Love life: Adiya FF Part 8

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Summary: Aditya a single parent raising his son, meets a women name zoya who happen to be a ghost, that has no recall on how she died. Now stuck with adi, how will she be able to help him when shes not welcome.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Prologue

A men walk to a grave with his son. They both sat down and pray, while praying they were unaware of a women next to them. She didnt know how she manage to come here, but she knew one thing and that was god.

Somehow she was sent to this place. She look around before calling them " excuse me?" " do you know where I am?...who am i?"

When she got no respond, she wave infront of them. " maybe I should wait...until their done" she says

Few hours later the man and his son walk away heading home. " papa...is mama happy now" the six year old says



" yes, shes very happy" he responds


The woman walk next to them , she asks again if they know where she was and how did she get here. She said the last thing she recall was landing in india with her fiance. When she got no response again , she attempt to grab the mens hand. But unfortunately it went right through.


Shock, her eyes widen, " w...w..what just happen." She says unsure


The man stop for a second...shivering before opening his car door and entering.


The woman still in shock snap out of it and watch as the car drove away. She yell for him to stop , but no use. She decided to head to her fiance hotel, but stop recalling they never checked in a hotel. " yah allah... what is going on here, what do I do" she questioned


She decided not to give up, and go to the city. It shouldnt be hard since she grew up in india.


(Elsewhere)


Adi came home and change. His son ran to his room to play with his toy. Adi while watching his late wife picture says " our company we built was going bankrupt, but with my effort I was able to make it successful. But with success comes with trouble. our son Aladdin, I've neglected him far too long. His growing everyday and I dont know how to handle him." He sigh " you would always help me, but now I dont know what to do maya" he says sadly.


A knock was heard, and the babysitter voice was heard behind the door. He look at the time, realizing its time for him to go to work. Before grabbing his bag and step out. He calls for Aladdin , but once more he refuse to come out. Saying he dont want a babysitter and that he wants him.


Adi had to explain again why he cant stay. This was a normal routine for them, and his son refuse to obey. Frustrated he shouts causing his son to cry. " I ...i cant deal with this, I'm late for work" he says before leaving.


The sitter tries calling him, but he ignored him.


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Part 1

Zoya move to the side seeing cars passing really fast. " I need to make a call, but how can i when i cant even touch anything." She says

" well even if you were given the choice , who would you have call" a voice said

Zoya surprise turn to see a bold man. He smile at her while opening a book. " I finally found you"

Confuse she ask the man if he knew her. The man says " you were one of the soul that ran away when I was suppose to take you."

Zoya scared asks "T ..Take ...m..me ..w..where?

The man points up causing zoya to shake. She tells him she cant leave because theirs something she has to do.the man told her he doesnt care. He says his been given order from the boss , so he has to follow.

Zoya tries to reason with the man, but with strict face he refuse. Not wanting to leave this world, zoya ran. The man says " why things never easy when it comes to taking souls"

Meanwhile, Aditya driving recall his son crying face. How so much alike his son and his wife look. He remember maya saying not to abandon Aladdin and that he will need him more than ever. " and I did just that " he mumbles before jamming his hands on the wheel.

Decided he turn back around, heading home. By that time , rain starts to fall. Aditya grab his phone to make a call to his work. He scan through his phone...searching for his work number.while scanning, he was unaware of zoya crossing in front of him. He quickly looks up when he heard a scream.

Their standing in western clothes was zoya. She looked really scared. Aditya turn the wheel, causing the car to hit a stand. "Urgh" He says before getting out to look at the damage done to his car. He was angry and upset. He turn to zoya who looked apologetic, and starts yelling at her.

" Y..you...what is wrong with you. Dont you know that you shouldnt cross when cars are driving " he says angry

Zoya flinched by his yelling. She quietly apologized, but Aditya wasnt done. " because of you my car is now damaged."

Zoya once more apologized. One man came to Aditya " your complaining about your car, but look what you have done to my stand. How will I continue my business." He says upset.

