Adiya FF : Zindagi (chapter 3 in pm)

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Chapter 1


Zoya Siddiqui is a cardiologist. She is a muslim and have a lovely family (Noor: her sister, Wassim: her father and Roshana her mother). Today it's her first day in Hooda's Hospital. She was the first rank in the university.

Aditya Hooda is a pediatrician. His family is composed of his father Harsh who is a chief doctor, his mother Anjana who is the HR of the hospital and his small brother who is a lawyer. It's also the first day for Aditya.


Zoya's mansion:

Zoya wakes up without noise because it's just 5.30 am and it's too early for her choti. After her bath she prays and she decides to wear a green chiffon saree. After she goes to her kitchen where her mother is already here.

Roshana: Zoya you look very pretty in this saree. But it's not too heavy for you.

Zoya: No ammi it's comfortable and I will wear it every day now. You know how much I love sarees.

Roshana: As you wish. Tell me what do you want for the lunch ?

Zoya: Noodles with spicy vegetables.

Roshana: Ok

Zoya sits and drinks her dark coffee with crips... Wassin joins her.

Wassim: Zoya I will drop you to the hospital.

Zoya: Thank you Abbu.

They quits the mansion and Wassim's drops her daughter to Hooda's hospital.

Hooda's hospital.

Harsh with Anjana welcomed the new doctors. Zoya is the first doctor who arrives early.

Anjana: App Zoya Siddique naa?

Zoya: Yes, Madam.

Anjana: Welcome to Hooda's hospital and he is my husband Harsh Hooda who is Chief Doctors.

Zoya: Thank you and it's an honour to meet you, sir.

Harsh: Thanks Doctor Zoya to accept our proposition to work in this hospital.

Harsh gives her a stethoscope, blouse with her name and her badge.

She enters and takes her place in the meeting hall.

Everyone come just few minutes later.

Harsh takes the mike: Good morning! I am very happy to welcome all of you to this hospital.

Someone enters drenched. All turns to see him.

Anjana comes to him: Aditya you are late.

Aditya: I know maa I am sorry.

Anjana: Go to the changing-room and put your blouse with stethoscope.

He quits.

Harsh: I am your Chief doctor but first your colleague, so don't be afraid of me. My wife will show you the hospital.

Harsh to his wife: Aditya is late for his first day. He will never be disciplined.

Anjana: It's just that...

Harsh interupts her: Stop defending him. It's because of you, that he became like this. Look at this girl Zoya, she came the first with a decent cloth. While your stupid son come in jogging and tee-shirt.

Anjana: I will explain to him.

Harsh: As always. First go with them.

She goes with the doctors.

While they step in the cafeteria, Aditya joins them.

Anjana looks at him. He wears a shirt and trousers.

Anjana: Please everyone go and eat something.

She pulls Aditya in the side: Aditya you are too much, first you come late, after with some undecent clothes. Why you did do that?

Aditya: So M. Hooda gives you a lecture! Let him maa, he is never happy when he saw me.

Aditya goes to take a coffee.

Anjanato herself : Please Shiv ji unit my husband and son.

They finish the round.

Everyone go and change themselves for their blouse.

Zoya enters in cardiologist sector where Doctor Hooda is here.

Harsh: So Doctor Zoya, here is the Doctor Ana Khan.

Ana: Good morning DoctorZoya.

Zoya: Nice to meet you Doctor.

Harsh: Doctor Khan will be retiring next week and Doctor Zoya you know this hospital is deemed for his cardiology sector so you have to maintain it. And I am sure you will be successfull.

Zoya: Don't worry Doctor Hooda I will try my best. And please don't call me doctor but just Zoya, I am too young for this respect from you Doctor Hooda.

Harsh: Ok Doctor Zoya no I mean simply Zoya.

He leaves them for the neurology. Where he sees Aditya playing with a little girl.

He approches them but someone stops him.

It's the girl mother: Please Doctor sab, don't perturb them after a long time my guddiya is happy. His Doctor (Aditya) will be very happy in his life.

She cries.

Anjana heard everything so she reaches Harsh: See your son who is making a little girl happy, maybe he is not so serious like you but a nice person.

They hear his beeper. It's an emergency and he needs Aditya with him.

Harsh enters in the room: Doctor Aditya you are needed so follow me.

Both leave for the operating theater where Zoya is already here.

Harsh: Zoya what we can do?

Zoya: Doctor Hooda, this baby has a head injury. The woman got a shot in her stomach.

Harsh: So I will treat her and both of you save this baby. Zoya you have to control her heart.

They nods.

Aditya: I don't need you nurse (to Zoya), so leave from here.

Zoya: Excuse me I am a cardiologist.

Aditya is surprised: So what she has no heart injury but on the head! You can move.

Zoya: Just do your work and I will do mine.

Aditya starts the operation.

