MayRa/Shivjen DT#20"Pyar Ka Dard Samjti Hu,Na Saha Jata Hai,Na Chora!" - Page 86

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: stormborn

I don't blame Rudra or Maya. It was all a dumb misunderstanding creation by the makers. But I like the turn it took. Maya going into a bigger turmoil with Rudra.


If Rudra being already against MJ and Maya falling soft for Rudra had led to the marriage----then it would have fallen short on passion real soon. It's a limitless hate story afterall.


So I am glad these happened. The way it happened was a total disaster and filled with irrationality and bloopers but I have already decided to keep my brains inactive during this show.


😂 Well said dear! ❤️

I don’t wanna lose my brain cells over this show 🤔

As in I don’t want to think 😁

Edited by Tahiti-1 - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: stormborn

huhhhh !!!!!!

Then why was he so pathetic and so evil ???? 😲

Like he did irredeemable sins right and that's why didn't get mukti ? (I am bad at mythos)

he killed upa pandavas..


N He did one great sin that was irredeemable that

‘ he fired brahmastra ( the weapon which can not be turned back without killing the one destined ) to kill abhimanyu’s unborn child in uttara’s womb. Later named Parikshit.

this is the reason he got cursed..


Edited by dusk2dawn - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Tahiti-1


😂 Well said dear! ❤️

I don’t wanna lose my brain cells over this show 🤔



Good idea. Don't. 😆

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Tiaraa

"Mujhe tumhari zarurat hai maya" he took her hand in his and walked upto her bedroom. The dim light reflected the darkness in him. He felt guilty .he felt neglected..he felt unwanted. He wanted to feel wanted again. The desperation in him to feel any emotions apart from the pain dominated all his senses.

Maya followed him like puppet in her confusion state untill he made her sit on bed and kneeled before her.

He cupped her face with both his hands and rested his forhead against her

"Please help me maya! This pain is unbearable" she knew he was talking about the pain that were carved in his soul deep down. Which with time only became more sole and ugly.

"Maya" he rested his head on her lap as he shamelessly shredded tears.

"Please " he begged again.

She didnt know what he wanted her to do. But she could feel the pain engulfing her heart. His tears were building cracks on her inner wall. She raised her hand and touched the side of his face. He closed his eyes and took the warm feeling .

And then it was sudden, before both knew maya was already tucked under him and he was kissing the hell out of her. She tried to match with his passion equally but he was too rouch and raw for her to dominate. She was loosing herself to him with every second that passed in his passion. Surrounding became blurred for her...all she could focus was his hands as the rubbed and caressed her all over her body.

Rudra broke the kiss and immediately maya felt the loss. She looked around for a brief sec, her clothes were already gone. Actually scratch that, her clothes were mercilessly shredded off her and were tossed near the foot of bed. The remaining pieces of shredded inner were useless to hide anything from him. She locked her eyes to him as she saw him tossing his t shirt aside and then she heart the voice of belt followed by zip.

The bed dip again and rudra proped himself on elbow to avoid crushing her with his full weight. He wanted this..he need this..more than he need oxygen to live.

Very slowly, his hands were back on her body as he let the soft moulds fondle against his huge palms. She moans in pain and pleasure as his movement became rough and raw. He dips in to take the erect ecstasy and rolled his tongue over it. She cried in sheer pleasure and made a fist of her hands as she lifts her chest up to give him more success.

He was driving her insane, he was making her vulnerable. She never felt so right and wrong at the same time. God! She wanted to stop him but her body rebelled against her wishes. They liked being tortured by him..like all her senses were getting alive once again after years.

She cried again as his teeth met the soft skin on her neck..he sucked and licked as he kissed and bited the spot. She knew what he was doing. He was marking her.

Her eyes rolled heaven wards as she felt him cup her core and let his finger slide inbetween the folds....






( age likhu ya bas kru)🤣

her body moved involuntary to match the rhythm he was setting. He was playing with her core like a beautiful instrument...and she was moaning with every thrust like a soothing lyrics to it.

After sometime he stopped and adjusted himself on her. She closed her eyes waiting for the beautiful pain to creep inside her. When even after few minutes she didn't felt anything..she opened her eyes in frustration. She wanted release and if he was not ready to give her then she was all set to pleasure her body. Maya slowly moved her hands to her pleasure poiny and began giving herself long stroke. Rudra felt a disappointed by this and he gently took her hand away and brushed his lips on her knuckles.

"Please" she begged.

As if he was waiting for her approval which now he got..he didnt wasted any more time before entering her in one swift moment. Her scream were captured by his lips as the movement became more pain in the pleasure. She scratched his back with her nails in passion whilr he kept moving inside her deeper and deeper.. Soon he hits her wall and she cries out of ecstasy.

"Please dont stop" she begged..meeting his every thrust with her own pace.

