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Posted: 10 years ago

Chapter 34

Antakshari...

An evening round of antakshari was decided ...as they burnt the firewoods ...

Zain saw Aaliya shivering ...he got up to give his blazer ...when Altaf had already given his ...he smiled and sat back...

Aalisha started the first song ...looking at Zain ...with all her love ...as Aaliya watched with jealousy, helpless in love ...losing him to someone ...maybe that's what god wanted ..so that he will be happy with a sane person who will not hurt him ...

Intaha ho gai, intazaar ki Aai na kuchh khabar, mere yaar ki

Ye hamen hai yaqeen, bevafa vo nahin Phir vajah kya hui, intazaar ki, intaha ho...

Baat jo hai us men, baat vo Yahaan kahin nahin kisi men

Vo hai mera, bas hai mera Shor hai yahi gali gali men

Saath saath vo hai mere gham Mein mere dil ki har khushi men

Zindagi mein vo nahin to kuchh Nahin hai meri zindagi mein

Bujh na jaaye ye shama, aitabaar ki...Intaha ho...intezaar ki

K ...Aaliya gao gao ...jaldi La coaxed her ...

As a sad Aaliya sang with a deep pitch ..intently looking at Zain ...whose eyes were still fixed down

Koyi fariyaad tere dil mein dabi ho jaise...Koyi fariyaad tere dil mein dabi ho jaise

Tune aankhon se koyi baat kahi ho jaise

Jaagte jaagte ek umr kati ho jaise...Jaagte jaagte ek umr kati ho jaise

Jaan baaki baaki hai magar saas ruki ho jaise...

Har mulaakat pe mehsoos yehi hota hai...Har mulaakat pe mehsoos yehi hota hai

Mujhse kuch teri nazar pooch rahi ho jaise

As Zain continued her song ...not letting Aalisha protest ...as Altaf sulked

Raah chalte huve aksar yeh ghumaan hota hai...

Raah chalte huve aksar yeh ghumaan hota hai

Woh nazar chupke mujhe dekh rahi ho jaise...

Woh nazar chupke mujhe dekh rahi ho jaise

Ek lamhe mein simat aaya hai sadiyon ka safar...

Ek lamhe mein simat aaya hai sadiyon ka safar

Zindagi tej bahut tej chali ho jaise...Zindagi tej bahut tej chali ho jaise

Is tarah pehron tujhe sochta rehta hoon main...

Is tarah pehron tujhe sochta rahta hoon main

Meri har saas tere naam likhi ho jaise...Meri har saas tere naam likhi ho jaise

Aalisha broke the tone Ja...jaa Altaf ..aur haa ise beech mai koi nahi gayega ..cutie tum bhi nahi ...

As Altaf looked at Aliya and crooned

Jab bhi koi ladki dekhu, mera dil deewana bole...Ole ole ole, ole ole ole

Gaao taraana yaara jhoom-jhoom ke haule haule...Ole ole ole, ole ole ole

Mujhko lubhaati hai jawaaniya, masti lutaati zindagaaniya...

Maane na kehna paagal mast pavan sa dil ye dole

Ole ole ole, ole ole ole...Ole ole ole, ole ole ole...Jab hi koi ladki de...

Aalisha couldn't stop giggling ...but both Zain and Aaliya were in their own world

Da...as Aalisha shouted Aaliya looked shocked ..and his La laughed ...

Zain Da se gao....as Altaf admired Aaliya

Zain looked up towards Aaliya he sang ...again with a higher intensity now

Doorie Doorie Doorie...Sahi jai na Sahi jai na Sahi jai na Sahi jai na

Khamoshiya yeh seh na saku...Awaz de kay mujhay tu dai jaa sukoon

Khamoshiya yeh seh na saku...Awaz de kay mujhay tu dai jaa sukoon

Doorie Doorie Doorie...Sahi jai na Sahi jai na Sahi jai na Sahi jai na

Adhura hoon main ab tere bina ...Adhuri mei zindagani reh jayegi

Adhura hoon main ab tere bina...Adhuri mei zindagani reh jayegi

Har raha mai tu...Aai nazar

Katta nahi ab akelay tanhaa safar

Har raha mai tu...Aai nazar

ka ta nahi ab akelay tanhaa safar

Doorie Doorie Doorie...Sahi jai na Sahi jai na Sahi jai na Sahi jai..

The words stopped as Zain took out his purse and starred hard at her snap ...when La tried peeking into...tumne beech mai addhoora choda ...haa ja...chalo meri turn hai ...

