Arya SS : Curse Last Part 3 : Pg 2

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Posted: 8 years ago
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Theme : The plot revolves around a haunted palace which was owned by Thakur Pratap's ancestors years ago but was sold by Pratap due to personal reasons. Deep mysteries are hidden which are haunting to Pratap's daughter Maya years later. The story unfolds how his daughter manages to save herself from the mistakes done by his fathers' ancestors.


Maya : Raised up in a conservative family, daughter of a Thakur. Very sophisticated and dutiful daughter.


Arjun : Free living guy who is brought up in lap of luxury. Does not believe in superstition and very modern NRI from America but lovable at heart. Falls for Maya heads over heel.


Thakur Pratap : Father of Maya, very well know Thakur of Vadhapur. The richest person in Bhopal.


Part 1

The story opens with a group of college students visiting a big palace in small town of Vadhapur. People consider to be a haunted palace and all students are warned to not go on the second floor at any cost. One of the student in the group named Ruby ignores the warning thinking it is rumor and old superstition. The whole group reaches the destination and are stunned to see the beautiful palace. In the group another girl who is Ruby's best friend Maya also joins the tour to the palace.

Maya looks at the exterior of palace very strangely and stares for some minutes. Her friend brings her to senses at the nick of time.


Ruby : where are you lost? come on


Veer (tour guide) : Guys we will stay here for some hours but nobody will go near the second floor room, got it


Everybody starts looking inside the palace while Ruby sneakingly goes to the second floor in spite of Maya warning her.


Ruby : This is all fake, don't worry I will come back soon, I will not get another opportunity to take pictures for my portfolio


Maya : Please go carefully


Ruby walks to the second floor and is totally isolated without any noise. She looks around the hallway and gets lost in the beauty of the floor. She starts to get scared when she sees a big painting of a bengali dancer. Ruby gets lost in the painting when a small ball falls from stair and chill start to run in her spine.


The group starts to leave while Kaya gets worried when Ruby does not return after long time.


Veer: Is everybody here? Maya, where is Ruby?


Maya : Sir actually (Stammers)


Veer : Speak up Maya, where is Ruby?


Maya : She went to the second floor and did not return back (says with terrified voice)


Veer scolds Maya for supporting Ruby and avoiding his warning. He tells the members to start looking for Ruby.


Veer : I will take strict against Ruby after we go back, you all are my responsibility, if anything happens you I will have to answer your families and authority.


Everybody starts looking for Ruby and finally finds her unconscious at the entrance of second floor.


Maya : Ruby, are you okay (pats her face)


Rohit : Sir, I think she is in shock, let's take her to hospital


The group rushes Ruby to hospital but gets worried when doctor informs them about Ruby is under observation due to shock.


Maya : what (shocked)


Doctor : Only prayers can save her, we are keeping her under observation


Rohit : Maya, you don't worry she will be fine


Maya ; this is all my fault I should have not let go alone


Rohit : Its okay


Late at night it is silent in the hospital when the bottle of oxygen turns into blood. One of the nurse passing from the room sees a desk drawer moving and one of the vase falls on ground by itself. She immediately calls the security waking the staff too. Everybody gets horrified seeing Ruby in the air touching the ceiling. Her hair are loosed with dark black eyes and smiling smirky. She throws a table on one of the staff. The spirit throws Ruby down on bed when Maya comes in with the God's statue. The doctor tells Veer to take Ruby to avoid risking his hospital

Part 1 : Pg 1

Part 2 : Pg 1

Part 3 : Pg 2

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dhrishti_ thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Great concept!! Already mystery from chapter 1 👏
Waiting for Arjun's entry, I have a feeling Maya's father will dislike or hate Arjun in the future.
Update soon!!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice concept. Maya warned Ruby against going to the second floor but let her go when Ruby insisted. Maya was blamed for sending Ruby. Sad that Ruby fell. I guess the ghost entered Ruby's body. Waiting for Arjun's entry.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beyhadh with horror concept nice
Thanks for the pm
Do update next chapter soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: dhrishti_

Great concept!! Already mystery from chapter 1 👏

Waiting for Arjun's entry, I have a feeling Maya's father will dislike or hate Arjun in the future.
Update soon!!