Zoya apologized while Aditya says " ask the one that cause the accident, I'm sure you two can talk about it."

The man look around in confusion
" Hey! Rich guy...dont try to act dumb. How will you pay for my stand" he says

ADitya tells the guy to shut up and asks zoya. The man says theirs no one here except them too. Adi says " what do you mean...shes right here"

The man look at his right, but saw no one. He asks Adita if his drunk or on drugs. Aditya look between zoya and the man. He wonder if their playing a trick on him, he wonder if it was set up. Either way, he took out a check and write something before giving it to the man and leave.

Zoya calls for him. She says " could it be that man could see her, if so maybe he can help me." She says

Just before she could follow him, the bold man from earlier grabs her. " I've finally found you. Now come with me, you've been here long enough" he says now dragging her.

Zoya protested and tried making excuses. She says she cant leave, she wont. She pleads to Allah to save her. And just like that, their was an accident. Zoya seeing this, saw three people soul leaving their body. The bold man phone starts beeping. Getting different calls.

He curse saying he has to grab those souls before they leave his sight. While checking his phone, zoya manage to slip her hand away. When she saw those ghosts she back away scared before running. The man yell for her to come back.

Running...zoya says she wants to go home...shes scared, and dont know whats going on. She asks god why this is happening. What did she do in her past life that would make this happen to her. She was in so much turmoil that she wasnt aware by the fact that she was heading towards Aditya complex.

She says until she has answers, she will have to hide. Looking around the area, she chose a house and ran inside.

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Part 2

Zoya entering the house became scared seeing how dark it was. "Excuse me?" She says quietly , when she got no response she search around. She says this house is like a haunted house. She question about the room lightening while looking around. When she made it upstairs she heard a noise.

Scared, she timidly opens the door where the noise was coming from. Their she saw an old lady. She was looking out the window in her room. She turn towards zoya and ask who she was. Zoya eyes widen. " you can see me?"

The women shook her head " no but I can hear you."

Zoya curisous asks how and the lady explain how she was born with the gift. Zoya happy to know someone can hear her walk to the lady. The lady asks her why shes in her house. Zoya explain how she was running away from someone and how she needed somewhere to stay until she figures out what's happening and how it happen.

The old lady told her she can stay as much as she likes. Zoya thank her...now feeling at ease. They talked about many things until night time. Zoya went downstairs because she couldnt sleep. While down she checked out the photos on the wall. She smile seeing the old woman looking so young.

That made her recall something from her childhood. While trying she felt pain. She bends down trying to stop the pounding. When it finally subside she breath. She wonder why this happen while trying to recall something from her past. Why now? She questioned.

Few minute downstairs...zoya decides to go and check on the old lady. "Dadi" she calls opening the door. Right their in front of her was a man strangling the old lady with a pillow. The lady hands were moving, while trying to remove the pillow . Zoya quickly ran to try to help. She yells telling the man to stop, but her hand went straight through.

She was conflicted and worried. She shout some more , but nothing was working. Afraid for the old lady life zoya ran outside, calling for help. thinking she walk in another house.


While in she searches for someone to help her. She saw a maid coming downstairs while carrying clean clothes. Zoya came to her telling her to help her. But the lady just continue going to her destination. The next stop was a room which was all white.



Zoya seeing this was amazed by the amount of white things in the room. She snap out of it when the door suddenly close and Aditya was in front of zoya. She backup against the wall surprise by his closeness. Adi traps her between his arm.

They look at one another in confusion. " who are you? and why are you in my house"

Zoya recognizing who he was started shaking, this soon turn to her crying. Scared she starts stuttering " D..D..DAdi...N...n..eed...y...y...our...H..h..elp" she says

Abhi repeats her word, not believing her.

