AdiYa OS : - Page 3

Originally posted by: AyraaMalik

Hey Sneha this story is amazing, and yes iss se aur b buhat parts ban skte hain, What happendeto yash? And Plz proceed with AdiYa moments and how Adi helping Zoya in this mystery. Overall its one thrilling story and am glad this OS gets the reward for being so amazingly written snehu.

Looking fwd to read more of this story yarrr

Originally posted by: rs..shailu29

🤗snehaji

beautifully penned

Originally posted by: SewwiVB

Hey sneha, this was a quite different plot & no wonder it had a place in the OS contest 😊 Congrats ⭐️ Yash is such a Jerka** & we all hate him & you've made him the cockroach of the story with a purpose LOL 😆😆

However you've asked for new ideas to be suggested ryt? I'd like to know about Aditya & Zoya's childhood & the friendship a bit & yeah, their team work indulged with "Mission destroy Yash the cockroach" 🤣🤣

Few more dialogues here & there too, per...haps?? 😃

Do pm when you continue..

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Amazing

Originally posted by: -Koeli_Appy-

Hmm... the plot is really promising. Converting it into a SS would be a good idea... with twists and turn. Maybe you can slightly change the plot and make it even more misterious. I thoroughly love it.

Originally posted by: SnehaDoll

Thank u Appy Fiz😆

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Yes I have planned a few more twists. But m going through writers block. Plot is great but somehow not able to pen it down. Bad execution 😆