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deepika

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Posted: 10 years ago

#751

Awesome update sim!!...
loved d whole update...
zain aaliya's conversation was so emotional...
aaliya was punishing herself...
I had tears in my eyes while reading dis...
u defined it so beautifully...
looking forward to d next update...
cont soon...

Edited by Deepika_Zaya - 10 years ago

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Crazy4HarshIka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#752

everyone mentioned amazing n blaa blaa but I would say this is mind numbing way to great.Mujhe aapke Sare Chapters Qubool Hai.

update ;)

lots f love

Jaya.

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manny136

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Posted: 10 years ago

#753

Great update, finally zaya united but in such heart wrenching circumstances. Aliya kept her wits and boy was she mad about what they did to zain poor guy when will it be enough ppl lol Poor aliya wanting to punish herself but in the end both feel each others pain. Though instead of arguing they should have hatched a plan to get out of their first lol Again zain is hurt and this too by getting shot hope he is fine and aliya takes care of him he needs lots of loving care. Cant wait for the next chapter.

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AnnRosewood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#754

CHAPTER 42

I believe that some people come in our life as blessings and some as lessons..and the same goes for stories..BIshq is a blessing because it doesn't take me away from reality,but does quite the opposite..it just takes a little closer to it,with every word.

And this chapter was worth the wait.."Saath rehte rehte yuhi waqt guzar jayega,

Door hone ke baad kyun kise yaad ayega,

Jee lo yeh pal jab hum saath hai,

Kal ka kya pata,waqt kahan le jayega.."

I don't know about others,but if you ask me,this was one of those chapters,which made the moments flash through my eyes..it was like revisiting all those moments..all those memories which had become too painful to resurrect in my mind..and experience the same intensity of anguish that came along with separation.

From the beginning of their journey through Beintehaa,and then beintehaa ishq..everything came reeling back to my mind..

This chapter reflected to what extent true love can drive a person..its rightly said that love is maddening ...its not blind..but hatred is..and when this maddening love gets shrouded by this venomous hatred,so much so that it pushes a man into the knee deep sludge of darkness ..breaks that person and not merely shatters him..when seeing him in pain bleeds someone else..that is when Beintehaa Ishq is born..

Love is not for the faint hearted..fairytale romances are...

Love is just about pride,white picket fences,and happily ever afters...its about those darker underlying shades too...and that is what BIshq is..

Trust me Sim,in the recent months<I have read my fair share of romance novels..but nothing had ever been so psychologically stimulating..so satisfying..and when I say this,I do not mean it to be a flattery..but this is the best story that has been written in this forum..and the fact that you had researched for this reeks out through every single scene..

And since my birthday is coming up..if someone would have asked me what I wanted for it..then my answer would be BIShq and you have given me the best gift possible through this chapter and in a greater sense through this story.

Love

Ann

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AnnRosewood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#755

CHAPTER 43

I can't think of anything that would do justice to this chapter..just there's this one thing that I would like to say,that if BIshq is ever turned into a script then I can vouch for the fact that Harshad and Preetika would take up on the offer..and your muse,the person who makes words flow from your pen is proud of you Sim..

Here are some lines that I stumbled upon..

The night is cold.
Kind of bitter. I don't know why ...

Probably it has lost its warmth.
Probably it is in pain, of something slipping away.

As if, trying to search for a lost treasure,
A treasure that's worth more than constellations,
A treasure that's worth nothing to anyone else other than the night.

The night is silent.
Kind of like a lament. For having become the night.

Probably it misses being the morning,
Probably it needs to mean the same dawn to someone's eyes.

As if trying to stash away all the hurt,
In a dark, empty corner.
As if trying to keep all those words on bay, that mean everything yet nothing...

The night is solemn.
Waiting to be the morning again. Waiting to be itself again.

Probably it wants to hold on to dawn, but doesn't know how.
Probably, it wants to love the dawn and its skies, in it's own twisted, selfish, dark way.
And it doesn't know how.

Probably the night, the silent, dark, cold night - wants too many things.
And doesn't know how to get any. That's why it is silent.

The night is lovely too.
And kind of ordinary. Among the more extra-ordinary nights.

Like every lover, it believed it is extra-ordinary. But it is not.
Today it has shattered its own reflection.

Cold. Solemn. Silent.
The night is, tonight.

A standing ovation to you Sim..and thank you for this story and for coming into my life...

Love

Ann

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KitkitMkb

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Posted: 10 years ago

#756

Toh jab mujhe chot lagegi toh dard bhi tumhara aur sazaa bhi ...

You know you have reached a point when you have understood a character and drown yourself into them .

When you can hear that haunted , emotionless voice of that broken man, a voice which narrate for that terrorist just the story of his life , but for him for her it's more than that it's their reality their truth .

When you know how it is to keep a hand of your mouth to be able to muffle your screams , your pain ...

When you can hear those chains , those heavy ones , binding him for no reason , keeping him apart from life , but why is the need to even try , he can't even try again coz when you are so broken some cracks won't change the pain .

When you know how it is to feel nothing becoming numb , coz you have been so close to pain embracing him like an old friend , he begged to feel he begged to Allah to feel anything and he knows that Pain Is the only thing that makes him Alive
Apart from her .

When you close your eyes like him when she hurts herself when you can hear that belt against her skin .

When you feel home when they are in wach other arms .

You know that these characters are your reflection .

I'm sorry I don't know if I made sense just Thank you I don't have anything else to say .

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arohi_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#757

Amazing chapter sim hats off to you, very well written.

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Megha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#758

It was an wonderful update

Zains pain was well expressed and ausomely written

Loved each and every line it was full of emotions

Finally Aliya and zain are together

Do continue soon

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MohabbatCrazy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#759

De rahein haath hum...

Pakad lo isse tum...

Na chorenge haath abb kabhi hum...

Saath chalte rehna hamare tum...

This chapter...I just have no words to describe it...the way Aaliya got in...the way they confronted each other...

Zain.

His ways to love are remarkable...he wanted to give her what she wants...freedom from his love but he knew the fragrance of his love would not stop from spreading. So he chose to unroot the fragrance and take it to somewhere it wouldn't reach her...he has her name on hs heart engraved,enscribed, embossed...and nothing in the world can fade it...but yes now it is his turn to make the decision to go with her or either to not choose her hand and hurt her more...

He has this fear of hurting her like she had a fear of getting hurt again...it's going to be a decision of words which will be needed to be taken in a short period of time...and I eagerly wait to see what it is...

Aaliya.

All of Zain's pain has been unveiled infront of her his past has been crystal clear...her love can now flow without any pebbles in the middle left unturned...She knows that her not being with him was the greatest punishment ever that could be given to him...

She is guilty of what she's done but the fact is that the guilt has unknowingly cured her because the guilt involved him leaving her...

At the end.

I await to great heights as to what will happen ahead...because Sim your writing is jus so hooking...you can never get enough of it...it packs so much in the littlest of words but yet...it seems that you just want to read it over and over again so you miss no detail...you miss no line...and you catch as much as you can from between the lines...

I await curiosly for what is ahead!