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Part3

Adi didnt by it at all. Looking at zoya he recognize her as the girl who caused his accident. This cause him to hit his hand on the wall. He asks her why she was here and how did she get in his house. He than recall something. " I get it. You must have been in on the stand guys plan to take money from the rich am I correct."

Zoya shook her head in denial. " D...D..dadi in ...T...t..r..o..u-"

Adi cuts her off " that's probably why you followed me here. Because the money I gave wasnt enough. So you tried to threat me. I swear people would do anything for money."

Zoya says " I dont know what your t...t..talking about, but right now I need your help. Someone is trying to kill D..D..dadi"

Adi left her side ignoring her " I dont have time for your lies"

Zoya desperate in need walk to him begging. He still refuse. She watch him get on his bed to lay down than use one hand to cover his face. " go away" he says

Zoya pleading says " she will die ...please help"

When got no response, she says in head. Ya' allah...what do I do. He wont listen and I'm running out of time. Suddenly she got an idea. She really hope this work. she turns back around" if you cant help me than I guess I will have no choice but to possess your body."

When she said this, Aditya puts his hand down and turn to her. With a serious face he says " possess?...are you trying to tell me your a ghost"

Zoya nods. Adi didnt believe her for a second. He sat up and call for his maid. When she arrive...he told her to escort zoya outside. The maid turn to see no one, Adi cleared his throat " what are you waiting for, take her from my room."

"S. .s...sir...theirs no body here" she replied

Adi looks at zoya who was standing next to the lady. He asks her once more if she really cant see her. The maid shook her head. She asks if Adi would like her to bring his medicine. Adi dismiss her. Zoya says " now that we cleared that, please help"

Aditya mind was frozen. The only thing that kept running through his head was the fact that zoya was a ghost and his talking to one. But than he realize something, if what zoya said was true that would mean his neighbor is in trouble. I will have to help, he thought if I do she might go to heaven.

Decided, Aditya agreed to go. When they reached there, the door was lock, but the back window was open. Zoya realize that's probably how the thief came in. Adi quietly walks in and up the stairs, their he noticed the thief putting stuff in his bag.

Aditya searched for something. When he spotted a pillow case he grabs it and snuck behind the thief. Quickly , he puts it on the thief head causing him to fall. Than he kicks him, and punch him until he was unconscious. The thief had asked who is it. Aditya says " you will find out once the cops gets here."

Zoya walk to the old woman side checking if she was dead. She calls for Aditya to come check because she couldnt tell. While Aditya was talking to the police, he walk to the old woman and check her pulse. Zoya crying asks if she was fine.

" her pulse is weak. But shes alive." He says

Hearing this she sigh with relief.

(Five hours later)

Aditya after being questioned went home. He turn to see zoya looking At the old woman before smiling at him. Aditya says " well now that I helped her, maybe she can finally rest in peace." He says entering his house.

Zoya on The other hand wish she could go with the old lady, but she couldnt take the risk of her being found out by the bold guy. She was tempted to go back to the old lady house, but she couldnt be alone. Her only choice was Aditya house.


It was morning time in the house. The sun was shining so brightly, Aditya alarm rang. Since he was so tired, he decided to not go to work today. He look at the time and close his eyes.


Wait a minute, he thought. Opening his eyes he saw something that made his heart drop. Zoya was sleeping next to him while her hands were on his.


For a second their, he thought she looks like a norm woman. Sleeping so soundly but realize shes a ghost. He wonder why she didnt leave yet. " Hey...you...why are you in my house" he says

Zoya unfazed sat up herself. confused she looks around before looking at Aditya " who are you?" She says

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I love your parts 1,2 and 3 plzzz put more parts this is interesting story.
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Why didnt Zoya recognize him? very interesting story, can't wait for the next update
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Part 4

Theirs never a day Aditya doesnt feel annoyed. Matter fact he was ready to loose his cool. Facing zoya he took a deep breath.


