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JazzyM

@JazzyM

Rocker

Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Beautifully written. The story has lots of plotlines and loved the way you intervened the past and present...

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 7 years ago

#22

loving this so far, keep writing

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ikhtiyar

@ikhtiyar

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Whoa, this clears things up. Looking forward to the next update ..

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sahana

@SummerDreams

Explorer

Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Amazing update👏

So adi lost his memory

Can't wait read further

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shafia Akhtar

@IISHAFS

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#25

This is amazing parts 1 and 2

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Puja_07

@Puja_07

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Amazing update dear

Very well written...

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-Rehanna-

@-Rehanna-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Naina168
Hi everyone! Commenting here after a long time!
Rehanna👏wow girl glad to see u here too after NK forum!
How do u get SO many ideas at the same time? U r so creative n imaginative Yaar! Keep updating both Adiya and Avneil ffs!

Hey! How are you? Its great to see you here! Haha no idea! Thanks lovely!

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-Rehanna-

@-Rehanna-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Adiya45
Amazing update
Loved it ❤️
Well written
So Adi has lost his memory and doesn't remember Zo
Interesting
Curious to know the whole story now
But have to be patient 😆
Update Soon
Thanks for the pm❤️

Thanks lovely!

Yes! Haha im the same:')

No problem:)

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-Rehanna-

@-Rehanna-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: SewwiVB
Cliche 😆 Though I liked how committed Zoya is for Adi even though he might never remember her. She's living an almost clueless life about what'll happen the nxt minute..
This chap revealed why Zoya married Adi irrespective of him telling her, he might never be able to love her. The representation of the fact was nice..
Pm the nxt 😃

Haha everyone loves a cliche!

Hopefully her everlasting love will eventually pay off!

I shall do:)