The Call of Destiny - AdiYa FF - Updated Chapters 4 & 5

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#191

Originally posted by: jaditi346
Update next part soon

Sure...stay tuned!! 😊

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Binzzz

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Posted: 7 years ago

#192

Aish. It was amazing as usual..u know worth for waiting..

Their talk from bus was heart touching...they found solace in each other...Arjun is a gem of person..perfect brother..

That balcony scene was beautiful..

So pooja is their common friend...interesting..

Totally loved it year...update soon...

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#193

Originally posted by: Monika545
Beauriful update
Thanks for pm

Thank you so much!! 😊

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The_RomancePen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#194

You have updated 😲

I am Shocked

A Bit bc Ryt Now

Will Read Soon

Thanks For Double update didu 😳

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Asif

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Posted: 7 years ago

#195

Awesome updates
Loved it
Liked brother bonding
First he gave her advice & her time to give adi advice.
Zoya finally relieved as her childhood friend is senior designer.
Pooja: common was person in Aditya & zoya life & she already started her mission.
Teaser was nice
Update soon please
Thanks for pm

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Sudha

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Posted: 7 years ago

#196

Thats a very good well planned story. Liked the pace of the story. Looking forward to more AdiYa moments... Great job, continue soon

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ikhtiyar

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Posted: 7 years ago

#197

2 chapters at once, omg! At least for a few minutes today, it gave me the much needed breathe of fresh air from the hecticness of the day. Was totally lost in the beautiful world you've woven with your words!

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#198

Originally posted by: Binzzz
Aish. It was amazing as usual..u know worth for waiting..
Their talk from bus was heart touching...they found solace in each other...Arjun is a gem of person..perfect brother..
That balcony scene was beautiful..
So pooja is their common friend...interesting..
Totally loved it year...update soon...

Hey Binzz!!

Glad to see your comment and happy that you are loving this story...will update sooner this time...stay tuned and keep supporting!! 😊

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The_RomancePen

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Posted: 7 years ago

#199

For Chapter 4

Gosh Let me Breathe Out

What an amzing Chapter Full of Emotions

Finally Adityha & Zoya had Found a Job

Adi's Words Hard Finally hit its Mark

Glad That Zo told him that Which makes him feel that atleast there was someone who got courage in his words

Adi's & Zo's childhoood is painful but atleast Adi had someone to call Family but Zo when she spoke about her Future with Yash it was heartbreaking

Adi is so protective A good sign of a Policemen I really wish he goes back to that

Arjun's mother desperately needs to understand the bond Arjun & Adi Share it is very rare we see such amazing bonds between step-brothers

Last Part was lovely Brothers are love

Awesome apart

For Chapter 5 😳

Oh mY god Didu This Chapter was just love

Enjoyed Every moments

My Adi is falling for Zo I guess

Zoya & Pooja Besties WOOW

I Love the bonds Between the Brothers

Loved it

Amzingg didu 😳

Edited by sh_aarohi - 7 years ago

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Aishwarya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#200

Originally posted by: asifiqbalsh
Awesome updates
Loved it
Liked brother bonding
First he gave her advice & her time to give adi advice.
Zoya finally relieved as her childhood friend is senior designer.
Pooja: common was person in Aditya & zoya life & she already started her mission.
Teaser was nice
Update soon please
Thanks for pm

Thanks a lot for your comment Asif!! Shall update soon!! 😊

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