Zoya on the other hand was still confused. Aditya says " who am i?...do you know or recall what you did yesterday " he asks


Zoya moved back a little from the bed. She tried recalling what happen, trying to make her brain work. " Ah!...thats right, you helped me yesterday "


Aditya nods " yes I did, now can you kindly explain why your In my house, on my bed."


Zoya scratches her head. She recall what happened that same night.

That night, zoya came In the house. She didnt know what to do. Decided , she walked up the stairs towards one of the room. The first room was Aladdin's. He was sound asleep. She walk over to the room across, but stopped hearing a sound. Zoya heard it coming up, slowly it appears in the dark hallway.


When she saw a hand, she backed away. Her heart rate picked up when a ghost appeared in a form of a baby. The baby crawled in a weird behavior, while its eyes was jet black, staring at zoya.


When the baby head turns all the way around zoya ran as fast as she can into Aditya room. She saw it coming in , looking at her while standing up. Zoya hoped on the bed, and scooted closer to Adi causing her hand to touch his. When that happened the evil jin/ghost disappeared.


She blinked in confusion while looking around. Wondering where it go.


Now back to the present. Zoya shy gave Aditya a smile out of embarrassment. She apologized and told him a situation came up that caused her to sleep with him.


Hearing that statement made Aditya upset. "Its understandable to be scared, but jumping on my bed without permission, is just wrong" putting his hands together he says " that is why I will ask you while I'm nice to leave and dont come back"


Zoya worried says she cant. She says one thing she learned from last night is that when shes near him or touch him the jins disappeared. Theirs a reason why Allah sent her to him the first time in the graveyard.

Aditya didnt care, even when she pleads with her beautiful eyes he still refuse. Even when she pout her luscious lips he still said no. He stopped for a second, recalling what he said. ( what am I thinking , checking out a ghost. Shes a ghost for crying out loud.)he thought in disgusted.

He says " it must have been a long time , I've had a refmale companion"

Zoya blinking asks what happen. And he told her its not her business. He got up, to get dress, when he heard a scream. Annoyed he asks her why shes screaming. Zoya covers her eyes " y...y...your n...n...naked"

Aditya unashamed roll his eyes " yes I sleep commando "

Hearing this caused zoya cheeks to turn red. She turned around, wh im l ed trying not to think about Aditya being naked. She could hear noise and Adi getting dress. She looks out the window to see a women smiling while watching him change.

Zoya eyes widen. Quickly she walk to the window and shoo her with her hand. The women moved to the other side, but zoya blocks her. ( if Aditya sees her, he will be so angry. What do I do allah) she thought disturbed.

The women frown at her. In annoyance she left. Causing zoya to sigh with relief. Aditya turns to speak " by the time I come back you better be gone." He says more calmly.

Zoya turns to him, seeing her panicked face he asks her what she was doing. She tried coming up with an excuse but adi cuts her off, saying he doesnt care.

He left the room, and walk to his son room. Zoya on his trail. He stops and turn.. asking what she was doing. She says nothing. Walking into his sons room , he saw Aladdin running to him and hug his knee. " papa...your home" he says" a little weak

Aditya raise a brow " are you ok Aladdin...are you not feeling well" he asks

Aladdin looks at him with his big brown eyes. He told him his body hurt. Aditya says they will see a doctor. Aladdin scared says no. He backs away in fear looking right past Aditya. Weak he fell, Aditya rushed to his son and lift him up. Before Aladdin past out he says " who is the pretty lady...papa"

Aditya checking to make sure his son was alright , looks at zoya who was shock. She says " he can see me"

Aditya removed that idea from her head. He says he saw his mother picture on the wall behind her thats all.

Zoya didnt believe it, she was sure he saw her.

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This is amazing I like it.
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Oh wow such an awesome story 👏👏
The concept is very different. Zoya is a ghost who can been seen by both Aditya and Aladdin but they don't know about her true identity.
Ghosts around Zoya disappear every time she touches Aditya? Interesting.
Please update soon and add me to the pm list if there is one

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