..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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If only something like this could happen today *sigh*

This looks really good. do continue soon & plz update longer versions😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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oi...cute shruti...this was so cute...yes cute...even i had it my mind that Ajabdeh will save Pratap somehow...but nothing as such happened... :P
oh this was really cute...i'll continue reading it...update soon... :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u all my frnds fr reading n liking n replying on it...
Thank u very much...
So here goes my second update...


Kuwar Pratap... uthiye Kuwar Pratap...Though Ajabde looked like a fearless tigeress to Jalal , her heart was full of worry fr Pratap who lay down wounded...

She bends down to lift d wounded Pratap... but till then Jalal comes and attacks her from behind and at d same moment Ajabde stands so she gets wounded on her feet even after she tries to save herself as well as pratap from d attack...n der phool stands dumb folded not understanding how to react fr d present situation..

However , here ajab was in pain but she ignored it because fr d situation all she cared was fr pratap... tears flowed from her eyes... not because of her pain but fr d pain she could see in Pratap...yes a wounded pratap..

At d same time Jalal comes to attack ajab...but ajab's attention not at him...she was in her own world...in her own thoughts...just then she feels someone's arm on her left shoulder n d other hand covered around her hand in which she held d sword...

And dat hand helps her defend herself from Jalal... when Jalal falls back...she wants to look who is d person...CAN U GUESS??? Yes this was our Pratap...n der was a cute little eye lock between dem... Jalal comes to attack again...pratap is still looking in ajab's eyes.. and defend himself and ajab without even looking at Jalal 😳

Ajab was d first one to come out of d eyelock n blushes 😳 but pratap still looking at her..maybe in love which they have not realized yet and in some questions..like why r u ignoring me from so long.. my heart cries doesn't yours????

Here BK comes and makes exit from d scene along with Jalal... n here pratap's frnds also come to d spot..

Seeing their cute eye lock..venidas asks baujiraj.. ajabdebaisa..Aap ek dusre ko kiss prakar ghur kyu rhe ho... 😆

N with dis prAja come out of their beautiful eye lock... 😳


SO DIS WAS MY UPDATE FRNDS 😊 ...
I THINK THIS WAS LONG ENOUGH...
SO HOW WAS IT...
PLZ LIKE IF U DO...
N PLZ REPLY...
N PICTURE ABHI BAAKI HAI MERE DOST...(Or in my case should I tell 'dosto, 😆 )
WILL UPDATE ASAP...
TILL DEN TAKE CARE PRaJA FANS...
LOVE U prAja ❤️
Edited by cutesrushti - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow it was lovley. Just love it. Rushti, it was long but please please please a longer one next time, of course if you can.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Haye!!! shrushti(or what is ur name...sorry i never asked!)
what a PrAjalicious update...haye me marjawan!!!
try a longer one if possible...
this was beautiful and cute...
When Pratapp helps Ajab defend herself and him by holding her bleeding hand...fav moment!!! wowie!!! and the rest that followed too!!!
haye yaara!!! waiting for the next one...!!! :D

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