Zoya's last breath and Aditya's growing concern

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Aemy

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Exactly and what wordss... wooowww👏

If i ever loved anything on television i can bet that it was never more than now, i am madly in love with Adiya and the acting... you cannot feel the relief i had when i realized that she was thinking of Adi, trying to take his name not Snake ... How relieved i am thinking that she is thanking adi in her senses not holding his hand thinking about Yash... I loved how Harshad portrayed Adi today i loved every bit of dialogues...I loved it when he said :Zoya main darwaza tour doun ga phir baad mein nahin kehna"

Though that was an intense moment but the dailogue made it a little lighter and 😉

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Akshita Taneja

@AkshitaWrites.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Flame.

Lol yes! A girl.
I have tried writing and trust me when I say I am a disaster 😆
Btw, I did read your 'Hookup' and cannot wait for the next chapter to be up 😉

Hey, I didn't know you read it! Thanks for checking it out. I'll post the next chapter soon. I wait for people to read and comment so I know how the readers are reacting to what's currently going on in the story. But I'm glad you found it interesting!

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Akshita Taneja

@AkshitaWrites.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Aemy
Exactly and what wordss... wooowww👏
If i ever loved anything on television i can bet that it was never more than now, i am madly in love with Adiya and the acting... you cannot feel the relief i had when i realized that she was thinking of Adi, trying to take his name not Snake ... How relieved i am thinking that she is thanking adi in her senses not holding his hand thinking about Yash... I loved how Harshad portrayed Adi today i loved every bit of dialogues...I loved it when he said :Zoya main darwaza tour doun ga phir baad mein nahin kehna"
Though that was an intense moment but the dailogue made it a little lighter and 😉

Thanks for complimenting the writing! That's kinda what I love doing, hence the fanfic I started here. But really, Jennifer and Harshad were spot on today. I loved how Aditya's concern for Zoya started coming out as anger. The frustration of seeing Zoya in that state was clear on his face. And oh my god, the way he went crazy when initially, he wasn't able to find her. Such an emotionally wholesome episode, I loved it!