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AnnRosewood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#151

Emotions. The very thing that make us human. You can have happiness, pride, excitement, relief. Every emotion considered good. But what would you be if you didn't feel hurt, or pain, or despair? You can't have the good without the bad. There is no light without darkness.

Anger

It is the vexing of the soul
A swelling of the veins waiting to explode
It's like the rushing of blood to the head
Saying things, you would rather left unsaid

Anger
I am beside myself
Tossing and frowning, I lost my head
I need to stop and find me again
a calming of the soul and tranquility within
and cease this war that rages in

Anger
let it not be said
that I unleashed the monster under my bed
anger, please stay out of my head
Control, Calm and Purpose
That's my request instead

And when this anger subsides, an empty barren land of broken memories,and hearts is left behind..a time when you look back and see that you're left with nothing but the dying embers of a past you can never get back..

It was Aaliya masked love that brought her to the clinic...it was the haunting screams of her never ebbing pain which made her push him away..

It was the promise of never leaving her,which makes him try a little harder even if it means losing himslef in the way..

Its the story of love like no other..its the glare of anger and the balmy concern ..its the pang of guilt..and regrets of pain and hurt and betrayl...of broken memories and trust..of the tiny sliver of hope..which is trying hard to keep its head above d water..its a marvellous pice of work..Chapter 27 just reinforces the fact that Aaliya ..who is just breathing...is the washed away version of her old self..and it may take an eternity to get her back..but Zain's love will stand d test of time..through tears and 'forced smiles'..

Love

Ann

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AnnRosewood

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Posted: 10 years ago

#152

chapter 26..

I wish to become a writer like you one day..but i don't think i can ever be half as good as you..

Bcoz no matter how much i try..i can't do it..

you know why..because you're special.not just at your craft bt also as a person and it reflects trhough your work..

And through the bindings of the relationship in this stroy..from Gabbar to gabbar chachu...from 'uss Zain se door rehna'..to gabbar chachu trying to mend the chasm between zain and aaliya..you define every relationship beautifully..

You once said dt you wait for my comments...

but i never told you that i wait to comment on your chapters..

that I wait for your updates..because my day seems incomplete without them..

love

Ann

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MohabbatCrazy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#153

Hey Sim...

I've been reading but lost time to comment...

Coming back...A hug.

The warmth of a soul to our body is like the warmth of the summer...relaxing. It feels calm...sometimes unsaid words and plain actions are enough to show and explain a thousand things...

Aaliya.

Her way of taking him there to tell him with atmost request to 'Get out' is poison in the form of cake...She is trying to keep herself from not harming him any further or revealing her love...she's in the shackles of the past. And past is the enemy to the present!

The more you rewrite it the more you end up erasing!

Zain.

His love is identified but not accepted. Truly maybe yes I have come across someone like Zain. But maybe he did not come across Aaliya...the feeling of being known yet unknown to who you want to be known can be more then getting hung up...it can be what we term as 'guthan!' And the suffocation strangles the soul...not the love! But the soul, where this pure feeling takes birth!

Both of them are incomplete withot eachother! Especially Aaliya! If today Zain leaves...he'll be staisfied with his tries...but Aaliya will be left behind with guilt! Of not stopping him! Ths story has taken a major pace and emotion ride through reality! I wonder how much this discloses you as a person Sim! And who are you standing as 'Zain' or 'Aaliya'?

Haan, aayein the tum jeetne humein...

Par hum hi na pehchaan sake humein...

Na jaan sake kya pa ke khoye humne...

Na sunn sake woh pukarein jo pukare humein...

Vada kiya tha tumne humse...

Intezaar mein vahi miloge humein...

Toh phir kaha tanhaai mein chalein chodkar humein...

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Zainedil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#154

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb
Empotions . It's about motions , it's about feelings , it's a tale which needs to be felt . Guilt , Fear , Hatred but deep down Inconditional Love , Aaliya is an erased version of herself , it's horrible how pain can damage the soul of a person . But these two chapters prove one thing if he goes away from her she would not be able to beAr it was a small moment yet it spoke so much , another particularity is the characterization be it La , Zain's true friend or Rizwan the one who was with Zain the first time he met Gabbar . Beintehaa Ishq it's about love true love !

P.s if you could make a cover for Bi Ishq what would it be like ?

Saleha

so true each word ..its all about varied shades of love not just zaya

well cover ..have no clue ...but more like she holding a book sitting in the garden reading it and he ulta latkofying from the tree with a rose in his mouth 😆

love

Sim

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Zainedil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#155

Originally posted by: lovablegirl--
wow I just loved it very well written u describe their emotions so beautifully no one can write as intense as u write I'm in love with this ff n who thought its a humiliation of love then he/she don't know what is love Sim u r the great writer cont soon n thanks a lot for all d pms sorry for commenting late
sanjana

Sanjanna

thanks dear for the support..ya like evn bigger stars face ..i am a very small fish in a pond filled with frogs ...who is being targeted ...people who have no clue about what i write ...they have no business then pull others in the murk that they keep on spreading

I am a very strong and dedicated harshad arora fan ..i have no shame in saying that I am proud of him ..if I get inspired to write its because of him, low mentality thoughts extrapolate it to my love for Zain ...they simply fail to understand that Zain and Harshu are not the same ..yes i love them both ...infact i love zain more than harshu ...but i will never do injustice to any other BI character.