Untill he thrusted one more last time before they both came together in unison.

And then they collapsed in each other arm waiting for the beautiful morning to rise and write another chapter in their life...

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: Naazneenaa

Myrah's death was quite unexpected lol i thought she was here to stay for some time more... but i guess she was basically brought to take the blame of Rishi's death now the search for Rishi's killer ends here with myrah's death thus putting an end to all suspicions & now ananya will stop suspecting maya too ! Also this detective Ananya was super annoying 😆

So all this was a closure to Rishi's death track & now the new track begins with RuAn marriage preparations but what i found weird is Rudra believing myrah. he believed myrah killed rishi Okay then he also believed that myrah wanted to destroy MJ but why would myrah want to destroy MJ ? Why he didn't he give this a thought he just blindly believed her lol that was really dumb of Rudra 🤔

Unpopular opinion : But i felt that " acha hua margayi " was uncalled for! I can totally understand his angst he lost brother & was on the verge of loosing his father but that one line could've been avoided coz it made him sound very negative for some reason i didn't like that rest everything was fine! Ppl on twitter have almost given up on MayRa ship it's really funny it's a fiction show & it'll have it's twists & turns...😆

The fandom needs to be really strong & not give up after every episode I've been a part of another fandom & we've been through the worst & still didn't give up here people already gave up on one dailogue of Rudra for me I'm still looking forward to marriage sequence let it be Maya's plan one thing which i know & gives me hope is Maya's feelings for rudra are genuine & the moment he comes close to her she forgets everything for that second so whatever happens btwn them is real & not fake! She can't lie to herself she has admitted that she has feelings for him & that's what matters she was gonna attempt to kill him today but the moment he held her she forgot everything & that tear rolled down her eye she will try hard but i don't think she can hate rudra 😳


For me today Rudra was in same boat as Maya.. the pain of losing loved one is the same for everyone.. he did try to reason out with Myra but her one word saying she killed rishi was enough for his hate to surface and her one shot to MJ was enough for him to hate her.. but he needs to also reason out why was myra behind MJ and rishi... I hope he does that..or understands that sometimes hate can come from some serious happenings of the past .

his hate for MJ is a personal issue.. he doesnt know what other heinous stuff MJ has done.. so for him to calm down over dying MJ is normal esp after losing 1 family member

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: stormborn

huhhhh !!!!!!

Then why was he so pathetic and so evil ???? 😲

Like he did irredeemable sins right and that's why didn't get mukti ? (I am bad at mythos)

Yes. It's a lesson that ur deeds decide ur destiny. Despite being born from such lineage and as a Guruputra he only ever imbibed negativity.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn

he killed upa pandavas..


N He did one great sin that was irredeemable that

‘ he fired brahmastra ( the weapon which can not be turned back without killing the one destined ) to kill abhimanyu’s unborn child in uttara’s womb. Later named Parikshit.

this is the reason he got cursed..


So why a Mahadeva incarnation would do something like that ?

Plus he killed draupadi's kids due to ignorance. And even it were really the pandavas, it's still sinful to kill men in sleep.

He was never very good regarding education or weapons either. Basically a very mundane character. That's why I am shocked hearing that he is a shiva incarnation. Like how and why !!??😲

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: stormborn

So why a Mahadeva incarnation would do something like that ?

Plus he killed draupadi's kids due to ignorance. And even it were really the pandavas, it's still sinful to kill men in sleep.

He was never very good regarding education or weapons either. Basically a very mundane character. That's why I am shocked hearing that he is a shiva incarnation. Like how and why !!??😲

It's to show good and bad exist in all but we should now bad deeds will lead to cursed existence which is even worse than honorable death.

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Posted: 5 years ago

Anyone read it?🤔



Oka gn sab log❤️

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: NamuVyas


For me today Rudra was in same boat as Maya.. the pain of losing loved one is the same for everyone.. he did try to reason out with Myra but her one word saying she killed rishi was enough for his hate to surface and her one shot to MJ was enough for him to hate her.. but he needs to also reason out why was myra behind MJ and rishi... I hope he does that..or understands that sometimes hate can come from some serious happenings of the past .

his hate for MJ is a personal issue.. he doesnt know what other heinous stuff MJ has done.. so for him to calm down over dying MJ is normal esp after losing 1 family member

Today Rudra and Maya seemed like 2 sides of the same coin.

If whatever happened to Maya had happened to Rudra, we can't guarantee that he wouldn't have gone the same way.

just imagine someone killing his dad and brother, his mother goes semi unstable, his unborn baby dies and he himself is left to die, what would he do ? Spare innocents ? Investigate who is innocent and who is not ? or shoot first ?

Now, if Maya's revenge plans go right, these will actually happen to him. So let's see how he handles it then.

Edited by stormborn - 5 years ago

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