Maya Drabble- The Shloka ( based on episode 1)

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Just like humans discarding old clothes, the soul discares an old body for a new one.

But for Maya, her soul didn't wait for her body to die and decade, instead it watched her heart be ripped into pieces and chose to leave her, instead, what filled her was a desire of revenge.

The burning flame that burnt her white to the pitch black, leaving behind ashes, so beautiful, that everyone fell in love with them.

For the world, she wrote stories, beautiful ones, as she hid behind them, no one knew what Maya Jaisingh looked like, she was phantom, an illusion, just like her name.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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👏 well written, loved it. Would love to read such drabbles on Maya as the story progresses. It would be such a great place to uncover and discuss various hidden shades , complexity and depth of this enigmatic character named MAYA.

Being a writer, who usually writes multiple drafts before finalization the story, I'm more excited to know what Maya has in store for the Roy family. She must have planned, re-planned and then again re worked on her plans several times to get back on the roy's. This is one intense dark story. I hope they keep the story crisp, even if that means making this a finite series.

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: chitra_rao

👏 well written, loved it. Would love to read such drabbles on Maya as the story progresses. It would be such a great place to uncover and discuss various hidden shades , complexity and depth of this enigmatic character named MAYA.

Being a writer, who usually writes multiple drafts before finalization the story, I'm more excited to know what Maya has in store for the Roy family. She must have planned, re-planned and then again re worked on her plans several times to get back on the roy's. This is one intense dark story. I hope they keep the story crisp, even if that means making this a finite series.

Thanks😳

Yes, even I want to understand her motivations, her reasonings, her thought process, becuase they sure do look dark.

Hope to read your work soon on Beyhad😊

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Very well written, Shibani! 👏👏

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Ayy, Shibani! Yet another beautiful worded drabble. I loved it! Do write more 🤗

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Posted: 5 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mayashika

Ayy, Shibani! Yet another beautiful worded drabble. I loved it! Do write more 🤗

Thanks so much🙈

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