If you have read my story all charcters are justified be it surraiya, fahad,nafisa, aayat,gulam,rizwan,shabana and rehmaan ...new characters like La, altaf, abdul chacha ...all have a place ...

above all its aaliya ..her ride her pain ...too..and in some chapters one is stronger than another

I dont need to tell ppl this , you all can read it ...but there are some blinded ones who love to see hate ..i really pity their mind frames ..cause such ppl are nevr evr happy, they have nvr created sumthng that they can be proud of. I have ...and you all are my strength ...

love you loads

Sim

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Zainedil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#156

Originally posted by: zaya.fatima
Chapter 23
cold storage mai toh khuda se keh rahi thi meri jaan lijiye meri shahura ki hifazzat karna, aaj unse bolne, tum jhoot bol rahi thi...nahi parvaah hai meri, mai thand mai jam bhi gaya na phir nhi tum nahi piglogi ...ab shayad yeh baat par yakeen hota jaa raha hai mujhe ...
Aaj ki takleef maine khud chuni hai ...toh khuda se iske liye sorry mat bolna ...
Awesome lines Sim👏
The whole chapter was awesome this Da aj buht jala hun ...👍🏼

Kiran

my hidden khara sona ...bang on ..i love you

Sim

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Zainedil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#157

Originally posted by: zaya.fatima
Chapter 24
Oh My God SIM it was so so so heart wrenching
Both Zain And Aaliya have gone through so much pain, this word seems a very small one in case of ZaYa's situation
I'm speechless after reading this chapter
Their pain is as immense as their love is😭
For me there is no couple as heer,ranjha or laila,majhnu is symbol of pure love but My Zain and Aaliya my sweet ZaYa are❤️❤️❤️
I was of this view I am and I will be always
and after Reading beintehaa Ishq my believe is strengthened more or I should say that you have rejuvenated it👏

Beintehaa Ishq is truly a master piece and you are a tremendous writer the way you have emoted the feelings of each character it always touches my heart deep.
I cry along with the characters and if the update is funny than I laugh whole heartedly as well😳
Thanks for writing such a beautiful story on our beloved ZAYA and a bundle of thanks for sharing it with all of us

Kiran

thank you so much

you have summed it so well

its all about love ...

your words matter a lot to the writer in me

love

Sim

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Zainedil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#158

Originally posted by: zaya.fatima
Chapter 25
SIM this line when I read was twisted my heart
...Da..huggie do na ...ek baar ...
But the lines which came after this ufff Aaliya's situation was constantly twisting my heart I felt a sudden urge to cry hard😭
She hugged him tight ...crying her hearts out ...why was he making it difficult for him as well her ...she didn't want to see him hurt or broken ...yet she couldn't control her urges ...the anger and hatred would gush in ...as though someone had acidently opened a dam ...flooding her mind with visions ...she felt trapped in her own body now ...
It is the power and magic of your words that you have on me👏
Mind blowing work SIM keep it up👍🏼
And I have a request a very old one if it is feasible for you then plz Come back with an other work on ZAYA after ending this
I can understand that you have a busy schedule but plz if it is possible

Kiran

heart twister naa

thank you so much

yes will be back soon with a new story ...cant disappoint you all

love

Sim

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Zainedil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: StarsOnEarth
Chapter 25-
Can't say anything,
read it yesterday but I was unable to tell you how amazing it was!!
Like,that line,''..Da..huggie do na ...ek baar .. '' almost broke me!
AMAZING may be a small word but I tell you it was just so wonderful!

Chapter 26 and 27-
Your DIALOGUES!!!!!
They make me feel as if I am watching them,they make it so realistic.
It was mind blowing,amazing,superb!!!
I am seriously out of words!!
Continue soon😊

Nidhi

the best line ...and dear i want to thank you ..

that day i had decided i wont write any more chapters ...

your post ...saved me ...

owe these ones to you

will always say ..i have a very special bonding with you ...

i cant say what t is ...but there is a strong connection ...

stay blessed

love

Sim

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Zainedil

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Posted: 10 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: zaya.fatima
Chapter 26
aap shayad jaante nahi 15 din mai kitni cheeze chub chuki hai in haton mai ...aap nahi aate toh shayad wahi pada rehta ...thanks Chachu ...hum dono ki jaan bacahi aapne ...
My ZAYA are so adorable their love their pain although the hate everything is unique and heart touching❤️
Rehman acted as their savior but real piece of their souls lies with each other their pure and selfless love always brought tears in my eyes😭
Amaizing work SIM

Kiran

👏

i should make you my co writer you can tell me which dialogue works on the heart

love

Sim