Saiyyan-Complete Adiya Fanfic *Epilogue-Pg. 55*

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Sunshine_kk

@Sunshine_kk

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Posted: 6 years ago

#101

It's such a beautiful story. Thank you for updating all 4 parts at once. Please update the next part soon.

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@Sanaab

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Posted: 6 years ago

#102

Aww. Aditya is the dream guy any girl would want. Love how the relationship is progressing between them
These updates were beautiful.. 😊

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saira

@sezo

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Posted: 6 years ago

#103

Wow can't believe I would have missed these chapters if You a didn't pm me. Thank you.

So adi tried everything and the piano is the thing that worked. That part was magical.

He is starting to feel something more isn't he.

Can't wait for the farmhouse chapter and how he really gets the new improved zoya.

You captured the emotions so well.

Plz update soon the reader in me doesn't like to wait.

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Shafaq

@Shaf17

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Posted: 6 years ago

#104

This was so so amazing. Thank you for posting 4 chapters together it felt like a treat. Loving the story...

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Sudha

@tellyfan14

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Posted: 6 years ago

#105

Thanks a lot for d pm & treating us with these lovely updates

⭐️ I really appreciate the dynamics that you shown between Adiya here. The awkwardness yet a sense of belonging between these two is so beautifully done in this story. I really loved d Zoya's outburst as to how she rightfully felt that she was not being given her due respect by yash 👏 I would like to have a future scenario where yash pays back for his deeds 😡

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princess84

@princess84

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Posted: 6 years ago

#106

Aditya Hooda is a sweetheart...continue soon

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Neha

@Asyalover

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Posted: 6 years ago

#107

loved it. thanks for all the updates and pm.

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vandana21

@vdna

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Posted: 6 years ago

#108

Awesome!! Fantastic updates ..just caught up with a bunch!! so much positivity ..I so wish we had a real show where the hoodas and siddiquis were so nice! and the way Adi-zoya relationship is playing out is beautiful too ..Love it!! keep it going!

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JCluvs srk

@JCluvs srk

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Posted: 6 years ago

#109

CHAPTER 7 COMMENTS

Originally posted by: Serial_Fan90
Thank you for lots of sunshine in our life. Story line in the show is super trash. Every part is worth the wait !
Aditya and Zoya in one house. Oh ! The feels

Love
Mish

I'm so happy that you are liking fic! I know alot of people were upset with the arshad track so i figured this fanfic can help with that a little. thank you for supporting!

Originally posted by: Shafoo
I love your parts 6 and 7 very much something off with yash looks like he not happy.

thank you! yes...yash was definitely confused about what decision to make.

Originally posted by: Asyalover
really good updates. thanks 4 PM.

thank you! and thanks for commenting!

Originally posted by: sezo
Thanks for pm as always
Both parts amazing. Can't believe she just tried to ignore him
I thought you might make adi and zoya dance together. Maybe a bit early for that.
Plz update sooner. The eager reader in me doesn't want to wait or for it to end soon.

It's a fabulous story

yes...i like to build the tension...and honestly i don't care much for dancing scenes...i like interactions between the characters...more than just dance numbers...but stay tuned for a few of those too!

Originally posted by: Meeph
Haaye, I am soo in LOVE with this FF, just like Aditya is finding it hard to let go of Zoya, finding it hard to let go of this FF and close the window becayse i have already read the updates like 4 times. LOOL😆
You are a great writer & I am in love with Aditya who annoys her yet he is so caring.

Can't wait to read how their story unfolds.

Also, love how u update every 4 5 days. Please update every alternate days if possible for us hungry readers.❤️

Keep up the great work.
Thankyou for the fantastic job that u have been doing👏

awww! you are extremely sweet...and thank you so much for giving this fic so much love. i always look forward to reading your comments because you always leave such detailed ones. thank you for this!

Originally posted by: SewwiVB
Got your pm thanks 😊
Coming to the story, it was good Zoya decided to forget that awkwardness b/w them & make a cute pact with Adi 😆 Now that he won't be teasing her much as he used to do, thibgs are taking an interesting turn. I just hope Adi will be able to find out what's up with Yash & make Zoya know it by herself too. Waiting for the next..

thank you! i'm glad you are enjoying and how the story is progressing...i didn't want to rush adiya's relationship

Originally posted by: princess84
awwwesooome update...seems like aditya is protective of zoya

yes he is 😉 stay tuned for more

Originally posted by: Sunshine_kk
Awesome story. Enjoyed reading part 6 and 7. All excited for the next parts 😊

thank you! i hope you continue to enjoy and the coming chapters live up to your expectations.

CHAPTER 8 COMMENTS

Originally posted by: Shafoo
This sooo amazing i love it very muchhh.

thank you!!! i'm really happy that you are enjoying this fic

Originally posted by: aditi16
I love love love ur fic...
Now that yash isn't going how will adiya get married😕
Please update soon

hahaha stay tuned...i hope you liked the twist that's coming...

Originally posted by: Sunshine_kk
So so loved it. Amazing part.

thank you! please keep reading and supporting

Originally posted by: sezo
Thanks for pm as always
That was a beautiful update. Why do I get the feeling yash won't turn up for the wedding. Adi is so falling for zoya. Plz update sooner.

good prediction! i hope the coming chapters lived up to your expectations!