Zara Tasveer Se Tu Nikalke Saamne Aa

Meri Mehbooba...Meri Mehbooba Meri Mehbooba ....his smile intensified looking at La now

Bhala Kaun Hai Vo Humein Bhi Bataao...Ye Tasveer Uski Humein Bhi Dikhaao

Ye Kisse Sabhi Ko Sunaate Nahin Hain...Magar Doston Se Chhupaate Nahin Hai

Chhupaate Nahin Hai

The last song ...got tears in Aalishas eyes as she went back in her thoughts ...

The day she had walked to fetch his clothes from his suitcase, after he was abused by a mad women ..she had seen his and Rheas picture ...her bridal attire had told her a different story ...the next day when he had met her ..she had questioned him ...and finally he had revealed a past ...she was shattered ...as he slowly spoke ...

Zain ...usne tumhe itni zillat di...phir bhi tum bas muskurae jaa ahe ho...mai nahi dekh sakti yeh sab ...

Aalisha ...yeh maine khud chuna hai ..meri har sazaa uska diya har ek chot har ek nafrat ..har ek dard ...yeh meri khud ki marzi hai...mai bas usse in sab cheezon se azzad karna chhata hu

Par Zain...usne tumhe sab ke saamne bezzat kiya,kya tumhe jara bhi buran ahi lagta ...

Kyu lagega bura ...who joh kar rahi hai ...usme uski kya galti,who toh khud nahi jaanti uska dimaag yeh ghussa yeh nafrat kaha se laa raha hai ...

Agar usse nahi maloom toh tum bata do...Rehman uncle bata denge ...hum uska ilaaz karenge

Wahi toh kar raha hu...uska diye eke k zakhm uska ilaaz banega ...mera har ghaav usse ek pal bhalle hi tode par ek dard se chutkara dilayge ..

jaise jaise uska ghussa badega waise uski nafrat bahar ayegi ...aur jis din who chot mujhse jyada usse chuyegi tab who mujhse nafrat nahi kar payegi ..

Kab tak yeh silsila chalega ...kab tak aise bezubaan bhugtoge ...Zain bolo

joh uska dimaag kehta hai ...mai bhugat tha hu aura age bhi karunga ..yehi pyaar hai ..

Nahi Zain ..yeh dard hai..aur isse rokna hoga ...yeh tahes nehas kar dega...mujhe tum bahut pasand ho ...mere dost ho ...

Aalisha tum uski bahut aziz ho..aur maine dekha hai tumhari care ...khusnasseb hoga jisse tumhara saath milega ...

mai bas uska hu ..marunga tab bhi uska hi rahunga ...tumhare feelings ke saath khel nahi sakta ...waise bhi tumhe mai shayad bata hi deta ...

Zain ...maine tumhe pasand kiya hai...pyaar nahi ...mujhe shayd pata tha ...

Rhea ka call aaya tha ek baar Mumbai se...tumhare bare mei keh rahi thi...naam nahi bataya ...par jab uski tasveer dekhi tumhare suitcase mai toh mai samajh gayi ...Mumbai wale uska dost ...mai toh pehle din his samajh gayi thi ...jab tum dono jijak rahe the ...apna rishta batana mei ...

She was crying ..aaj yeh friendship band laayi thi...he looked at his hand that was bandaged ..aaj nahi par yeh jala ghaav bhar jaaye toh zaroor pehunanga isse ...

Wada karo jab tak tum uski baho mai nahi aaoge tab tak nahi utaroge isse ...

hum saath mai chalenge zain ...tums ek rishta ban gaya tha ..dard hua ..par mujhe pata hai mera cutie hazaro mai ek hai ..aur Rhea ...bhi ...aur aisa saath sirf khuda likhta hai ...

Accha ..uski birthday ki planning to ho gayi... aur waise mujhe tumhe kuch batana hai ..she blushed ab mera bhi ek kaam hai...karoge ..

He smiled ...bolkar toh dekho ...zaroor akarunga ...

As the present flashed in front of her eyes ...and she continued singing ...

Tere Darde Dil Ki Dava Hum Karenge...Na Kuchh Kar Sake To Dua Hum Karenge

Na Kuchh Kar Sake To Dua Hum Karenge...Dua Hum Karenge

Tadap Kar Aayegi Vo...Tujhe Mil Jaayegi Vo

Teri Mehbooba...Teri Mehbooba Teri Mehbooba

Teri Mehbooba Teri Mehbooba

As the song ended ...Aalisha was thrown back to the reality ..it was a game ..she and Zain had been playing for long now ...she was rock solid support to him ...waiting for the day he will be free of her band ...

