FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]last chapter -pg106 - Page 71

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow what an update(s) you said it was gonna be dark and boy it was. Aliya is losing control a lot lately im starting to wonder if this problem is gonna worsen and hurt her health as well. She is also starting to realize there might be something wrong with her. Zain going through so much pain is really hard to read and now its getting even hard for him to hold on. As for aliya her emotions are everywhere and heartbreaking to see her enforce all this pain and then break down afterwards. Aliya really needs help before she either hurts herself or someone else or is her hate just reserved for zain ?? Cant wait for the next chapter
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Posted: 10 years ago
Broken . He was , she was . But why would he go ? his Heart is already given , to her , going would mean to lose , himself in a world where hope does not exit . Yes , she hurts him , constantly , but she is hurting too , yes he is risking his heart , yes this pain is killing him , but going away , would not heal him ,no because he needs to feel even if it's pain .
Today , more than the physical pain , it was his heart who has been broken . Again . But that's true love ? I think . It demands all this , i think he is tired , because he do realize , that if he stays , her hatred will grow ,and he might lose himself in it .
Really looking forward to the next one , with Hope !
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Zainedil


Kiran

my hidden khara sona ...bang on ..i love you

Sim

Thanks I love you too😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Zainedil

Kiran
👏
i should make you my co writer you can tell me which dialogue works on the heart
love
Sim

Me and writer😆
Thanks for the complement
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Posted: 10 years ago

Chptr 28

Da..kya hua ...baat kar lo ..mujhe darr lag raha hai...as he saw her room ...things were lying haphazard ...bahut ghusse mai ho tum...zara shanti se baitho...

Zain ..tum jaate kyu nahi ...

Da...kaha jaao...mai nahi laut sakta ...

It waas a heart twister for me...

Aaliya's miserable condion the fight with her own thoughts is breaking somthing inside me

Wonderful job SIM👍🏼

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Posted: 10 years ago
Was very painful I can literally imagine what Aaliyah is going through
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was so intense really amazing poor zain hw much he has to suffer hope aaliya will soon be alright n they will live happy happy ;)
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chptr 29

yaa Allah tu kyu danda lekar mere peeche pada hua hai...kaha patane aaya tha ...aur kaha phir fas gaya 😆

, bacche tu mujhe bahar mil kahi tera murabba na bana diya toh mera naam bhi Zain Abdullah nahi🤣

Zain and his thoughts it was funny

BUt after reading the chpter I wanna to give a tight slap in Zaroon's face😡

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Posted: 10 years ago

Chptr 30

Kuch nahi, mai gir gaya tha school mei , he lied aur behosh ho gaya tha shayad...Aaliya ne aakar bachaya...nahi toh shayad saari raat wahi pada rehta, hosh hi nahi tha ...

I was visualizing this scene while reading the pain and hidden taunt in his words and Aaliya's guilt it have made my eyes misty😭

The way you have described his shattering dwindling hopes it those lines were great👏

The way Aaliya is fighting with herself its heartbreaking SIM her pain agony everything is limitless

and nothing is in her control not even her own emotions

Continue soon

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: zayacrazy

Pyaar ki saza pyaar hai...

Nafrat ki saza nafrat hai...
Magar mere pyaar ki saza nafrat kyun hai...
Tu itni majboor kyu hai...
Mein itna mazloom kyun hoon...
Ke iss pyaar ki saza ashk- dard hai...

I needed so much of time to gather my thoghts for this chapter! You know? This chapter has kept me occupied in thinking how one feeling of 'Love' has an impact on a thousand unknown emotions! Zain and Aaliya! Are Zaya! No matter what! But the situation is that...now Zain is in a dilemma to step forward or backward... and Aaliya's emotions have overflowed, even without her will she's falling for him...

The hit with the scale and him sitting there till she came was heartbreaking...I know Aaliya has gone through alot but she fails to understand Zain went through double! He faced himself pushing his love! Life snatched his dad...but also guilt was twice as much! Aaliya went through humiliation, but for a period of time she didnt sense the pain as she had forgotten...mentally it had an impact but it was unknown! To Zain he faced his 'Love' being in humiliation because of him, being physically dmaged because of him and now being mentally and emotionally being tortured because of him-His Love as in Aaliya.

But Zain has been through all this in greater heights! And in heights which is limitless!

I had been Zain once...maybe still am...I choose to wait with unsaid words whereas Zain says as well as does...the only difference between I and Zain is he expresses and I dont- like Aaliya I fear...

What is precious to me about this writing is that the characters are a part of my life! They unknowingly state my life...in many ways! And thats why I can assume who you are Sim...maybe I don't know you but this story makes me wonder maybe I know what is termed as Between the lines of you, of Sim!

I am grateful to be a part of this amazing and marvelled piece of writing, reality, masterpiece, feeling and emotion...whatever you term it as!


Sakeena
Your are the only one who will probably make me write my next chapter
Words that play with heart
I hve nvr ever seen the depth in my story, apart from Ann's vision
Hers is a more writers view tht I appreciate beyond words
Yours is a heartfelt one, a version so close to reality that sometimes mkes me wonder if it's ur or my story
At the end I will reveal something which might change all of ur perspective
But till Thn I love ur vision
Yes it's an extreme love, ppl feel this so strong tht sum times staying n holding on to tht one thing tht hurts us is more agreeable Thn walking away
It is a subtle line that differentiates a good story frm a master piece, the day most of u see beyond the pain n suffering , get the core of the love this will reach its destination
It's an abstract version with darker shades
I know this has been dark n might get more darker, but it had all the shades of love in it
Plethora of all relationships tht we will ever encounter
Thnks for being my inspiration of the day
I write for people like you who look beyond words feel more Thn Wht others feel
That is my strength my love for my words
Will mke sure ur today's words will place me in a mood to write more, it's been a busy day at work
Love
Sim

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