Originally posted by: SewwiVB
I was waiting for double updates LOL
This was interesting specially now that Yash's truth is out but what became a question for me was how willlove happen between Aditya & Zoya now that Yash hasn't planned on leaving Zoya & neither has Zoya started having those pure feelings in her heart, when she knows she loves someone else 😕 Also.. A special mention to you for the beautifully penned paragraphs of Adi walking in a trance & adorning Zoya with a necklace. That was so... soothing to read 😊 Eager for the next!

sorry! sometimes life is just busy and i don't have the time to revise multiple chapters...but i hope i made up for it. and thank you for liking the necklace scene...i really like it when readers point specific things about the chapter they liked...so i know that my writing and the scenes are connecting with people...i wanted that scene to reflect the lyrics of the song...banke mala prem ki tere tan pe jar jar jaun...so thanks for appreciating that part!

Originally posted by: princess84
hmmm how will aditya come in the picture cant wait read the next installment..:)

stay tuned! don't worry...he'll make it happen 😉

Originally posted by: snehaluvmaaneet
Wow this is so good, I read it in one go AND needless to say love it. Plz update and PM me when you do so

hahah! thank you! i'm glad you are enjoying this and the coming chapters live up to your expectations

Originally posted by: Sanaab
Just read 8 chaptera in one go ! Loving it !
You're brilliant with words , can't wait for this story to unfold and see whats in store for aditya and zoya ! Updatw sooon :)

thank you! and thank you for commenting. it really means alot. i hope you keep enjoying this fic!

Originally posted by: vandana21
OMG.. Can I be honest? Your story is just too good and way better than the actual plot!!! So loving it ..all positive characters so far and yet so interesting .. Loving the tension between Zoya and Adi.. So Yash also seems true to Zoya!! Man, I'm in love with your story and imagining the characters and scenes makes it a delightful read indeed!! Keep it going! Awesome talent you are!

hahaha awww! thank you! *hug* this is so sweet of you to say. i dont think i am as good as the professional writers...but i just try to write simple stories where the characters are all lovable. yes Yash is actually a good guy...but adi is the best 😉 ...stay tuned to see how adiya's love story unfolds

Originally posted by: AyraaMalik
Caught up with all parts and this story is amazing
Plz continue soon :)

thank you so much for supporting! stay tuned for more!

CHAPTER 9 COMMENTS

Originally posted by: Sanaab
Soo good ! The equation between zoya and adi is changing and all the characteristics suits the characters so perfectly well. Loving their dynamic! Update soon 👏

yes the equation is definitely changing! i'm glad you picked up on that...i've been trying to add some tension between adiya...trying to add to the natural chemistry. and i try to write characters that are all lovable...its cliche to always have negative characters that create havoc

Originally posted by: Serial_Fan90
Brilliant part !
I'm loving this build up to the wedding. Are we getting a run away groom ?
Would Aditya step in and be the groom ?

Super excited !

just wait and see! i hope the coming chapters and the plot twist lived up to your expectation.

Originally posted by: yashvijaysingh
Have read the updates all awesome...just lve reading it
look forward to read more

thank you for reading and commenting! stay tuned for more!

Originally posted by: Shafoo
I would say kamal ka update hai and your storyy is also awesome .

thank you for always commenting! it really means a lot!

Originally posted by: Sunshine_kk
Very nice part... looovvved it
I feel that Yash might not turn up for the wedding.
Eagerly waiting for the next part.

stay tuned and see! i hope the plot twist wasn't disappointing.

Originally posted by: Meeph
So i observed your pattern and noticed that you update every Monday so usually the first thing i do after waking up (every monday) was to check for updates. An update today was a total surprise for me. So THANKYOU for such a pleasant surprise.

I am literally hooked to this story and keep sending this FF's link to all my friends who have watched this show. Even they adore it but can't comment because they dont have an ID on IF and unfortunately don't plan on making one.

You are a great writer. I am hooked. Can't wait to read what will happen next. Will Yash call off the marriage and Aditya will get married to her or the wedding will be called off for good & then the Adiya Story will kick start? So curious.

I know you have 27 chapters ready so pretty pretty please update everyday,or in one go? I am absolutely hungry for more all the time

you are just the sweetest person! thank you so much for giving this fic so much love. to look for updates first thing in the morning to sending this to friends...thank you! your comment just made my day...its always nice when your work appreciated...and i've been working on this fic for abut 8 months now...so all the hours put into this totally seems worth it now...i always looked forward to your comments!

i hope i continue to write good chapters for you

Originally posted by: sezo
Can't believe I nearly missed this part. They are starting to get effected by each other. It's such a wonderful story
Plz update soon again.

i'm glad to were able to catch this part too! yes they are...its an un-denying chemistry that you cant fight...thank you for reading!

Originally posted by: frustrated12233
Interesting part ...totally AdiYa
Loved it

hahaha thanks!

Originally posted by: AyraaMalik
loved this update dear, it was fun reading there cute banters and how protective they are of each other

aww thank you! i'm glad you are enjoying this...i try to add humor into my writing to keep things light hearted.

Originally posted by: vandana21
wow ..fantastic update...each time I read your chapters ..I wish ..how nice it would be to have HC and Jen play this Aditya and Zoya from your story!! ..beautiful story ..you should really send it to the CVs ..:) love it!!

haahha a movie on them would be fantastic! i'm glad you are really enjoying this fic...it makes all the countless hours put into this totally worth it