As Zain looked at her band and kissed ..unaware that Aaliya was crying ...

SIM

Dosti ke mayne aaj tumne badal daale...

mere zindagi mai jab tum muskurate aaye ...

ab toh chalo mai bhi dard nahi hota ...

mera sar jab tere khande pe hai sota ..

Pre-cap: Zains surprise coming up next

Edited by Zainedil - 10 years ago
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Chapter 35

Akhri Tohfa ...

Zains eyes ..never left Aaliyas ...as the wind blew stronger ...they decided to go to their tents ...he saw her tears that had streaked down ...her pain ...her wish ...

As they all went in their respective tent ...

He did stand outside her tent ...near the flickering flames, the fire ignited in both their heart, the pain of separation, ignorance, unfulfilled love, hidden jealousy...flames that lept higher as fragments of orange sparks ..blew towards him ...

He looked in her tent ...taking a deep breath he finally walked towards her ...

Rhea ...she looked up..smiling finally he was talking to her ...the night was still not over

Davai ...her face fell...as Aalisha looked away ...still hiding her tears for her friend ...

He started walking away ..she ran outside and called him...

Aaj kuch cheeze bhool nahi rahe ho...referring to his rose and I love you Da ...his daily routine..he didn't show her his smile...and turned back...

Ab zaroorat nahi hai..Gulab ...roz ..kachre mai hi fekti ho...so aaj maine wahi rakha hai ..she looked down,

Apne tent ke bahar dekh lena ...dustbin mai rakha hai ...uski jagah wahi hai ...haqeekat wahi hai ...words that pinched her raw pulse ...one bite at a time

..aur jaha tak kuch bolne ka saval hai ...aaj nahi ...

aaj meri sazaa nahi dogi na tum, birthday hai na...isliye mujhe choot di na...subhah se kuch bhi nahi bola...nafrat nahi ki ...

Par mujhe toh adad hai...yu kaho ab toh lat lag gayi,

jab tak koi jurmana bhugat na lu ...neend nahi aati ...

toh maine hi aaj khud koh sazaa di...aaj nahi kahunga ...tumse ...

aaj who baat is chote se dil mai hi rahegi ...

he put his closed fist on his chest

bechain hai ..machlega bhi ...par shanth ho jayega ...nahi aayega tumhe tang karne ...aaj ka jurmana iska ..theek hai ...the words burnt her ..her illness had made him cold ...all her hatred had stoned him ...he wanted to suffer even when she was normal now...a shiver ran down her spine...to what extent had she hurt him ...

Good night ...

As he walked away ..he again called her ...she looked up

Rhea ...Aaliya se kehna ...aaj usse bahut miss kiya ...theek hai ..bye

She stepped back to her tent and got under the blanket sobbing ...walking away will be painful ...but she had to ..he deserved peace ..around her there was only hurt ...just 5 more days ...and everything will be over ..he will be set free ...when she will walk away ..

Half an hour later ...she heard his footsteps again

As the wind ...intensified...she saw his shadow ..walking towards the dense jungle ...

a restless Aaliya walked out when she saw him walking away ...as he turned towards the tree ...he disappeared,

she searched for him ...but he was not there ...she silently pleaded, the darkness now blinding her ...just like the way she had let him sit in a room with darkness and silence ...he was making her experience the same pain ...

As she still wriggled her eyes to search for him, in the darkness a stone fell in the near by bushes and the fire-fly with their glowing wings sparkled in darkness ...the glowing natural light of their wings drove away the black shadows of pain ...

as she saw a cake ...a very beautiful one ...nearby ...on a stone ...with an unlit candle...

The magic of the fire-flies glowed on her face as she went near the cake ..

I love you Aaliya, was written on it ...she smiled ...and lit the candle ..holding the knife and looked around ...

He was still hiding ...she understood ...it was his way of celebrating ...just like she was there in that room...and he could feel her but not see or hear her voice ...

she was standing there ...in silence ..yet not in darkness ...his presence was felt ...his love could be touched ...yet his physical presence evaded her ...stranded her ...giving a feeling of helplessness ...how secluded he was kept ...how harsh were her ways of pushing him back ...

the tears fell...more of guilt now ...

The silence mocked her ...

