A Place of Their Own : Pg 5: From this Day Forward - Page 3

Originally posted by: indi

O leesan, leesan ... What can I say? ... I have no words to describe my feelings! You were just incredible ... ! I felt every emotion, every bit of pain and suffering ... and every bit of happiness! So tender and beautiful ... culminating in such a climax!!! I could actually see the scenes ... G so helpless and frustrated but ever so loving ... his eyes filled with tears ... not to mention him staring at R ... lost in the depth of his love!!! R ... so gentle and serene ... yet the shadow of pain and hurt on her face!!! Once more, you brought G&R to life! It was so moving and heart rending the way they bared their souls ... loved how G explained it all to her ... baring his soul and the depth of his feelings for her!!!

Well done leesan👏!!! This is all we asked for, but Zee/Cvs didn't see it fit to give us. There was so much still to tell in this story ... what a pity it ended the way it did!

Thank you! You made my day ... even though I'm now impatient for more ... I'm greedy when it comes to the "G" man and his beautiful dharampatni! ... and now ... Laddoo, Junjhun, or both? ... to look forward to!!!

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

awwesum ...amazing ..luvd it ...

Originally posted by: jps01

Wow, Leesan, could not read it earlier because I was busy but wanted to savor and enjoy it and boy, did I??? OMG, it was so real, I can right there in flesh and blood re-living each and every scene you spoke of. I particularly liked how you bridged that gap of trust that R had for G - via the tear drop - just loved your unique idea!!!😛

Also the fact that you included Ladoo in the final scene - I am so thrilled!!!😃

Overall, outstanding and brilliant piece my friend!! Take a bow!!!👏👏👏
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Originally posted by: soapwatcher1

awww, Leesan, how tenderly beautiful. Loved the last paragragh especially. They deserve that happiness, that new beginning which is theirs alone, to share and to hold.

I will never forgive the CVs, cannot bring myself to say I will not forgive Guddu, for that debacle that was Neelu. But starting afresh together with something, everything, that is theirs alone, will give them a sense of belonging and togetherness that will make Runjhun and us feel supremely secure in his love for her.

Thanks for doing this for us, your emotion drenched words are a balm to our souls.

Originally posted by: godblessall

Sorry Leesan, it took a little more time for me to come back...but, I had to come...I was feeling restless all the time because I wanted to say exactly what I felt after reading your amazing piece of creation. The story you wrote sounded like a sweet melodious song...so soothing, so fulfilling, so close to the heart...You said you are not a writer, but your choice of words are magically appropriate, and about the style of writing...what can I say..! Simply beautiful, subtle but profound, calm in nature yet strikingly impressive in reader's mind...👏

I'll restrain myself from saying more though I'm feeling so much provoked to do that..!! The reason is , my stock of words is limited and I definitely want to keep some of them reserved for your next creation...which I'm very hopeful to see not very far. As I said earlier , you make me want more..!!

Finally , you said your story will deal with a 'sore' fact that may be heart-breaking and pensive for the readers...but , in my opinion that is the most brightest sign of an effortless writer inside you...you accepted the reality and redeemed the eternal love-story in such a dignified , lovely way that we all viewers wished to see at the terminal days...you just showed how the show could have been ended in a graceful manner without serving unnecessary drama...and there lies the ultimate success of an artist/writer , where his or her creation brings peace and satisfaction in the minds of the audience/readers...👍🏼