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Posted: 7 years ago
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This is wonderful and interesting FF
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

<font color="#9900cc">This is wonderful and interesting FF</font>



Hope you will enjoyed it Shafoo 😊
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Storyline seems interesting, plz update soon, hope to read more soon about Dr. Adi and Zoya :)
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Originally posted by: AyraaMalik

Storyline seems interesting, plz update soon, hope to read more soon about Dr. Adi and Zoya :)



Thank u I hope you will enjoy this concept 😳
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Chapter 2 :

Aditya assists the neurologist for the operation. But suddenly her pulse goes down.

Zoya approaches the baby with the stetoscope.

Zoya : Please you have to stop the operation. It's dangerous to continue it.

Aditya : Zoya it will finish in ten minutes. So just let finish.

Zoya : Why you didn't get it ? If you continue your operation, she will not survive.

Aditya : I am a peditrician and I know my work very well. So please just leave from here. You disturb my work.

Zoya to the neurologist : Please Doctor stop the operation for the baby's sake. See by yourself if you continue she will be critical.

Aditya : Yaa doctor tell her it's primordial to finish this operation otherwise he will has a lot of intractable repercussions in his health.

Neurologist : Doctor Aditya I am sorry but I have to follow Doctor Zoya because the heart it's very important to survive. So for now I will stop the operation. We will see later if we continue the operation with Doctor Hooda.

Neurologist asks the nurse to sew the baby. And he left the operation theater. Aditya is furious so he pulls Zoya outside.

Zoya : Leave my hand. Doctor Aditya just stop.

Aditya throws her hand : Never interfere in my work. Otherwise I will make your life hell.

Zoya : Be in your limits I am a Cardiologist. I am the first ranker, so I know very well my work.

Aditya : I don't care, but you don't know my nature so just be away for me.

Nurse come to them : Doctor Aditya, the baby's dady wants to speak with you.

Aditya : Ok I will come but first please do a scan. And join me in meeting room where I will be with him.

Nurse nods.

He leaves, while Zoya is in tears.

Aditya asks the dady's baby to come with him.


Aditya : Can I know first your name, sir ?

Dady's baby : I am John Patel, how is my wife Sonia and my baby Mia.

Aditya : I am a pediatrician, I am waiting for Mia's scan.

They hear a knock in the door.

It's the nurse with the report, Harsh and Zoya.

Harsh : Nurse thanks, now you can go and check the baby.

She leaves. Harsh tends the file to Aditya.

Aditya : Doctor Zoya you leave...

Harsh : I ask her to come so she will stay here.

Aditya checks the report and throws up to Zoya : Look what you did.

Zoya sees the report and is shocked : The baby has a cerebral embolism so some holes will appear.

Aditya : Congratulations just because of your childness Mia is critical. Her heart is intact but her brain is affected.

Harsh : Calm down first speak with the father.

John cries : My baby is just 15 months. She is so small. Please doctor just save my baby. She is everything to us.

Zoya has tears.

John : How is my Sonia ? She is pregnant.

Harsh : I saved your wife but unfortunately she lost the baby.

John is frustrated : How is it possible ? She just takes our daughter to the park and a truck hit them because he was drunk.

Harsh consoles him : Please Mr. Patel you have to be confident for your wife and babay. Your wife is in the recovery room. She is waiting for you.

John begs : I will go to her. Please Doctor Aditya save my baby.

He leaves from here.

Aditya : So Zoya are you happy now ?

Zoya : I was just...

Aditya : Just shut up beacuse of you this little baby can be mute or blinded.

Harsh : Just stop it Aditya, let her. Just do your work and restart the operation.

Aditya : It's not our house here so don't tell me what I have to do. And you Zoya better not to come infront of me.

Aditya leaves.

Zoya is shocked : He is your family.

Harsh : Yes my son.

Zoya : Zoya I am sorry I was just afraid of her pulse.

Harsh : It's not your fault, you just did your job.

The persons who want to read the next chapter leave me a msg I will send you the next one because a lot of readers are not interested. 😃

Edited by 8seetha - 7 years ago
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Hey its lovely and dnt get disheartened, people will read soon, mostly read on weekends so plz continue this bful story dear. Loved this Chap, glad Ado was right, rank doesn't matter only experience does.
But if u like u can always PM me ur work, i love reading bful stories by u all Amazing writers on forum :)
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Hey the f2f u started it's really good keep up the good work and update soon can't wait for the next one
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Originally posted by: AyraaMalik

Hey its lovely and dnt get disheartened, people will read soon, mostly read on weekends so plz continue this bful story dear. Loved this Chap, glad Ado was right, rank doesn't matter only experience does.
But if u like u can always PM me ur work, i love reading bful stories by u all Amazing writers on forum :)



Thanks and hope I will not deceive you 😊
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Originally posted by: hajmaz

Hey the f2f u started it's really good keep up the good work and update soon can't wait for the next one



Thank you I will continue with msg hope you will like it

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