Thanks dear, Maya's father will have reason for his behavior later on 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Part 2

Ruby is shifted to her house where her family are tensed about the whole situation.

Veer ; We appointed a nurse but doctor said only prayers can save her now, I will take your leave now

Maya travels back to her house near Vadhapur and gets scared after the incident with Ruby. Her father is out of town and is all alone in the big house. Late at night there is noise of bird on the roof of house. Maya wakes up hearing a noise of an anklet and sees somebody's shadow running outside the room. She tries to call somebody but in vain. She hears a strange voice calling her name softly while she walks in hallway. Her hair are blowed by somebody from back but she could not see.

Maya : who is there (goes near balcony)

Noise of wind from outside. Maya sees the doors shutting and opening due to the wind outside. She goes out of the palace when she spots an old woman sitting on the bench. She goes near the women but gets scared seeing the eyes of woman and runs from there. She breathes heavily after reaching the road and gets unconscious. A silver accord car comes forward and person inside the car comes out and take her to home. The guy is none other than Arjun who is Maya's childhood friend.

Arjun : Doctor is she okay?

Doctor : She is just in shock, she will regain consciousness tomorrow morning don't worry

Arjun : thank you doctor, thank god I found her at this time

Doctor ; do you know her?

Arjun : she is my childhood friend and my dad's friend's daughter

The doctor leaves and Arjun lets Maya take rest. Next day Maya regains consciousness and finds herself in another house. Arjun comes in the room and teases her as usual.

Maya : What am i doing here?

Arjun : Wow somebody lost their memory, at least try to remember me

" Even if I lose memory but I cannot forget you" says Maya annoyingly

Arjun : you are still that same, you never learnt how to say thank you to your savior

Maya : I say thanks to people who save genuinely

Arjun : You are always in mood of fighting, it is your hobby and by the way what were you doing in the middle of road

Maya : Dad was not at home and there were strange noises coming but why am I telling this to you, modern NRI

Arjun ; you are right, are you trying to say that ghost came to meet you yesterday but honestly he would run away from you (teases)

Maya throws pillows on him and runs after him.

Arjun : hey fatso

Maya : how did you call me fatso ? I will kill you

Arjun : see thats why I told you ghost would not dare to harm you

Maya : shut up!!!

Arjun : Okay stop fighting now, I need to talk something important with you

Maya : what is it?

Arjun : after yesterday incidence, you can stay here because your dad told me to take care of you

Maya : I don't need your help do you get it ?

Arjun : Fine, then you can stay in your haunted house

Maya : why do you need to joke for everything, it is serious

Arjun : Come on, you are modern girl and stop believing all this things, it superstition

Maya : I don't care about your NRI thinking, I am leaving right now and thank you for saving my life

Arjun : okay fine, I will not trouble you but till your dad returns you will be safe here

Maya : I am only staying here only on dad's insistence

Veer informs Maya about Ruby's condition is stable and not able to regain consciousness.

Arjun : what happened?

Maya narrates everything to Arjun confusing him more. He tells Maya about Ruby being in shock only due to trauma.

Arjun : she might be sick thats why

Maya ; I am telling you there is something more to it because she got unconscious after she went to that floor

Arjun : maybe we can open that room on second floor and find out the truth

Maya : have you gone crazy ? opening that room is inviting death (leaves) you will not do anything wrong

Arjun : I cannot see you like this Maya I will find out the truth as soon I can but before that I have to find out what is the secret behind that haunted palace



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Maya is scared after seeing Ruby's condition. She got scared after she saw an old woman sitting on the bench. She ran away as soon as she saw her eyes. She fainted. Good that Arjun saved her. Loved arya nok jhok. Arjun became adventurous to see what is the secret in that haunted house. Waiting for the next.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Behyad in haunted house!!!
Loved the updates...
Arjun is back...
He wants to solve the mystery for Maya...
Continue soon
Thnx for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Ek beyhadh ki mystery and ek yeh mystery! Lolll
Good update!
Arjun and Maya's nok jhok has always been cute
I want to see their nok jhok after the wedding also but cute wali not serious wali lol
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Good post...next part coming soon..

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