There was no song no claps ...only silence ...as she didn't see him ..she still waited for him ...but he didn't come ...he would not show his face ...she had shunned him far too many times ...and he was afraid now ..she understood his pain ...

so she went ahead and cut the cake, singing for herself ...crying sobbing

...tasting it ...it was the best thing she had ever eaten ...there were no hands to feed her a bite ...just like his hunger ...when he had eaten all his meals alone waiting to be fed ...and she had cocooned her hatred around him...her mind fragmenting with images now ...

next to it were two notes, a gift and a rose ...as she held the rose in one hand she opened the gift ...

Inside was the pendant she had seen when they gone to roam Jaipur at johri bazar...the one that he seen the price tag for ...bahut tutions diye ...tab kharid paaya hu ...pehnogi toh accha lage ga ...ek ek rupaye ki keemat jaanta hu ..mere mehnat ki kamiye se ...mera pehla tohfa ..sirf meri biwi ke liye

The heart winced in pain ...he had worked day in day out to buy something so precious ...this might be the only possession she would ever have ...in her life ...she kissed it and went to read his first note ...

Maine banaya tha yeh cake...accha hoga ..tumhare birthday ke liye...aur agar nahi bhi hai ..toh bhi kha lena ..jungle mai kutta dhoondne nahi jaa sakta ...

She had no control on her tears as the words faded from her sight ...he learned cooking for this ...the images of his failed attempts ..her talks ...all came flooding back ...as they splashed her eyes with varied emotions...his love was sprayed on her face now...the splinters of wood ...from his palm were pierced forever in her eyes now..

As she wiped her face and took the second note ...

Da..batana toh nahi chahta tha ...par aaj kuch chaiye tumse aur sirf isliye bata raha hu,

maine roza rakha tha aaj tumhari sehahat ke liye ...tumhare haaton se todna chahta hu ...agar ek chota sa piece is bawarchi koh khilaogi ...toh meri rooh koh sukoon milega ...

Jaanta hu ...shayd bahut jyada maang rah ahu ...par khwaish thi ...bas aaj ki raat tumhare kareb baith kar guzaru ...phir najaane ...yeh waqt wapas aaye ya nahi ...

Agar javab haa hai toh ...palat na ...varna ...bina palte hi laut jaana ...aur mai nahi ghussa karunga...na hi koi zidd ...ab shayad baat samajh mai aa gayi hai ..zidd se zindagi nahi chalti..

Koi zabardasti nahi hai ...

Tumhara ...aur sirf tumhara shauhar

Zain

She folded the paper with her trembling hands ...the hurt of her soul ...now mixing with her helplessness ...and turned back...as he waited in anticipation ...and smiled ...

She smiled back as he walked towards her ...the glistening candle ...that was threatened to be extinguished ...she held her hand around it ...

he went on his knees next to where she was sitting as she cut a piece of the cake as he recited the dua ...for breaking the fast ...

pouring a glass of water she held the glass as he sipped ...it...he saw her tears ..her love ..they wont lie ...

maybe there was still a brightness somewhere as she gave him the date(Khajoor)...that he had slipped close to the cake ...her touch on his face was enough to rejuvenate life ...the one that was dwindling from his hands ...

Kyu rahe bhooke ...subhah se sehri bhi nahi ki na ...tabhi chai, lunch, dinner mai kuch nahi kha rahe the ...she was crying now

as he smiled ...ab adaat ho gayi hai ...

agar khuda mere itni si bhook se meri zindagi bhar ki bhuk mitaye ga ...toh kuch bhi kar lu ...

choo sakta hu ....

the words plunged her from the cliff ...how will he survive after 5 days ...she nodded

He wiped her tears ..aaj nahi ...aaj tumhara janamdin hai ...mere liye bahut khaas ...he recited the dua and blew on her face

When she gave the cake he held her hand ...taking her second hand on his heart ...

Sirf tumhara hai...sirf timhara ...isse dhadkana sirf tumne sikhaya ...

Jee chahe kitna bhi todo ...par isse tanha mat chodna ...ruk jaat hai tumhare bina ...

She fed him the cake as she smiled ...the fire flies still drizzled their spark as they sat close to each other ...looking at the dark sky ...the scattered stars ...and the faint moonlight ...

Some love stories ...are meant to be tested theirs was one ...and they both were unaware of the big game that destiny was about to play with them ...
he smiled looking at her ..and she smiled at him...a respite for one day ...as the brain and heart mellowed down in the shadows of love ..hate and pain waited away ...just not today ..as this was their day ...

SIM

Ek mudat se tarsa hu iss ehssas ke liye ..

.rooh bhi ab jism se bahar khadi hai tere pyaar paane ke liye ...


Pre-cap: A single event that changes the course of their lives ...will Aaliya stick to her decision ...or will Zain make his own ones ...the thrilling love story passes through the final test of trust, sacrifice and just love ...

Edited by Zainedil - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was soo soo heart touching... emotional chapters... aaliya gt to know abt her illness n decided to walk away :( ...bt where ? ...she is helpless... n zain's surprise was sooo sweet ...I had tears while reading that ...bt aaliya shouldn't go ...wat abt zain ...I hope rehman will tell abt that to him ...pls pls cont soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Plzzz zain aliya ka reunion krwado plzzz
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Toofa tujhe kya doon mein...
Dil toh dein hi chuka hoon mein...
Abb terei zimedaari hoon mein...
Abb toh tere saath hi rahunga mein...,

Sim!
I'm currently speechless!

These 4 chapters have taken a breathtaking rollercoaster ride!
Zain.
He with unsaid words gave her more then one present...he gave her a ton! Her birthday was a memorial he left no flaw to perfection his love...his bond is so strong and his love has the strongest pillars ever...the pain and torture this love caused keeping it all aside his passion is remarkable! He wasn't angry on her hw was just playing her cards on herself...but yet being silent he said some of the most priceless wishes to her...Oh and Alisha...two words for her. SHE'S AMAZING!

Aaliya.
Her heart has melted...but that dosent mean her desicions will change...the 'form' I have something in my mind that I predict. It seems quiet horrifying to predict what she's done and I jist hope it's not what I'm thinking. She couldn't bare his silence...and the bueaty is she went to him. She fulfilled his wish though it was her own birthday...

Their.
Love is so mesmerizing they have the abilty to speak the most amazing things to eachother without using words...or actions. Jst sitting together looking at eachother does everything...

At the end.
Both have taken or will take some decisions. What I fear is I hope they don't end up loosing theirselves this time...

This story has travelled through so much revealed feelings inside me that were known but unidentified they had no identity to themselves...
Sim, this story has helped me take some decisions for myself...it's like I was destined to end up reading this and you were destined to write this. It feels destiny had gotten us to meet! And I thank you for this unknown revealation you've narrated to me about myself...

May this feeling of 'Love' of 'Ishq' touch the hearts of every soul and make it to be the best and most unique lovestories the world or history has ever seen! And finally. Some unsaid wishes from my heart to yours!

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Posted: 10 years ago

Iam really speechless ...i dont know wat do I say...
Every compliments are less for you...you are really amzing...i loved u story very very.much...
Anyway..it was written beautifully...loved it...where.aliya is going aftet five days 😭 ..zain celebrating aliya's birthday was so sweet...alisha is very good ..she is a true frnd...i lyk her also..zain kept roza for aliya was so sweet...it was very heart touching update...cant stop my tears...its very emotional..aliya shud nt live zain..hope rehman tell zain abt aliya...
I luved all 4 chaps...
eagerly waiting for next chap..
Plzz cont soon...
Edited by harsh_pree - 10 years ago
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I remember i asked you one time , if that kind of love really exists . You told me , yes , it surely do . But , today , Zain Abdullah proved it ! i really don't know what to say , coz it will never do justice to what i feel really ! I feel pain for both , i have a smile for both , i love them both ! And Aalisha is a sweetheart ! But for me Zain and Aaliya , it's Zaya , they were nothing without each other , and they are nothing without each other , the day it will publish , i will be proud to say that i read such a masterpiece !
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow beautiful update the emotions shown were so deep and the zaya scenes were so lovely and heartbreaking. Finally wow aliya knows whats wrong with her poor thing and now she is gonna take the wrong decision , i think i know what she wants to do with herself especially when she mentioned rehman lying about her condition and the forms. He better do something before its too late. Poor zain so much love and patience and when aliya actually wants all his attention he is pulling away. Glad la found out the truth, and the bday surprise was sweet though altaf being there lol i guess he and la can become friends later on. Things are coming to head somethings gotta give. zaya need their happy ending after all this. cant wait for the next updates
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful updates
Really emotional updates
Zains gift was heart touching so LA knew it all and was support ing zain was good to know
Do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
beyond amazing chapters I have never read it so perfect u r so intense writer I just love ur piece of writing waiting to know about the twist ;) plz cont soon

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